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Darkness Surrounding - Comments, page 12
Finally, Brian and Em!!! That was.......amaaaaazing!!!
Aww, Matt and Jo are so cute:) I like it how they're trying to keep their relationship a secret.
What's with Zacky? Didn't he forget Jo? I hope Matt notices that and takes some action.
Yay! Matt got out! *sighs in relief*
And oh man, him and Jolie are so deep in.... That smut! Holy fuck! And them getting into a secret relationship? Well.. Great idea, because that always works out so good :P ;)
And seriously... Done with the putting off Brian, put your money where your mouth is.... the sexual tension is not to bear anymore! :o
More smutt! Gotta love it. So glad Matt's okay and made it out. Hmm I think Emery seems to have fallen into Brian's charm more and more. I bet she really wants a taste of him...but not as much as he wants a taste of her.
I'm so happy Matt's safe:):)
And he and Jo are together now. Yay!!!!
Now, Brian and Em....please!!
Update soon 'cause I badly wanna read the next chapter!!
Holy shit! Hell is going down.
Damn, seems like Gates and the girls got out, but what the fuck about Matt? What about the fearless leader? What about the guy that made sure the others are safe, seemingly...What about my man, girls!? Huh? Tell meeeeee!
A lot of action going on I see, didn't expect that. But it was fun and really exciting! I hope Matt will get home safely. But my instincts say that he'll get hurt and Jo will be there for him. Who knows what might happen next, except you girls of course!
Noo why must the chapter end like that. I was hoping to hear that Matt made it out alive after fighting the robbers off. Well hopefully once they all go back to the house (With Matt being okay), there will be no more distractions on the way back. Another amazing chapter by the way! :)
Ooh, the make out sessions were awweesome! This is why I never go for shopping with my brother and his girlfriend!
Uh oh, someone got a gun? Is that Brian or someone else??
@Kimmie
Matt's shirt riding up?! :'D You made me laugh louder than I should in an office!!!
You should state something real, not just ur fantasy, hun!
Thanks for the comment <3
@LadyRevenge
Lots happened in the mall, right?! Someone didn't do their research right *cough Johnny cough*
Are Paganos men in the mall, trying to bring the girls back?
Will Matt and Brian let that happen?! Or is it something completely different? :O
@Pink Fly Swatter@DaphneG
So we found out who followed! Read the update, dearies!
And let us know what u think about the situation nowww!
Thank you!
Oh man, quite a lot happened huh?
I think Em's friend won't rat her out, she is her ally when she is escaping her fathers eyes, so I think she will keep her secret safe, but damn... this is some fucked up shit.
And mannnnnn that make out was sooo hot! :D
The gun... Hmmm... Maybe it's just Matt's shirt riding up? Or Brian felt the need to protect his property? Hmmm, don't let us wait to long before to we can find out!
Wow what just happened? First Emery's friend follows her and Brian to the bathrooms just to talk to her and now Jo's ex runs up to her and Matt wanting to talk though he turns out to be a douche bag. Jo shouldn't get mad at Matt. Carter was being kind of a dick. Well I think Tracy and Carter will both try to rat the girls and guys out. Or maybe Tracy is a good friend and won't rat out where she saw Emery but Carter probably will since he seems like the jealous type and would do anything to get revenge I'm guessing. Hmm it's possible one of Pagano's men is at the mall and happens to take a gun out.
Come on guys, you're doing pretty bad at this kidnapping thing; girls and shops, how could they not know they would escape their sights the moment the shops were in view haha.
Who's following Brian and Em? And is someone following Matt and Jo too but they've been to distracted with each other to notice?
Whats going to happen! Update again soon as I can't wait to find out.
Wow, shopping was fun!
Yay, Em and Jo finally saw each other!
Hmm, troubles coming up?? Who is that woman?
Need more soon!
Oh oh oh... Those good for nothing criminals... :P
Boyfriend material? Yes.
Criminal material? Not so much
They are too damn soft, and way too distracted by these girls *shakes head*
Now... some action coming up, who is the girl that is following? And what more will come their way... Let's see!
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Finally! That was some hot hot smut!
But hey, we've waited long enough ;) :P
I definitely see some trouble up ahead with Matt's jealous streak, in combination with trying to keep the whole thing a secret... That is going to be fun!
And will Brian be able to keep it in his pants now he got Emery once?
12/4/15