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@kiss my sas
Man, there are so many gems in there. Everything you write is so painfully beautiful. If I could write a fraction as well as you do...I don't have a thoughtful end to that sentiment. That's probably the problem ;)
Brian inspecting her tattoos, getting all but too close.
"He hadn’t realised how close he had scooted towards her while he was taking in the ink until he finally looked up,tearing his gaze from the tattoos and to the woman they were tattooed on, to find himself face to face with Evie, mere inches between them." That whole fucking thing had me god damn swooning. SWOONING I SAY.
I'm sorry you're sick :( I hope you feel better soon!
@fyction
It is early :( hubby got up for work and I couldn't get back to sleep cuz I am sick and feel like the living dead, so I gave up and got up. Sitting here drinking my tea, about to dive into some updates :D
But you just made my day by quoting those lines. Argh, I love you!! I feel all warm and fuzzy now :D
@kiss my sas
Wtf are you doing alive so early? Isn't it early there? I'm pretty sure it's early there. You're fucking with the normalcy.
K but seriously. "You disappeared on me again"...the subtlest dialogue is just tugging at my cold, dead heart. "...flashing him the blank screen of her phone before placing it on the tabletop next to her"...That visual is so strong that I literally went back and re-read the sentence like six times. No joke.
You are a wizard with words and I'm eternally unworthy. I'm bowing. You can't see it because I'm buried in seven thousand feet of snow, but it's happening.
@fyction
Haha, that's a new one!! Love it :)
Please don't bury yourself!! You need to finish your stories first ;)
Thanks for the support! Youre the best!!
@RamonaFoREVer
That's fair. Honestly this story is my fucking favourite. You will not be disappointed.
FUCK ME RUNNING.
This was so god damn worth the wait. I hate you and your wordsmith ways. Eloquent as shit, as always. This was perfectly paced, perfectly timed...this was perfect. You're perfect.
I'm going to go dig a hole and bury myself--and this fucking girl crush--in it.
@fyction
Hahahahahahhahahaha!!! That was wonderful!!!
I know! Go me!! :D Hopefully I can keep up this momentum!
@kiss my sas
I'll get behind you any day.
Innuendo be damned!
I'm proud of you, too! Your updates have been more frequent in the last month than they have been since you started the damn story! haha! I'm obsessed with it so...keep up the momentum, would ya? For my sanity's sake.
@fyction
Once I finally got past the first few paragraphs, the rest of the chapter just... happened! So count your lucky stars that it was this long, and early :D I'm so proud of me :P
Hahahahhhhaha, you made me laugh a lot! Not only making sounds at a shout out (which was well earned! You are the little angel on my shoulder, telling me to write instead of get distracted), but sacrificing your pride... that made me giggle!!
Thanks for your endless support!! It means the word to me!!
Okay first of all, this update was lengthy and I’m all about that. Eloquent as shit as ever. I god damn love your Jimmy so much. I also got a good ol kick out of “cant she just stay here?” Aaaaahah awwwwkward.
As always, this has made my day—and you’re a day early!!
Ive never gotten a shout out before and it’s safe to say that my girl crush is now solidified ;) I made this weird sound that I assume was supposed to by brains version of “aww” but it’s really not clear. It’s orobably love. Who knows. But I’ll forever give you subtle hints. This story is well worth sacrificing my pride. I’m not afraid to grovel ;)
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@fyction
And you say I am good for your ego! damn, woman! I am flying now :D
Omg, I got a caps out of you, twice!! Now I know I have done well.
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