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14 Days - Comments, page 13

@kiss my sas
This chapter made my heart happy. Brian’s note. Ugh. UGH. AUGHAHGAHAHAIGHHJHHHH.
perfection. Fuckin Zacky.

fyction fyction
1/11/19

@fyction
hehe, your reaction makes me happy :D
I am trying, I promise!! Trying really hard to get it out of my head and onto 'paper', but sometimes the words just hate me
Yes, Z is being quite the little mischief fairy :P

kiss my sas kiss my sas
1/11/19

God motherfucking dammit, woman. The simplest of gestures have my heart rapid fire beating. “Please?” AUGH. Your writing is perfect.
Two updates in one week. I’m greedily eating that shit up. Keep it coming ;)
I loved Zacks little ditch there. Smooth. God damn I love this story.

fyction fyction
1/11/19

@J.J.
Thank you!! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment :) Means the world to me!

kiss my sas kiss my sas
1/8/19

Great chapter as usual :)

J.J. J.J.
1/8/19

@fyction
Ok, ok, I get the hint! I don't think I can live without Blair Peterson! She is too good for this fictional world :P
It's already on the bucket list :P now I just need to get a passport :P
Stahhhpppp!!! My face can't handle all this flattery!

kiss my sas kiss my sas
1/7/19

@kiss my sas
Okay but my soul can’t handle it! I love the Brevie dynamic and I need them to fall madly in love for fucks sakes. You’re killing me. And if I die, well... I bring Blair Peterson with me. ;)
The holiday is awesome! If ever you get the chance to travel to California, I highly recommend you go. It’s insanely beautiful here.
You will always be eloquent as shit. It’s just in your nature. I bet your grocery lists are enthralling. I’d read them.

fyction fyction
1/7/19

@fyction
Ok, just dying over here, all the blood is in my cheeks you are making me blush so hardcore!
But I hope you are having an awesome holiday!! I will pretend not to be jealous as I look out the window at work at a concrete jungle...
Hahah, that is true. I definitely owe you for the Haven on tour thing... god damn it!
I will hopefully have another update by the end of the week (just depending on a few family things). Just remember that nothing good comes easy ;)
I will try to remain 'eloquent as shit' :P I love it!

kiss my sas kiss my sas
1/7/19

@kiss my sas
Omfg that’s the best thing I’ve heard all day. I read this from my hotel in California and it was easily the highlight of my day, which is saying something because Huntington is insanely beautiful.
LOL. Fine. No apology necessary. But I will say, I gave you Haven on a tour! Come on! You can’t put me through the ringer like this. Don’t you dare have her pull further away or I swear I’ll straight lose my mind. I’ll start planning my obligatory vengeance ;) for the record, you’re breaking my heart beautifully. Eloquent as shit. I god damn love Evie.

fyction fyction
1/7/19

@fyction
I would apologise, but the amount of feelings you have made me feel? This pales in comparison :P
And be impressed with me, I am working on the next chapter now :D Look at me, being all proactive!

kiss my sas kiss my sas
1/7/19

Why do you have to do that to my heart? I’m having feelings and they’re your fault.
God damn your words are addictive. I think I might just love you.

fyction fyction
1/7/19

@Kimmie
Thanks! I actually meant to post it on Friday, but then got inundated with family life. Oops! So delayed is better than nothing, right?
Hehe, I was wondering if people picked up on that. I should have known you guys are too smart!!

kiss my sas kiss my sas
1/7/19

What a great way to start the new year with a new chapter! Loved it! And the plot thickens ;)

Soooooooo Evie got all her stuff but forgot her bra? Nice surprise for Brian :D

Kimmie Kimmie
1/6/19

Love it!

jojojojo jojojojo
12/25/18

Definitely not boring. Excited for more updates ;)

J.J. J.J.
12/21/18

@Kimmie
Thank you!! It makes me happy that I still have readers even though I post so shittily :P
I love a good build up :P

kiss my sas kiss my sas
12/21/18

@kiss my sas
I know the feeling! I was just just saying, don't worry about the story... it's great! I always love your show build up

Kimmie Kimmie
12/21/18

@fyction
Haha, I am glad you enjoyed that line :D
Naw, thank you!! I am so so so so happy you are still enjoying it and still with me after my shitty upload schedule :P

@Kimmie
I am trying, I swear!! It is just so hard to get inspiration sometimes :(

kiss my sas kiss my sas
12/20/18

I lovvvveeee it! Dont worry!
Just update more ;-)

Kimmie Kimmie
12/20/18

There is nothing god damn boring about this story. At all.
Mister Cranky. You kill me.
As always, your writing is beautiful and your story is addictive.

fyction fyction
12/20/18