Bête Noire - Comments, page 12

I am sensing someone is startting to realize their feelings... hehe! Loved it! Cant wait for more!

Whoo! Brian wants another show :p
They'll honestly look good together, but seeing as still don't like each other's company that much, I don't think that will happen any time soon!

But who knows....except u :p

Fantastic update! I need more, since you're a few chapters ahead and high on a caffeine buzz now will do just fine. I have to say the sexual tension between Brian and Marley just makes me giggle a little. I foresee some angry hate filled sex in their future. Now about that next update.... <3

@KWally2
Will update soon! Even Hilary's excited to be in my story, haha :p
But I haven't told Derek yet that I put him in my story, he'll not stop bragging about himself then!

@foREVer_Mandy
@Avengedlover
@DaphneG
@Metalchick36
@Bella5150

Awwwhh, I loved reading your comments!! I am so happy u all are enjoying this so far. Basically I have this story all sorted out, I know exactly where to put the twists haha :D
More coming real soon!!

Oh god! I don't know if I want her to remember or not. Can't wait for more <3

Oh boy! Wonder if she'll remember this in the morning?

Wow, that cliffhanger was so damn not necessary!!

WHAT KIND OF CLIFFHANGER WAS THAT?! I need more soon af!!! God this was so fucking good!!!! <3

How could you just leave it there!?!?! I need more ASAP! That's just a really bad teaser there. Who needs sleeps??? Love it! <3

Ahh! What a great chapter! I knew brian had the hots for Marley, i could feel it! I cant wait to see where this goes next! Update soon! <3

Ps: I also like the new friend Hillary ;)

@DaphneG
@Avengedlover
@foREVer_Mandy

Thank u so much for your support!
Here's another chapter :)

Brian's being a sneaky little shit ain't he? Makes you want to slap the smirk off his face, but he'd probably enjoy that too much. Marley better watch out!!

Dude Brian and Marley would be totally cute together!!! Ughhhh I hope they end up together!!

Does Brian secretly likes Marley? Because you surely gave tiny hints regarding that in the chapter! And Jimmy, did he break up with Leana? Update soon <3

@foREVer_Mandy
Thanks for the comment! Stay tuned, will update soon :)

@KWally2
I'm glad you're surprised :p
And who knows, maybe miss Kay is trying to make full use of the time while Leana's away ;)

@Avengedlover
Yesssss! She did let them move in with her :D
Now we wait until someone makes a move. What kind of move, I don't know :p

@DaphneG
Haha, I love giving my readers something unexpected, lol :D

@Metalchick36
Wow, u have an amazing imagination!
Maybe I will make use of some of the lines u just mentioned in your comment, lol :p

Thank u all for your words, next chapter is on it's way!

I think for sure that she and Brian are gonna fall in love. I can picture them shouting "I hate you!" and slapping each other, then maybe they'll make out. Imagine the surprise on the guys faces and one of them saying "I thought you guys hated each other?" Matt probably won't like it.

Wow. I foresee someone crawling in the wrong bed one night. Haha More please! <3

This was so unexpected!

She let them move in with her?! Whattttt