Ruptured - Comments, page 3

Oh come Brian! Don't be a fucking baby, a very jealous baby if I may add...
You want to marry the girl, don't you think a little trust would be good?

Maybe you need to solve your problems like Matt does... that seemed like a pretty great way ;-)

How can Matt say 'Knife Master bullshit'!???? I was really, really offended by that, just like Jimmy!!
So, the store's open and dear James called the girls. Now Brian's pissed, and Matt already took out his anger on Maya(which was hot as usual:p).

@LadyRevenge
@Syn's_Girl666
@Kimmie
@DaphneG

Thank you girls!
Hope u all started good into the new year?!

More to come soon I promise, stay tuned !! :D

Jimmy's POV was amazing!
And Mattaya just did it in Brian's bed. That was exactly what I wanted to read:D
Ooh, somebody's busted.....

That Jimmy POV was perfect for today... So nice!

And well... what should I say? I could have a Matt smut at every time of the day ;-)

Four in one bed was really cute!:)
Ooh, and Brian smut? That was amazing as always!
What if Mattaya starts doing...something when they wake up? That too in Brian's bed?! That would be so funny!
Update soon:)

Stop leaving me hanging like this T-T

Lol I can't stop laughing at the fact that Avery and Maya were both acting loopy. Aww and they cuddled next to each other on Brian & Avery's bed. Of course Matt didn't want to sleep alone in the guest room and squeezed in behind Maya. But hey, that smut made up for the crazy night everyone had.

@LadyRevenge
@DaphneG
@Syn's_Girl666

Thank you girls! :)
Glad you liked it! :D More to come soon!! I promise!
Stay tuned..maybe we are getting closer to Brian's proposal... or will he back out?!
What do u think?!

Are there anymore chapters coming? I'd love to see what happens with Brian's proposal. I'm so anxious.

God, Maya's so damn funny when she's high:D Thank god, Matt found her.
Aww, Maya's so concerned about Ave. I think everyone should have a best friend like her. But she also ruined Brian's night with Ave!
I'm soooo happy that everything is okay now. Matt really handled the situation very nicely. He didn't panic much, but I'm happy he found Maya:)

Wow poor Maya going through a total drug trip. Pretty funny though with her acting all loopy. Sad that Jimmy thinks the girls got arrested when they're doing fine...so far. Maya just needs to relax and detox from the drugs. Same goes with Avery who is kind of a light weight. Can't wait to read what happens next. Love these chapters ladies. ^_^

@Kimmie
That would be really cute to have Brian ask Ave to not go on any more Jimmy adventures in their vows right? Thats if Ave says yes ;) And we shall see how the girls end up back with the guys!

@DaphneG
Its hard to believe Jimmy and Jess forgot the girls right? Did they get in trouble or did they escape? Hmm we will have to see and wasnt Brian cute with Larry?

Awh! Brian is too damn cute! Way to go that Larry said yes, now he only have to actually ask Ave... Wonder how he is going to do that :D
I'm wondering if Brian might ask Ave to promise she won't go on Jimmy adventures anymore if they are exchanging vows ;-) :D

Now bring the girls back to their men and show us how they are going to respond to this Jimmy adventure :D

I'm soooooo happy Larry said yes!! Now Brian just needs to propose Ave in the sweetest way possible:D

What about Mattaya?? Aren't they planning anything for the future?
Jimmy and Jess really forgot about the girls?? That was funny:D

@Aggie
Thanks Aggie :D
Sooo you waited for it, now u got Brian's POV :)
And was it hilarious?!

Ohhhh drunk Ave is sooo funny hahhahahaha
And whaaaaat Jimmy planned for next? Thats so exciting!
But poor Bri and Matt had to be worry about girls. Yeah Jimmy and his crazy, genius ideas!

But will they be able to open their store at least? I just hope they won't do anything much stupid hahhaha

And btw... I can't wait for Brian's POV and him asking Larry... that can be hilariously :P

@Kimmie
@LadyRevenge
@DaphneG

Thank you ladies for reading and commenting!
Love to read from you!
More to come soon!
And thanks for the compliment!! We appreciate it! :)

It was amazing! And the Jimmy adventures...they're simply awesome:)
Too bad Ave got a cut on her head. I hope Matt and Brian don't lose their temper when they find Jimmy and the Knife Angels:) You know, I'm loving how this story is going, it's become one of my favorites!
Update soon:):)

Lol these Jimmy adventures are hilarious to read. Poor Avery, still can't handle her alcohol and drug intake. I think Brian leaving the room may be a sign of him trying to plan on how to propose to Avery. I don't think he'd cheat on her, he's too in love and committed to her to do that. I'd like to know the aftermath of all this when Maya and Avery have to deal with Matt and Brian once they reunite with them again.