Darkness Surrounding - Comments, page 13

Oh Zack.... just give it up man... she has lost her heart already... I mean... You will never stand a chance against that man, never ever... But hey... that might just be me ;-) :P

I'm wondering if those girls will do as told, I think they might not be obedient enough ;-)

Oh and Brian... finally put your money where that mouth is? :P

Yay, the shopping chapter's coming closer! Finally, Em and Jo will see each other:)
Update soon!

Awhhh Jimmy! Damn! That guy is loving too hard. Do everything too hard, I mean, he will be in trouble if he falls for her, really. I mean... That will only get his heart broken, that would be so sad...!

And a little action! That was some dangerous shit going on and now Zack needs medical help? Uh Oh. Wondering how that will go... Seeing Matt has definitely marked his territory now.

Bring on the shopping trip, can't wait! :D

Ahhh, I could totally imagine Jimmy behind the drums and playing like anything! It's cute how he has developed little feelings for Em.
I think Brian's jealous of Jimmy. He should be, I think. Because Em's more comfortable around Jimmy. So....

Where is the punishment Brian was supposed to give Em?!! I've been waiting for sooooooo long! Don't make me wait anymore!

Love Jimmys view, he seems so lost on what to do with Em, it's adorable!!
The girls are finally going to see each other! Will they get any say on what clothes to get? Have some sympathy guys, let them have some comfy lounge wear lol
Can't wait to see how this goes :)

@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@Pink Fly Swatter

You girls were fast with your comments :D
I like that...
And because of that.. I'll update nooowww :D
See if you will be as fast as the last time ;)

Ahhh I've been offline for a while and missed so much! Jimmy embarrassed around Em, Jo tricking Zack! But I've caught up again now. Yay!

I can almost hear a chant going on 'smut, smut, smut' lol

I'll just sit here anxiously awaiting the next update.

Oh. My. God!
Seriously, that was about time that happened...

But honestly... I'm a little disappointed in Matt as a leader... Matt, my man, how can you run something like you do with an attitude like that? Damn man....

I'm wondering if Jolie really is attracted to Matt or if she is just playing a game... but I figure... this won'be the last time they'll be 'getting to know each other' ;-)

Great chapter! <3

Ooh, Jo and Matt having some moments?? Where's my Brian??
Please update sooner this time!!!

@Kimmie
@DaphneG
@LadyRevenge

So you girls think that smut is finally coming your way, huh?!
Well, who is breaking the tension first?! Brian and Em or Matt and Jo?
Who cant keep their hands to themselves?
Or did we just fool you again and nothing happens :P

Thank youuuuu! <3

Gah the sexual tension. This needs to be taken care of ASAP lol. A shopping trip for the girls sounds like a good idea. I'm sensing some lingerie being purchased besides regular clothes. Maybe if it works, they can both seduce Matt and Brian enough to where they can possibly make a get way. I wouldn't blame them if they don't want to leave, I'd probably stay there too. XD

Damn! Why did you have to stop here?!
Update soon!!!!

COME ON! You know the rules!!
You NEVER EVER stop in the middle of, or on the verge of smut! NEVER EVER!!!

UGH!

You even know how frustrated I was in the plane? I mean, I was reading this and then.. nothing, but my flight still took at least an hour! Mannnn...

Better update soon! :P

@Kimmie
@DaphneG
@LadyRevenge

Thank you ladies for commenting and sticking with us !
Gonna update now! Stay tuned for more :)

Wow so much sexual tension and possibly some hot "punishment" going on. Do I hint some jealousy going on with your best friend, Brian? But ooh and Matt...him being angry like that...is a bit of a turn on. (Did I just say that? lol). Sad how Zacky totally fell for Jo's trick. The poor guy. XD

Weird kidnappers.
It seems like both Matt and Brian are dying to have a taste of the girls. If it's like that, don't make me wait anymore. I wanna read that chapter asap.

Jimmy fell into the trap? But thank god he didn't make any move on Em. I hope Brian and Jimmy won't fight after Em. And Matt caught Zack and Jo??
God, I laughed so hard when Matt saw Zacky and Jo in that position!

Update soon, please:)!

Okay... she is never ever going to get out... there are 5 men in that house, probably even more in their posse ;-) I hope for her Matt won't be too mad, but hey... I hope for us that he will be mad... because damn, how hot will that angry smut be?! :D

Jimmy, what are you doing man?? Brian won't be happy at all if he will find out... But hey... I hope for you he wont... for us... oh yeah! He is so close in snapping, it will be even better if it will be jealous smut :P

Yes.... I'm in desperate need of some smut, the tension is killing me! :P

@LadyRevenge
Hmm.. will Jo's plan work? Or are you right that Matt will catch her? Can she find Em?
Or will Zacky notice what's going on?
And Jimmy, the savior of the situation, right!?
Thank youuu!

@DaphneG
Yess, Jimmy showed up! And he seems to like the little blonde princess, huh?!
But Brian doesnt like that one bit... will Jimmy be taking away his plaything?!
What do u think?
And will Jo's plan succeed? Will she find her sister? A way out?
Thanks dear!

@Synysterlocexoxo
Yes... run! :P
What do u think will she make it?!
Thanks for reading and commenting :)

:o go jo go! Lol

Yay! Jimmy's here!! And, does he like Em?? Seems like that:)
And Jo? What a superb plan! She tricked Zacky and ran away. What if someone catches her? Or, what if she finally finds Em??

Can't wait for the next chapter:)