14 Days - Comments, page 15

Ohhh i love everything you write... so just do what feels good :)

I loved it! I also have that problem when I write the Berry Brothers. They seem so flirty and natural with everyone thats hard not to write them a romance! haha Anyway, can't wait for more!

Great 1st couple of chapters, looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Hmm... wonder why Mr. Gates is distant around Evie? Can’t wait to see what’s going on in his head! Great chapter and excited for the next chapter!

Yay! You are back!

#1. That pic of Brian. UNF.
#2. I like this premise! I’m excited to see what you’ve got in store.

I really like this so far! Can’t wait to see where it goes!