Bête Noire - Comments, page 13

Wow that was a surprise! I cant wait to see what happens when the guys move in. Also what is Miss Kay up to? Is she taking advantage of Jimmy while Leana is away? :p

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Wow, I never expected so many comments on my story lol :D
Thank u all so much for your words and it truly makes me happy to read your comments, almost every day :)
The next chapter will take some time but I'm pretty sure the little surprise I'm planning will blow your minds away!

Okay, it may not blow your minds away but it's gonna be one hell of a surprise :p
Stay tuned!

I'm enjoying the back and forth between Marley and Brian. Keep it up!

Brian is a dick! I feel like they are going to fall in love no matter what though! Good job! <3 Can't wait for more dear!!

Well well isn't Brian quite the ass? Of course to be fair Marley isn't exactly trying either. Do I sense a little love/hate vibe going on between them? Love what you've done so far. More please! :)

Well, that explains why she doesn't like Brian that much. And seriously, perverse pleasure? Damn, I can't stop laughing :D

Yay another chapter and their first meeting revealed! They both had that instant thing that urks them which was funny! I cant wait to read more!

@KWally2
@DaphneG

I'm so glad u guys are enjoying this so far! Well, this is what happens if u drink coffee before bedtime lol. I can't sleep now and I have to go out in like six hours :p

More coming soon, hopefully :D

Ohh, will she live with the guys?? With Brian?!
Can't wait to read more!!

Ahh that chapter was just as fun as the first! I love Marley's personality... reminds me a lot of DJ who is also a badass. :p and i see a certain redhead went out with Jimmy... but what are they up to, especially when he has a girlfriend?!

Gah i cant wait for more!

@KWally2
Thank u! And I'm so glad you're enjoying this so far! Be on the lookout for another chapter soon bcuz a certain character will be making an appearance *winks* haha :)

@DaphneG
@Metalchick36
Thank u ladies so much for your words!
Oh god, Marley and Brian in love? That sounds quite impossible, haha :p

Stay tuned!

Pretty good so far. I get the feeling that she and Brian are gonna fall in love later.

Sounds really good!
Keen to read more :)

Great work Hollie! This was an awesome first chapter! I wonder what Mr. Gates did to piss of Marley! I can't wait to read more! She is definitely a firecracker that is about ready to explode! Please update soon!