Darkness Surrounding - Comments, page 15

@Kimmie
@DaphneG
@Pink Fly Swatter

U girls are awesome!
Thanks for the lovely comments! Give us a lot more :P
Another update will be coming soon!

Another update!! Yeah!! This is easily my favourite story, I'm hooked.

Brian is pretty pissed with Em, it's not fair him blaming her for getting shot - if he wasn't kidnapping her, she wouldn't have screamed, he wouldn't have been shot.. Sorry Brian, this ones on you lol.

Maybe Em needs to be abit more of a bitch to him, he dishes it but can he take it served back?

Poor Zack, guess there'll be no action for him, or will he go against Matt? After all he was with her first, must be frustrating not being able to use that against Matt.

And Jimmy, aww he's so considerate, knowing what an arse Brian can be and not wanting to leave Em in his wrath. Wouldn't surprise me for him to bring the girls a hot chocolate with whipped cream and little marshmallows, girls love little marshmallows lol

Brian got shot??! Hope he gets well soon. And I'm sure he will because Em will be taking care of him:)
Matt was nice with Jolie, that's good. I think they'll get along well......
And changing in front of Matt? What will Jolie do?

Ha! I definitely would have guessed that if my mind wouldn´t be constantly clouded by another man.... What can I say, I can´t help it :P

To start with that certain man.... Mattie, oh my dear dear Mattie..You playing the leader card on V? :D Really not fair, but hey.... what can V do about it ;-) And you... my man... you will need to be the tough leader... I have this feeling these girls will be too smart for the nice approach orrrr you will have to get in her pants immediately and make her wanting more, not even wanting to leave anymore... Those are the options, my man...

Brian... oh my god Brian... You are such an ass when you are a. Hurt and b. Not getting what you want. Man, man, man, he is pretty funny though. I hope Emery will give him a run for his money and not obey him easily :D

All I can say is, ouch poor Brian, but then he is involved in a kidnapping so he probably deserved it.. But a gunshot! you can't just leave it there! Hope none of them have been shot? Or maybe Matt has arrived on the scene and it is a deterrent to stop Emery from running and to intimidate her to cooperate?

I'm anxiously awaiting more :)

Awh Matt! For being the big boss your are awefully obvious :P Oh, Oh, Oh, Zack probably know what time it is :D And I mean, he will have a very mad girl at his hands now that he kidnapped her.

I have a feeling the boys will have to start all over with the charming the girls... Kidnapping someone tends to have that effect on people, hahaha.

Hmmm.... the shot.... I don't know who it will be, but I will throw an idea in here...it's one of the boys and the girls will take care of him.... I'm very bad at predicting :P

I think Matt's a little jealous of Zacky here. So, Em thinks Brian's one of the guys whom her father chose for her?
And she even saw her sister being kidnapped. So she hit Brian in the balls? I found that quite funny:p
Can't wait to see what happens next!

This story is going to be the best for me, because damn, I like my Matt bossy :D I love how it seems to suit him to be this bossy, damn!

That's why I'm feeling a little sorry for Zack, because we all know what will happen when Jo sees Matt, she will have no eye at all for the V man... Awwwhhhhh, poor Zack....(How do things like this always happen in Mei's stories? :'))

Can't wait for the rest, but this chapter was amazingly written girls, little action, little planmaking... I like it!

@Pink Fly Swatter
@LadyRevenge
@DaphneG

Awwwnnn.. thank you guys!
So glad you are enjoying it and for the compliments :)
We gonna update soon, dont worry!
And the action will begin ;)

Just come across this,, and... Wow! I'm in love with this story, can't wait for more, in fact I'm demanding it! Wonder how their plan will work, and how brian and zack will react when they find out who Em and Jo are.
Again, awesome! Keep up the amazing work :)

I'm just going to sit here and patiently wait for an update

Just come across this,, and... Wow! I'm in love with this story, can't wait for more, in fact I'm demanding it! Wonder how their plan will work, and how brian and zack will react when they find out who Em and Jo are.
Again, awesome! Keep up the amazing work :)

I'm just going to sit here and patiently wait for an update

Another story already...and I LOVE IT! Keep up the awesome work ladies. <3

Getting interesting...
But it'll be more fun when they kidnap the girls. Can't wait to read that:)

@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@Aggie

Glad u liked it!
More to come... ahhh... I mean... now :D Just updated!

Have fun with it! The action is about to start soooooon :)

Uhhuuu i feel that their ways will cross again soooon!

Pooor guys... it was almost easy!

But Matt ohhooo real boss, I likeeeee it!

I'm just wondering where it all will bring us :)

Good Job ;)

Oh God Matt being all bossy.... Drool! <3
Amazingly written chapter!

Poor Zack and Brian... so close... Poor girls... so close too....
Lot of frustration will be going around :D

But let's talk about shutting the club down... Daddy doesn't take half measurements huh?

This is just what I needed, a new story. I really like it, and it's awesome as always:)
And why is Brian pissed all of a sudden? Did he get what he wanted?

@Kimmie
@Aggie

Awwwnnn... Thanks my lovely ladies!
More to come soon :)
Glad u are enjoying it already, it's gonna be a wild ride, believe me!! :)
<3

Ohoh so much action is coming here, I can see!
So far I can say it'll be interesting! Daddy's girls don't want to fallow his rules and I like it, but it also means they will drag them into some troubles!
Avenged clan uhuuu hahah Now boys just wanna have fun, but what if they will find out who is their fun for night? Will they?

And had to laugh at district 5 etc thing cause it reminds me about 12th districts in The Hunger Games hahah where is their Capitol? And who's their President Snow? It seems like Matt is the boss there hahah

Let's wait and see :)

Yay! New story! :D
This is going to be interesting....

Who is the real bad guy, who is doing what for which reasons? And those girls... Oh man... they are going to get themselves into trouble! Can't wait to see how this is all going to develop!

Nice one girls, good for putting another story to my library ;-)