Darkness Surrounding - Comments, page 14

Wow. Once again, this is why I like Jimmy. The voice of reason. Brian is being too much of a dick. But omg...Jo's plan and her seducing Zacky. Hope it works out. Then again, she may get caught by Matt. Knowing how he may be pretty quick on catching her.

Another great chapter ladies. ^_^

@DaphneG
@Kimmie

Thank you girls :)
We just updated, let us know what u think about this one !!!

What the hell are these guys doing? They are supposed to be criminals, they are supposed to have kidnapped those girls! Come on, put them in a room without windows and locks on the door and go on with your lives, push some food and water around the door every now and then... Rooms without hot men that want to jump on them at every occassion they have. Be good abdcutors.

Man, Man, Man, do I have to spell everything out for the guys?

Oh ps. this great advice I'm giving is only because I think the sexual tension is almost to much to bare :p

Ooh, the sexual tension between Matt and Jo.....I really don't know what to say! I mean, he kidnapped her, right??
And Brian? He's.....bossy and cocky and..god, I have a long list of names for Brian. If I start writing them here now, it's gonna take a long tine to finish!

Loved the chapter:)
Oh, Em chose Jimmy to be her guard? That's interesting.Really excited for the next chapter!
And when is Brian gonna punish Em? I've been waiting for a long time to read that chapter.

@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@LadyRevenge

Thank you ladies!
Glad you liked it ! We will find out more soon ;)
Stay tuned! :D

Brian Brian Brian...what is up with you man? This dominate side of you is a bit much yet kinda sexy lol. Can't believe Matt completely spaced out and forgot that Jo's been in his room after he got out of the shower and was changing. I don't blame her for wanting him.

Oh Brian what are you doing, man? :D He is one big grumpy pile of man in this story. So angry, so frustrated, so dangerous... Boy, this is going to be fun.

And damn Matt, get your balls out of your purse. I mean the whole pretending you didn't remember she was there was cute and all (:P), but you are a leader that is losing it now, so get on it and be the fearless leader you are supposed to be... And that is an order (see what I did there? :P)

Oh, Brian's in a mood of punishing Em? Can't wait to read what kind of punishment he's gonna give her....or the punishment might turn into a reward for Em??

It was funny how Matt didn't realize that Jo was in the room. And he just let the towel drop! Ooh, Jo was lucky to get a peek:)

Loved it, hope you girls will update soon!

@LadyRevenge
@Pink Fly Swatter
@DaphneG

Yeayy :)
We love ur comments! Great to have you on board ;)
Will update soon ;) Soooo watch out!

I'm finally caught up with the story! Jeez Gates is a pretty tough on Emery. I understand he got shot because of her but wow, chill man. As for Matt..ooh I can definitely tell he has a thing for Jolie. I bet he's extremely mad after finding out Zacky possibly banged her. Got a tough fight on his hands but it shouldn't be too hard to fight him off...right? lol

Aww, Matt is soooo cute!
Brian just got pissed getting Johnny's post for a while. God, Brian and his anger, both are daaaaamn hot!
Em tried to run away. But got busted! God, who caught her?? If it's Brian, then I'm sure he's gonna scare the shit outta Em by just screaming.
But I hope that whoever entered the room, behaves politely with her:)

Aww Matts really falling for Jo, is he really going to be able to follow his own rules? You're going about it all wrong Matt if you think this is following the rules haha.

Ahh I was getting so hopeful for Em, I really wanted her to escape, who caught her? I'm scared if it's Brian.

Don't worry about delays in updates, I'm terrible at updating my stories, but it was worth the wait :)

@Kimmie
@Pink Fly Swatter
@DaphneG

Sooo 2 for Matt and 1 for Brian ;)
Hahahah :D
Thank you ladies for the comments, can't get enough of them!!

<3

Ooh, Johnny let the cat out of the bag?! Matt's quite pissed now....
I feel like getting kidnapped, only if my kidnapper was Brian:)
Aww, Jimmy is being so nice to Em. But Brian's getting pissed about it.
Can't wait to read what Matt's gonna say next!
And I hope Jo and Em meet soon. They'll calm down a bit when the see each other, I guess.

Em stood up for herself, you go girl haha. Loving the feisty Em, maybe she should set some ground rules for Brian.

Oh oh! Matt now knows, Zack and Brian, you better run.... Fast! Matt may have some strong words for you, and now he knows will he move Emery to one of the other guys rooms to stop Brian from.... Ahem... Finishing what was started at the club?

Matts approach is much more sincere, he's even going to get Jo a toothbrush, that's love right there haha!!

Oh man, those are some weird kidnappers... sleeping with the girls they kidnapped :')

Can't wait to see how Matt will react to the little fact that the boys already had their almost way with the girls.... I can't imagine he will be very pleased :D This is going to be sooooo much fun...

And really? You need to ask me which approach I like best?

@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@Pink Fly Swatter

You guys are the best really :)
Thank you so much for the comments, we really enjoy them and your feedback :)
We need that, u know?!
Sooo Thank you!

Gee Brian, calm down lol.

Yeay, another awesome chapter, your updates never disappoint, I'm going to copy Kimmie and grab some popcorn too, I'm sure the next chapter will be interesting, it looks like Matt may be close to breaking his own rule.. Naughty, naughty ;)

Hope Brian will start to take it easy on Emery, poor girl is petrified already with the current situation, she doesn't need Brians lack of anger management classes too, haha.

As always, I can't wait for the next update.

Amazingly written... bla bla bla ....
Matt is so cute... bla bla bla....

:P Kidding :P

Oh Brian... shakes head... He is so grumpy... man oh man... Is it weird that I kinda like him like this? :D He is such an asshole, haha. I'm fearing he will get even worse when he finds out Emery is afraid of him. Will he need a little Jimmy reprimande to be a little nicer, or will he do it by himself... It's going to be a bumpy ride and I'm getting my popcorn at the ready :D

And Matt... my dear dear Matt.. didn't know you would let yourself go this easily... You really think it is a good idea to lay in one bed with the girl? You really think it's a good idea to show your soft side already? Man... because for a leader of a wellknown gang... You are one big softie :P Brian acts the part more than you...

But as always... i don't really believe things will go like I said...You two have a way of messing things up... *stares you down*

Oh lord, Brian and his anger.... But still, it's kinda hot though, Brian being all angry and cranky. Poor Em, she's getting terrified every time Brian screams. And each time Brian calls Em a princess, I don't know why, but I really feel like laughing. And even Em's pissed being called a princess.

Ooh, Matt and Jolie sharing the same bed? I feel something is gonna happen when they wake up, maybe......