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Fake Reflection

Summary

It's been five years since Avenged Sevenfold came into power, and things couldn't be better, but it could always get worse.

Kevin McNicholes is the new police commissioner in town, with his eyes set on Governor, and then the White House. Taking down Avenged Sevenfold might just make that happen.

Kimberly Reynolds is a well respected cop, following in her fathers footsteps. She just made Detective, and received her first assignment....Undercover in the Avenged Sevenfold Mansion with her partner Shane. But the further in she gets, the more she begins to doubt the real reason she's there. And the closer she gets to the closed off leader, the harder she finds it is to do her job.

There's a new gang in town with a goal of ultimate power. The only way to do that...Take out the gang in charge, become the gang in charge

I do not own Avenged Sevenfold, anyone affiliated with them, or any other famous person in this story. It is entirely fiction. OC and plot are mine. Big thanks to Kimmie for letting me use her in my story. Hope you like your character :) Sequel to
No Pulse Inside of Me

Title Credit: Critical Acclaim/Avenged Sevenfold
This will be entirely in third person view.





Characters

Detective Kimberly Reynolds

Detective Kimberly Reynolds

32. Undercover Name: Jena Richards. Youngest of five children only girl. Not a shy person, smart, quick thinker, sweet, and takes her job very seriously. (Actress used: A.J. Cook)

Detective Shane Halifax

Detective Shane Halifax

32. Undercover name: Micah Jarrett. Kimmie's partner and best friend since childhood. Reasonable, funny, easy-going. Mind set: All gangs are criminals. Has a thing for Kimmie. (Actor used: Mark Wahlberg)

Johnny Christ

Johnny Christ

Jonathan Seward: 31. Doctor

Kevin McNicholes

Kevin McNicholes

36. Police commissioner. Power hungery and lothes Avenged Sevenfold. Arogant with a dangerous charm. Calling all the shots on the take down (Actor used: Josh Stewart)

M. Shadows

M. Shadows

Matt Sanders: 34. Leader of Avenged Sevenfold

Richard Halifax

Richard Halifax

57. Police Chief. Very close with the Reynolds family, and looks at Kimmie as a daughter. Shane's father. Caring, smart, and logical. (Actor used: Tom Selleck)

Synderella

Synderella

Tammy Haner: 32. Bait, general member, Married to Synyster Gates. Very observant of the people around her family. Don't mistaken her kindness for weakness. She will protect her family by any means necessary.

Synyster Gates

Synyster Gates

Brian Haner Jr.: 34. Shadow's right hand. Married to Synderella

The Berrys

The Berrys

34. Jason and Matt: Laywers and Henchmen

The Rev

The Rev

Jimmy Sullivan: 34. Technical Expert, Master hacker

William Boyd

William Boyd

55. Secretary of Defense. Manipulative, persuasive, and deceitful. Shadows is the thorn in his side that he intents on removing. (Actor used Malcom McDowell)

Zacky Vengeance

Zacky Vengeance

Zacky Baker: 34. Weapons and Explosives Expert. Poor Zacky always at the bottom because his name starts with a Z...Damn the alphabet

Chapters

  1. Chapter 1

    Meet the Cops

  2. Chapter 2

    Go Away Asshole

  3. Chapter 3

    Interview

  4. Chapter 4

    Two Weeks Earlier

  5. Chapter 5

    Present Day

  6. Chapter 6

    First Day

  7. Chapter 7

    Someone's breaking the rules

  8. Chapter 8

    I will put a bullet in you

  9. Chapter 9

    What are you doing

  10. Chapter 10

    Find something, anything

  11. Chapter 11

    Loose someone?

  12. Chapter 12

    Two can play this game

  13. Chapter 13

    This is exactly what she didn't want to see

  14. Chapter 14

    Too bad they're too late

  15. Chapter 15

    You look exhausted

  16. Chapter 16

    Looser streaks through the club

  17. Chapter 17

    Sunday, Funday

  18. Chapter 18

    Perfect way to end the day

  19. Chapter 19

    What the hell is she doing

  20. Chapter 20

    I never want to see or hear from you again

  21. Chapter 21

    You can't do that

  22. Chapter 22

    Damn it, I wanted to do that

  23. Chapter 23

    I'm going to watch yours fade away

  24. Chapter 24

    This is kind of long

  25. Chapter 25

    I thought you were dying

  26. Chapter 26

    That's where you're wrong

  27. Chapter 27

    He's a better lover than you ever were

  28. Chapter 28

    Anything good in there?

  29. Chapter 29

    Stay out of trouble

  30. Chapter 30

    You think this is a joke

  31. Chapter 31

    It's time for him to play his own game

  32. Chapter 32

    That's not what happened

  33. Chapter 33

    Don't let the door hit you in the ass

  34. Chapter 34

    I'm sorry

  35. Chapter 35

    Tick Tock, McNicoles....

  36. Chapter 36

    Time's up

  37. Chapter 37

    Something's not right

  38. Chapter 38

    I'm gonna rip your throat out

  39. Chapter 39

    You'll never win

  40. Chapter 40

    Don't you fucking die on me

  41. Chapter 41

    Another long one :)

  42. Chapter 42

    You're all fucked

  43. Chapter 43

    I have no idea where these long chapters are coming from :)

  44. Chapter 44

    Closure to the Chaos

  45. Chapter 45

    One week later

  46. Chapter 46

    That's dumb

  47. Chapter 47

    Tell me what you want

  48. Epilogue

    Three years later

  49. NEW STORY!!! :)

Comments

@xSilverPearlx

Thanks i'm glad to be back :)
Well i got married then we went the US for our honeymoon. LA, Anaheim, Vegas, New York and Washington. Had an amazing time over there but now it's back to normal.
Thank you!
Well i just finished what is up so far and i am loving it! :)
I'm going back over the draft i wrote of that new story i was going to write and i'm tweaking a few things and then i will post it as well as continuing the other one i have on here.

Deeks27 Deeks27
12/22/14

@Deeks27
Hey!!! Glad you're back :) :)
I was wondering where you disappeared to.
Congratulations!!!
And Thank You happy you liked it. Hope you like the next too :)

xSilverPearlx xSilverPearlx
12/22/14

I got married and had my honeymoon so the last few months i've had no time to come on here. Today i come on and i got to read the last six chapters and i absolutely love this story! Beginning to end it was such a great story and the ending was perfect! I've started reading your new story now. :)

Deeks27 Deeks27
12/22/14

@g0ldenheart_rebelfist
THANK YOU!!! I have a new story started too, if you wanna check it out. Would love to see you there :)

xSilverPearlx xSilverPearlx
11/18/14

just finished this story, both were awesome ! you're amazing at writing. glad I came across this and the first (: