Ruptured - Comments, page 2

You left me speachless, but let's try to finally write something.

It's one of the most perfect chapter I ever read, no lies. I know if it's good when I really can feel all those emotions which are described in chapter. I was sad with Ave, excited with Maya and most of all- Nervous with Brian. I felt my heart beating faster in every other sentence I read, that's amazing.

That surprise, aww just awesome. Brian made all of that just to ask this one question. That was unbelievable when I was reading song and then proposal part I truly had tears in my eyes. That's when you know you're reading sth really good.

But now we need to wait for Aves reaction.. she's for sure surprised, shocked.. so it can take her moment to realize what actually happened, but I'm sure she will say yes.. who wouldn't after proposal like that.. Perfection *.*

Awh Brian, you are too cute. But I wouldn't be surprised of Ave's first reaction won't be a full mouthed yes... I mean... Brian had her into worries so bad lately. She could get mad, or overthink the whole thing and think it's his way of hiding the truth of him cheating on her.... (yes... I get carried away sometimes :P)

But damn, that proposal was amazing and I can totally appreciate all the effort he put in, that was very nice of him, so well done Brian, well done! Also happy he actually got the words out, for a moment I was afraid he would shit his pants ;-)

As for Matt and Maya, it would be so great if Matt steals Brian's thunder and proposes to Maya too... muhahahaha *evil laugh*

Well done girls, can't wait to see Ave's reaction to all of this!

Oh before I forget... A third story... well I read everything Mei writes... she makes me :P

Ohhh, Brian's speech was so touching and perfect! I absolutely loved it. God, Ave has to say yes. She has to! Ugh, one more chapter to go:( But don't forget about part three. I'd love to read it:D
And I really wanna know what Mattaya will do next. So yeah....I want a third story:D
Please;)

@LOVE_IN_SYN666
U got me... Damn ;)
How about an update tomorrow?
Would that work for u? :)

@DaphneG
Thank u sweetie!
Update Tomorrow I promise! ;)

@MeRi
Girl when you gonna update? It's been a week D: I need to know what Brian is gonna go

I would love to read a third story!! Please do it, please!!!
Aww, I feel bad for Ave. I just hope Brian proposes her soon:D And what about Mattaya?? Aren't they planning anything?? Update soon:)

@DaphneGT
Its updateddd! Where is your comment?! :P
Sooo u would be up for another sequel?!
Tell us what u think!

@LadyRevenge
Uhhuuu u think Mr. Sanders has something up his sleeves :P Or someone else :'D
Well, we gotta see and wait!
What u think about a sequel?!

@LOVE_IN_SYN666
Ohhooo thank you for ur lovely comment!
And thank you for letting us know! Thats really nice ;)

I WOULD LOVE FOR A THIRD STORY! And this is getting juicier by the minute. Brian better propose quick because I don't think Ave is gonna stick around if he keeps avoiding her. I don't want this sequel to end but if there is a whole new third part with a whole bunch of chapters describing their lives after the wedding and maybe Matt and maya's proposal, THAT WOULD BE AMAZING ♡

POST CHAPTER 80 ALREADY ♡

Poor Matt, can't keep the secret about Brian proposing to Avery away from Maya for long. I have a feeling Matt will make it up to Maya by proposing to her as well...and with lots of sex going on lol.

Haha, I love Bravery! Loved the chapter as usual:D
Why do you guys have to write 'only 3 chapters left'??!! Oh no, I really don't want this to end, I don't even think about it! Anyways, update soon!

@MrsChristX
In the end getting a new commenter, that's great! Hope u enjoy it! Let us know!

@xSilverPearlx
An old commenter coming back catching up... About damn time dear! ;)

@Kimmie
And always here.. Glad about that, lovely kim!
Let's see if he can man up.before the end ;)

Oh Brian... Come on, it doesn't matter what you say... You got the ring, better make it fast, because that girl is going crazy in fear of you hiding something ugly.

Loved this Chapter. Hope Brian proposes soon to Ave. Can't wait for more and the next update :D

@xSilverPearlx
No worries! We are glad to have you back! You will have lots of time to catch up too because we only have 4 chapters left before it's all over! It's bitter sweet!

Im so far behind in this, its not even funny. I need to play catch up...
Sorry ladies :/ I'll get caught up soon :)

@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@LadyRevenge

Awwnnn thank you girls!! :D
Its slowly running out, will Brian be brave enough to propose Ave?!
Or will he back out?! What u think?!

More to come soon, I promise :D
And thanks for all the compliments, we are glad u still enjoy this!! <3

Hmmm, even though I knew the end was coming, but now it's really there... damn, it sucks a little...

This chapter... man... Brian! Why... Why are you jumping to conclusions... Seriously, you had no reason at all. I'm happy Ave told him clearly now.. Let's hope Brian will really believe her too ;-)

Nice chapter girls!

I think both Avery and Brian overreacted. Brian thought Avery was making plans behind his back with James while Avery thought he was being a stuck up asshole, going off on him. All she was doing was being nice and telling James that she's happy with Brian where as Brian was being protective of her even though he didn't need to.

-le gasp- Will Brian propose to Avery?! Gah I can't wait. The suspense is killing me.

Only 4 more chapters left???!!! Whaaaat??! Nooooo! Please tell me you're joking, I don't want this to end! I love reading this story, and the thought of this ending just makes me wanna scream, 'No!!!'

About this chapter, the store's doing great. I hope Brian proposes Ave soon. And Matt has got to propose Maya too! I'm so ready to read the next chapter:)