Ruptured - Comments, page 18

Ha see! I told ya! That at least Ave will feel awful again and this whole party won't help her on any way!
Brian knew, damn it! I just wonder how is he feeling now and how Ave is feeling as well...
It's just ahhhrg I'm so pissed off can't they just explain each other everything?!
I don't like what I see here. Better watch out James and Ben or u soon can be my hated characters here :P

@LadyRevenge
Okay, there is more coming to explain Avery's emotional state, but she is not freaking out because he knows about the article. She's freaking out because she's been in a state of denial and hurt over what happened with Brian for the past month and thought somewhere in her mind that everything would come back together. She just had to get over the fact of how much it hurt her first....so that being said, she was upset because Brian called and she has no idea what he heard because she doesn't remember. So she thinks Brian knowing that she was out having fun or maybe being with another guy ruins all chances of them making up. Does that make sense? She is still very much in love with him and feels extremely guilty about whatever happened with James. She just doesn't know how to get past the hurt and talk to Brian about it, so for now she is avoiding it completely.

Matt would have never messed around with anyone if he was with Maya. He only hooked up with DJ as a distraction. Maya on the other hand broke up with him so he could go back to being happy, she thought that he was miserable and hated that. She still loves Matt and broke up with him to safe him if you will.

And Jess and Jimmy are still good. You will get glimpses of them throughout. :)


@CrimsonDay64
I know, wouldn't it just be easy to fly them back together? Do you think Ave and Brian would make up easily. I know I'd be pissed off and probably not forgive my boyfriend if he was fucking around cheating...so there is a lot of things to make up here.

@Avenged7X_fan
You're shipping already? Cant they just be friends? haha But you will have to wait and find out. Things will become clear soon. ;)

@Aggie
So maybe their love can overcome everything? Hmm....we'll see what you think after you read the new chapter! I hope you like it.

@xSilverPearlx
I totally agree with you on the Brian situation. He fucked up and Ave had every right to drop communication with him. I would have done the same thing. But the worst part is the poor girls is crushed because she is still so in love with him, yet hurt and pissed at the same time.

And yes poor Matt. He just wants Maya back. But Maya dumped him because she though she was making him miserable and that setting him free would cure him from that pain. Little does she know that it only made it worse. :(

And how are we so fast? We are in different time zone and that helps. So while I'm at work she posts and while she's sleeping I post haha. Im in the USA and she is Germany. :)

I don't get why Avery's so upset about the fact that Brian knows about the article. I mean She avoided him...or more so left him so she shouldn't be worrying about anything. What I don't get is why Maya decided to break things off with Matt and then get mad at the fact that there was a picture of him and some girl? The way it sounds, she broke it off with him before he even started to mess around with another girl. But eh she's stubborn so what evs. Anyway, Avery just needs to relax and calm down. Her reacting like that possibly means that she may have regretted leaving Brian. Hence why she still feels guilty. I think he did cheat on her though during the time Maya broke up with Matt and he began to mess with that DJ girl. But of course, he thought it was Avery. Poor guy.

When do we get to hear about what happened with Jimmy and Jess? I'm curious if they continued their relationship once the last tour was over.

Oh god, poor Avery. Not a good decision to go out and get drunk and high when you're nursing a broken heart!

But my beautiful Brian!!! Stop hurting him, it's killing me!! He's going to feel awful now he knows Ave has kinda moved on! I just want him to fly over to Britain and grab Ave so they can go live happily ever after!!!

Any chance, ladies?

Damn...i feel sorry for Brian :/ he thought she was Ave...he was wasted and doesnt remember a thing... damn!!! What will he do? Will he phone her?!

And thr party...i just know that something is going to happen!!! The girls need to stay away from Danny though thats for sure :p so thank god for James!! Hmmm james-ave...ben-maya?! :p just thinking here that is all hahaha

Cannot wait for more ladies!! Keep on writing :p ♡

Oh. My. Fucking. God.
Is that normal I just wanna go there to hug, very tight, Brian? I just can't stand seeing him like that! He didn't do anything wrong? I mean, yess he did, he drank definitely too much, but he even can't remember that! And, he thought it was Ave! She actually did the same with Jason, when she had sex with him, thinking it was Brian. Yeah I know they weren't together yet, but still..

I know it's hard and it's hurt so fucking much, and Brian never, ever should do something with another girl even if he was completely drunk, there's no complaint about this one, but I think there is way to figure out it!

And actually Matt is now blaming himself for DJ.. He shouldn't, Maya broke up with him for totally different reasons.

Now back to the AA parry, I reallllly hope Ave won't do anything stupid cause I know she will regret afterwards... And where Maya went?! Oh ohoh it's gonna be interesting!

