14 Days - Comments, page 6

Good god, woman. How is it possible that you capture EVERY type of relationship so perfectly? Sibling banter, tension between could be’s, girlish best friend gushing. In awe of you always.
Youre bang on. Girlfriends always seem to pull out the subconscious! It’s a blessing and a curse ;)
I looooved how simple but heart-tugging “hey big brother” was. Fuck. You’re a god and I’m not worthy.

@kiss my sas
Haha, would Adam in Evie's world be so bad?

@RamonaFoREVer
Fuck!! I need to come up with a plan, asap!!!

@kiss my sas
It's not bad! Being disorganised makes for good fun, like Adam!!

@RamonaFoREVer
Siblings, am I right?! :P

Is it bad to say that I'm curious, too? :P
Gues we'll see what my brain concocts!! ;)

Ahhhhhhh!!!! This was so cute! I love love loved! the bickering and banter between Evie and her brother, and the reunion with Halestorm was so sweet <3

I'm so curious now as to how Brian and Evie will go forward? I need to knooooooow!

@Kimmie
Unfortunately no writing time this weekend (damn real life!) but hopefully more in a few days :D
So glad you're digging this :D

I want morrrreeeeee :p

@RamonaFoREVer
Hahaha, right?! I thought Jimmy was super cute in that chapter!
Glad you loved the chapter though! So here's another ;D

Hahaha, how many times can Jimmy say Slash? I loved that little speech!
Sneaky Oz reference <3
Yes Evie, listen to your subconscious!
I love how casually Jimmy is talking about Brian and Evie because he wants Brian to be happy :)
Brian is a moron, I would switch seats for free if I was going to first class. He's $100 dollars down now, fool haha!
Awwww, Brian is such a sweetie!

I loved this chapter!!

@Nicole
I'm sorry!! I don't like breaking hearts :(

@Buggaloo
Hahaha, I aim to please! I don't think I could pull the same punches she does. She's a wizard!!

Awww! This chapter gave me the floaty heart feeling that fyction denied me. Thank you for restoring my faith in humanity!!

My heart is slowly breaking. :(

@AGirlIKnowNamedLarisa
Thank you!!!
I know, it is gunna suck :(

I love it. I’m sad to see what’s going to happen when she goes home though :/

@fyction
NOOOOOOOO!!! Dont take the love away!!!
Jesus, that is a good point. Hashtagged. Hash tagged. I think it stays as one word, right? I am putting that in the 'too hard' basket!

@kiss my sas
All love gone. Should have hash tagged. Hashtagged? Is it still one word when you change tenses? I guess so, right? Hashtagged?
Drugs are weird.

A) Whatever drugs you are on, I want some :P
B) This is possibly the nicest thing that has ever been said to me. Ever! I am absolutely dying, blushing, and feeling so loved!
In awe of me? I am in awe of you!!! YOU ARE TOO NICE!!!!!!
Also, the part about the hashtag made me properly laugh!!!
I totally forgot to hashtag this chapter! Fuck!

A well timed guilt trip has been a proven motivator in the past ;)
Im glad I can be your slave master because god damn does it ever pay off. There’s a sexual joke in there somewhere but I’m too hopped up on meds to find it. I digress.
This story has always been, and will always be, my fucking favourite. This story is my Jimmy; just holds a special place that, while all the others might be just as sexy and wonderful, can’t be rivaled. So I’m glad you didn’t abandon it because then my heart would be so, so sad. Please don’t make my heart sad. Bad things happen.
You know the hash tag.
You write the tension between Brian and Evie so perfectly. I fucking adore him; the way he knows he’s stepping over a bound and knows she’s grinding her gears trying to work it out, but just is smug as shit about it. Like it’s no big deal; super casual.
Incredible.
In awe of you always.

@fyction
Oh no, youre sick?! Thats shitty!! Hope youre actually resting and letting yourself get better! Sorry for nearly killing you!
But thanks, I fucking love hyper Jimmy. He is wonderful!
Argh, all the love right back to you, missy!! I swear you kept this story going. So many times I wanted to just stop writing, but your subtle hints kept me feeling guilty enough to write :P