Bête Noire - Comments, page 3

I don't like your cliffhangers Hollie!! Like really? You updated after like more than a month, and you already left us with a cliffy -_-

As for the chapter, I loved it (duh) . I love Brian and Marley so much, really. They're literally my favorite characters :D
And I'm so happy that jimmy's okay! But what's the "problem"? Don't throw a twist at us again, please! But do update soon <3

No. No. No.
You can't leave us hanging like this! I want to know what that 'problem' is!
Ugh, I hate cliffhangers.

I love how Brian as well as Marley is having a certain kind of thoughts. It's time they voice it to each other and get on with it. Damn it, they are meant to be together. And I have this feeling Jimmy is going to help them realize ;-)

And seriously, I lost count of how many times I asked too, but I'm gonna ask again, you better hurry up with this update. Like right now... :P

Oh thank goodness Jimmy is okay... hopefully... I don't even want to think why the guys are upset! Amazing chapter as always, can't wait for more <3

@Kimmie
@DaphneG
@Bella5150
@Hannah
Hello ladies! I updated, sorry for the delay :(
Let me know what u think of the chapter, and I'll try my best to update soon! <3

I'm a huge fan of this story, you know :D
And though we don't know if you're gonna end it soon or not, I'll definitely miss it when you do. I'm glad that there's humungus changes in Brian and Marley's relationship, they're gonna look really good together!

So please don't keep us waiting for long, let them just talk it out and let each other know of their feelings! Also, so happy that you made things right with Jimmy :D

Just caught up after being on holidays and all I can think to say is, thank goodness Jimmy's okay! I hope Kay and Jimmy can recover. I hope seeing Michelle again snaps some sense into Brian and he does something with his feelings for Marley. Looking forward to more <3

I can't write how happy I am now that you are on your way to make things okay!!! You will make them okay, right? Or do we expect a twist? :/
Geez, I really thought you wouldn't bring up Michelle after the Greg incident. But I'm sure that's the last we see of her...right?!

Yayyyyy!!! You made it right! Or Jimmy is at least awake! Will he tell why he did it? Will they be able to fix Kay? Will Jimmy be able to explain to her? Damn, this is fucked up, but I'm pretty sure you will do great in explaining.

Oh and what the hell was Michelle doing there again? Huh? :P

As happy as I am to see Jimmy awake, I'm wondering what would have happened to the conversation that Brian and Marley were having. It seemed very important and now it was cut short.... I want to know what happens now... Pleasseeeeeeee update again!

I'm sorry I was here so late, work was crazy and I was crying a little that you didn't update Carry on yet :P ;-) Go on woman, I know you went back to school, but I need to know how this continues.

@Kimmie
@KWally2
@DaphneG

Awwh, u girls! Always make my day by your words :D
Just updated, check it out to see if I made the situation worse or not!

Oh god, this was such a difficult chapter to read...honestly :(
And you truly did a great job with this chapter, I could never write something like this. Just make things okay, pretty please?

Oh man... talk about a gut wrenching chapter. My soul hurts just going through losing Jimmy again... but please dont kill him! I need his bubbly self somewhere in my world! I need more!

Ohhhh I missedthis story! I'm so happy you finally updated!

i can totally imagine this chapter to be hard...
It was painful to read so I guess you did a very good job :)

please dont keep the other chapters from us... I know they are there... I need to know how this continues... If Jimmy survives... How brian and Marley will be... I need to know!

@Hollie
Yayy!!! She's promised an update! <3

@Kimmie
If u say so... I'll post the next chapter tomorrow then, and I'll see how much feedback I get. I know u and some other readers will leave a comment, and I'm honestly so glad for that ;-)

Hollllllliiiieeee there are more people reading here besides me... More people that would love an update..... Please??

@Kimmie
Hahaha, your comment got me cracking up again :D
I'll update soon, the next chapter's just not one of my favorites to write. But the twist I'm about to throw is important ;-)

@Metalchick36
Probably at New Year's :p

@Hannah
Awwh, that's flattering! I hope you're going to enjoy the rest of the chapters too, just a couple of them left :)


@DaphneG
And I'm so happy u commented! Thank u so much for being here since day one, I really appreciate it :)

I know you are like pooping out new stories and all, but not updating this for a week is unacceptable missy :P

man, I thought they'd have gotten together by now! Maybe New Years?

I just finished reading this, took me a while though...and I have to say, I really love this story a lot! It's so nicely written, and I enjoyed the first couple of chapters a lot when Brian and Marley didn't get along. It's so funny reading them fight over the smallest things!

And whoa, now look at them! Both of them are dying to be around each other, but their stupid prides are stopping them. A Christmas miracle could work now, couldn't it? ;)

You updated after sooooooo long!!! I'm so very happy that you did :D
Ugh, Brian and Marley are too cute! Can't they just be together already?! Haha, and I do agree with @Kimmie! Matt just had to go all brotherly and ruin their moment didn't he?!