Love it, but you already know ;) <3

Fucking finally I can read these. I had nothing but problems with this site yesterday :-/ It would let me do anything but read the chapters. Stupid shit wouldn't load. Then connection timed out. Pissed me off.

But enough about that

What the fuck ladies??? You end the other so happy and everyone together then BAM!! Everyone is miserable and alone :(

Okay first, Brian. You fucked up man. Fucked up bad. I get you don't remember the night but you still fucked up dude. Not a lot of people will accept the "I was wasted" excuse. I know I wouldn't. But everyone is different. I have no idea how you're going to fix this. I don't think having your lips glued to her ass for a month would even help....

I can't complain about Matt. Poor guy didn't really do anything. Maya broke up with him so I don't see how she can be upset about this DJ chick. Its not his fault she can't handle the distance. A little mad at her really. She put him through hell with her insecurities about everyone leaving her then she does it to him.

Damn I can't wait for this roller coaster of a journey :)
Love it already ladies. You two are amazing together
And fast. How are you so damn fast?
<3

@Aggie
It will be a bumpy ride, and not one that will be solved so easily :)
But maybe the new chapter will give u a lil more information ?!
Thanks Aggie ;)

@LadyRevenge
They broke off the contact without saying a word... so Brian had no idea what actually happened.. maybe after reading the article it will come back to him?!
Check the upate to find out!! :)

@Avenged7X_fan
I knew you would like and dislike it at the same time :D
And yesss the AA guys showed themselves !
Let's see where this is going!!

@Haner's girl
Yeah.. perfect... and now crashed into a million pieces!!
Its a long road ahead of them :)
We changed the pic, because Ave and Maya changed as well :)
Ave like mentioned in the chapter is now a blonde ;) And Maya cut off her longer her, like girls do after a break-up, right?!
A change of the appearance :)

Whaaaaat daa fuckkk!!! Everything was going so perfect. I didnt understand and I really want them to be happy. Now they broke up. The worst thing happened. By the way why the photos had change?

Oh oh oh what happened?! Damn i had a feeling about this but was denying it :(
Brian is a mess...conpletely different than him in the pics....something is off

And AA is back!!!! :D damn....i know it is going to be epic...i just know it...and im sure the guys will try to win the girls now that A7X guys are not around

Already live this one ladies...cant wait fot more

They just now found out about the article with said pictures of them doing stuff? Jeez and I thought they'd be knowing this stuff already lol. Would have helped if Zacky had told them sooner than later. But hey, gotta have a little drama first before things start to get better right? I wonder what will happen at the AA party Maya and Avery are at...

No, no.. it's exactly what I expected!
I knew it can't be true, I mean... I didn't believe that Brian could do something like that. And i have some strange feeling that Michelle and Val had something to do with it...Maybe it all was just Photoshop work, or I don't know...

Poor Brian, I wanna hug him now hahah

They better soon figure out everything! Oh shit what am I thinking about? Soon? I bet you won't us be happy anytime soon...

@Aggie
@CrimsonDay64
@LadyRevenge
@Kimmie

We knew you wouldn't like it but it was a necessary evil for the roller coaster we have planned for you. But just think, you'll love the characters that much more if and when they get back together :p Though the good thing with fan fiction is that it usually eventually returns to that perfect fictional life. ;)

And my name is Kayla by the way! :) And thank you @Aggie for the beautiful header! I love it! :D

HAHAHAH yeah! I totally agree with @Kimmie I read fanfic mostly to forget about myy real life just for moment and what our lovely Meike (yes Meike not Mei- I told u I'm offended and I won't talk with you anymore-.-) and her dear co-author do to us? Destroying my perfect fictional life now!!

What has happened?!?!?!?
Why?!?!?! Why have you done this?!?!?!?
My hearts broken already and it's only the first chapter!!!!!!
This sequel should be very interesting.....:):):)

That first chapter is a bit heartbreaking yet beautiful. Why must Mattaya break apart?! I was totally rooting for them to stay strong. It seems it got to Bravery as well from the way Avery's been acting. I hope things are fixed soon.

Oh how nice... doing a happy ending on part one and then just throw it out on part 2? Damn....
You guys are mean, I'm sick and I need my happy endings to cheer me up!
Don't start to me about how life isn't always rainbows and unicorns! I want my fictional life to be...

Damn... I know this is going to be a bumpy ride, if you start a story like that... let's see who those women are hanging around the men we love so much

Well... What a nice way to began sequel... I'm kinda speechless. As I told on my last comment to riptide, I felt drama on my bones, and here you are..

I can't freaking believe that Ave and Maya weren't anymore with guys...

And yeah.. Again some party ahead, so the and a me way it all began last time, huh? And i see AA guys on characters, hmm it's gonna be interesting. Even if beginning of new story is heartbreaking... Can't way to see what's on your minds girls

Btw. Awesome header you have here :D