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Bête Noire - Comments, page 2

@Kimmie
What if I told u I lost all those chapters...

just kidding, I’d have had a heart attack then! I’ll update whenever I get time ;)

Holly Holly
3/5/18

*lies on the ground kicking and screaming*
AN AUTHOR'S NOTE!? Come on! You can't fool me like that! I thought I was getting an update :( And yes I know how busy you are, but I also remember you told me you wrote everything already... just post it woman! :P

I need this story, I need your writing. Come on!

Kimmie Kimmie
3/4/18

So happy to hear you wanna pick this up again!! Can't wait!

@Hannah
OMG Hannah I’m so sorry I didn’t tag u in the comment earlier!! I was in a hurry I guess...
but thanks a lot girl! I loved your comment, the duo should talk and express their feelings. And that will happen, just not now :p
Love ya!!<3

Holly Holly
1/25/18

@DaphneG
I know right, old married couple! Problem is they’re not actually married lol, wouldn’t be too many complications if they were mr and mrs ;) and yes, couldn’t help but drag mich again...I totally like her tho. Thanks a lot for the comment <3

@violetshade
I did not expect a new reader at this point considering that I don’t update often, but thank u so much for your words! Syn and Marls are adorable right?! But I do miss writing the parts where they used to loathe each other :p Stay tuned!

@Metalchick36
Another one of my loyal readers who’s been here since the beginning, am I right?! :) I’m happy that u liked the chapter, and I’ll see what I can do about Jimmy :)

@Kimmie
Who said I was gonna update this quick? ;)
No worries, I will update but I just don’t know when. Currently a little busy with school, hopefully I can take some time out and post :) ohh I loved the ending too, i remember it took me a while to write it but I was pretty satisfied with how it turned out to be.

Thank u all soooooo much for your lovely words, they just made my day!! I’m so happy that you’re all still reading this even though the updates are slow but it means so much to me. Stay tuned people<3

Holly Holly
1/25/18

I really can't believe I didn't comment on this. The site must have eaten my comment once again. Ugh!

This chapter was so very cute. I loved how Val just told her to finally go for it. And that Matt was okay with it ;-)
But the ending must have been the cutest. Brian telling her he didn't talk to MIchelle... just... because ;-) It was amazing. Now get on it and get them together finally!

Now that I finally made my long overdue comment you are going to update, right? ;-)

Kimmie Kimmie
1/24/18

Good chapter! I really hope Jimmy turns around that attitude, and hope Marley and Brian admit their feelings for each other and kiss already!

Metalchick36 Metalchick36
1/1/18

Caught up! Syn and Marles!! So fucking adorable I can't stand it!!!!

violetvictoria violetvictoria
12/5/17

Ahhhh, the ending was so damn cuteee :D
But I’m still worried for Avenged and Jimmy, hope he’ll get well soon. And I totally agree with Val, Marley should definitely talk to Brian. Or vice versa!

Hannah Hannah
12/5/17

On Chapter 8 and can't read fast enough! Love this love/hate stuff b/w Marles and Syn!!! So adorable!

violetvictoria violetvictoria
12/4/17

At least Marley’s considering telling Brian how she feels! But I don’t really get why they don’t just say it already, I get it might be a little difficult like Val said because they have a history which is not a great one :D

I really thought you wouldn’t bring Michelle again, but you always keep surprising us :o

I like it how Brian and Marley understand each other without even saying something, they seem like an old married couple lol
update soon okay?! <3

DaphneG DaphneG
12/4/17

@Kimmie
@seventhtrumpet
@Hannah
@DaphneG
@Metalchick36

Thank you so much for your comments guys! Your words really mean a lot to me and makes me happy that you all still enjoy reading this. When I started this story like ten or eleven months ago, I had no idea that it’d become my personal favorite or that I’d get so many readers. I had plans of updating regularly since I have it all done, but unfortunately I’m unable to. I’m working my ass off in school and hardly have any time for myself.

But I will definitely finish this story and give you guys a happy ending, even though this story is like my baby and I don’t want it to end ever ;p
There’s a whole lot of chapters left, like more than twenty. So brace yourselves! Hopefully you’ll like the twists which I’m gonna throw in the future.

And for those who asked me whether I’m gonna write a sequel to this, the answer is no :(
I’m sorry if you guys were perhaps thinking that I’d continue this further. But I already have the ending as well as the epilogue ready, so no sequel. Alright, that’s it for now, have a nice day!

Holly Holly
11/28/17

Poor Jimmy! Hope he makes a recovery. And it looks like Marley and Brian are close to admitting their feelings for each other.

Metalchick36 Metalchick36
10/25/17

Please update soon I can't take the waiting anymore :(

seventhtrumpet seventhtrumpet
10/20/17

Okay, it's gonna take a while for me to digest the news...but why would you throw such a twist? Of course it thickens the plot, and I really need some answers!

P.s. I love Marley and Brian. But I also miss the old them :(

Hannah Hannah
10/14/17

Ohh man, I wasn't expecting this at all :o
That's a big twist you threw at us! What's gonna happen to Avenged now? And when's Jimmy gonna recover? What's the hint?!! Ugh, so much suspense! :/

But I loved this chapter absolutely, especially that Brian and Marley moment :D It felt like a real life situation (their moment at the hospital) and I adored it :)

DaphneG DaphneG
10/11/17

Poor Jimbo :( I just REALLYYYYY loved this chapter! So beautifully written! Update soon :)

seventhtrumpet seventhtrumpet
10/10/17

I'm so sad for Jimmy, but he will get there. He has lots of people around him that will be there for him and help him get there. He will be fine. Right? Right? Right? :p

As for Brian and Denise (see what i did there?)... I know you love your suspense, but don't you think solo these chapters isn't enough suspense? :p ;)

Get them there woman!!! :p

Kimmie Kimmie
10/10/17

@Bella5150
@Kimmie
@DaphneG
@Hannah

So, I updated... ;)

Holly Holly
10/9/17

Yay, you made things with Jimmy okay :) And there's definitely a huge change that took place in Marley and Brian's relationship, and I hope that they'll tell each other how they really feel. It's high time they have a talk! Can't wait to read what problem you're gonna introduce next :)

Hannah Hannah
10/3/17