Ruptured - Comments, page 4

LOVED IT!
Finally, Jimmy's back with his secret missions. And whatever he says, doesn't really make sense. But that's the reason I love to read Jimmy's pov. Thank you:):):):):)

Is Brian really planning to propose Ave?? Wow, that's a big step. I mean, Brian, the same Brian who wasn't even willing to commit a few months ago is now planning to get married? What spell did you guys put on him??
Update soon!
And I hope the opening of the shop will hopefully go well. And Larrry....hope he agrees too:)

Oh my God Jimmy... Really?! He never knows what he is doing, I think he is always just winging it...
Ah well, until now the girls got out safe every time, I trust you two to not fuck it up this time :P

Awhhh Brian is going to propose, so damn cute... Can't wait for it!

@Kimmie
@Aggie

Thank you ladies!
Glad u liked that one! :)
And now I'm gonna give you an update and show you what the next one got! :D

Yeyyyy I'm so glad that i finally catch up!

So good that everything is good over here, guys are back, girls are happy, couldn't ask for more :)
I love to see my lovely couples so cute together, I can't wait for Brian's next step, to ask Ave some question maybe :P

But now! ahhhhh Jimmy's pov.. Did i already tell how much i love all his parts? i makes me just smile and laugh all the time! What's on his mind again? Can't wait to read his genius adventure again!!

This was so damn cute... I can't even :P
Oh man, can't wait to see what this mission is going to be, what the hell is Jimmy planning now... :D

And I don't think Brian can be an ass about it, come on, Ave can have some fun without him! I can't wait to read more about the mission, and about the opening of the store, how is that going to go?

@Kimmie
@DaphneG
@LadyRevenge

Thank you girls!! Glad you liked the chapter!!
Stay tuned more to come soon! And yes finally another Jimmy adventureeee! :D

The amazing Jimmy adventures have come back from hiatus! Err...I mean the Knife Master Society UNIT has come back lol. Crazy how he's been gone for a few days but I guess that's how the mastermind works when it comes to writing. Well other than that, it's great that Avery and Maya are opening their shop. Fulfilling their dream.

Work has started again so soon?? I thought they'll spend some time together first and then work.
Anyways, YAY!!! Jimmy's back with his awesome tricks. I'm sooooooo happy to read his pov after such a long time.
Update soon:):):)

Gotta love the smut in this chapter. I also think Avery's not really thinking too well with what she's doing. How dare her ex think she wanted to get back with him?! Obviously he was desperate and wanting to get laid (What I think anyway). Hope things are normal again with her and Brian. Mattaya...still going strong with the love! That's all I have t say about that. ^_^

Yayyy, everything is back into place now.
I'm sooo happy to see all of them happy:):):)
Update soon!

Awhhhh they are all so cutteeeeeeeee <3

But now everyone is together again, I really need to know what is wrong with Matt... Please let Maya call a doctor the next morning. He has to be okay!

Oh and I see a proposal coming up... maybe even two... come guys, you can do it! :P

@DaphneG

Oh and I promise, you will get your Jess and Jimmy part in the future, dont worry ;)
Just stay tuned !!

@Kimmie
@DaphneG
@LadyRevenge

Wasnt that a great chapter?!
And hot... smutty.. just how we like it, right !? :P
Now we need to find out what happened to Brian and Ave, so let's see if the next chapter will clue us in on what's going on with those two ... :)
Stay tuneddd :)

I'm so happy Mattaya found each other! Man, do I need to say how great that smut was??!

Now I hope Brian finds Ave and they go home safely:)
Really miss Jimmy and Jess' parts. Hope to hear about them soon!

Oh! I was wondering.... Did Matt just leave Avery standing there? I mean, I get it, but in the state Avery was in now.... I don't know those ex's walking around, crazy bitches running around... Oh my...

Go on Brian, you can do it... find that woman! :P

And ofcourse... don't forget about Matt and Maya... I mean... "Not done yet" is definitely something we want to see :D

Woo you go Matt! The smutt made up for him not finding Maya at first...and the fact that he's sick too lol. This whole chapter being in his POV. I love it. Now I wonder what Brian and Avery are doing now that they're reunited as well. Damn crazy drunk chicks at these parties. XD

That was like.... Like..... Man! I don't even have words!

It was a great bedtime story....So I'm gonna read that again before I close my eyes, putting in some nice images to dream about

They have found each other at last. And poor Matt still can barely talk. Brian...lol he didn't even have to try just to have all the ladies get on him. Lay off, he's taken crazies! (By Avery of course)

Great chapter like all the others. I love it.

Ahh, finally they found each other! I hope that they go home safely. And when they wake up the next morning sober, they'll finally talk and everything will be okay, just like before!

Yay! They found each other!

Matt is still not able to talk and I fear for his health... Damn, what is going on with him? Somehow I have the feeling that it's more than just a cold and that makes me have all these disturbing thoughts... better telle me soon what is wrong with him, I can't take it anymore. One goog thing about him not having a voice... he is not able to fight with Maya now on how he found her ;)

Brian... My man, just take your woman away and not go on a crusade for the ex. Just be happy you are back together, both of you! No fighting, come on! It's so damn useless!

Llet's see how you two are planning to fuck all of this up ;) :P