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Fuck, where do I even start?
At the most important thing I guess... I called it... When you said that thing about Annie in 'Fake Reflection' I just knew you were going to kill Val. Damn. It sucks. I know it's for the sake of the story, but it's pretty sad in the story too. Leaving Matt heartbroken and alone with a baby. Poor him.... No insinuating Matt jokes from me this time, it just feels inappropriate :(
As for the fun part... I can't wait to see the interaction between Tammy and Michelle, that is going to be so much fun. But knowing you.... a lot of problems too. Damn... I can only imagine the things she will do to fuck this all up. Please stand together, my dearest Tammy and Kimmie, but I guess that won't be a problem, I love their friendship, it's unbreakable! (please promise me you won't do anything to fuck that up).
You did very well hun, and so fast too... shit... are you finally getting into things with this story again? Oh I hope so! No pressure, but damn... this story... it's not even to half it's potential yet and it's already so incredibly good!
<3
@xSilverPearlx
OMG I was totally not expecting Val to die :'( I completely understand why she had to though. Is Kimmie going to offer to help Matt raise the baby as like a nanny? I can't wait to see what you have planned!
I hope Brian isn't too hard on Tammy and Johnny about the their discussions of Michelle. Speaking of Mich....she definitely seems jealous of Tammy. I'm thinking she still has feeling for Brian which is probably going to piss Tammy off.
I can't wait for the next up...this is my favorite story!!
This was not expected at all :o
But as Hollie mentioned earlier, even I have a little idea what's gonna happen with Matt in the future. So I'm happy about that :)
And I'm glad the baby's fine :)
Hope nobody acts like a bitch around here :p
@Hollie
Baby is fine :) you didn't miss anything. Val was holding him when everything went down.
As for Michelle....
She's gonna be around for a little while but can't guarantee she won't have conflict with at least one of the girls ;)
Damn, I feel so bad for Matt :(
But I kinda know what your plans are with him further in the story, so I won't say much about that :)
But what about the baby, what happened to him? Did I miss anything??
Annnnd u decided to put Michelle at this point of the story. Is she gonna stick around more? I don't have a problem with that until and unless she hurts either of the girls!
This was a quick update and I'm sooooooo happy u posted! Can't wait for more :D
@xSilverPearlx
I kinda agree with @SynysterRyn on the song, but I want going to make all your decisions :p
@Hollie
Don't worry, there will be plenty of Tammy and Brian time. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the suggestions :)
@DaphneG
I had that part with Brian and Tammy planned from the beginning. I thought it would be funny him going all dad mode on her with their casual friendly relationship. Thanks for the suggestions. Don't know if I'll use Nate though since Dr. Douchebag's name is Nathan.
@Kimmie
I know 100!!!! I can't believe it. Honestly I didn't know how well this was going to go sure wasn't expecting this.
Sorry about your baby suggestion. Val has done no one else but Matt lol :p She's sweet and innocent, but don't worry you will see how Kimmie comes into Matt's life in the next chapter. Not completely comfortable with it though. There was a reason I made someone up for Matt's former girlfriend in my last story. Hope that doesn't give to much away.
We'll also get some Victoria and Zacky time soon too see how their doing. He's going to need a distraction soon.
Thanks hun. You weren't much help in the song choice :p but I like the name Aiden. <3<3
@SynysterRyn
Oh I do plan to pair Kimmie and Matt. As I told Kimmie, you will see how next chapter. But it's nothing Val did. She's innocent.
I agree with you on the song choice. I was leaning more to Buried Alive. IWSYT would have been something for Tammy's suicidal days which have past. So I don't know. Everyone is voting for IWSYT.
Thanks for the names. I like Ryder. I might have to combine some of these suggestions to come up with one.
@K. Shadows
Haha everyone seems to be voting for IWSYT, but like SynysterRyn said I just don't know if it fits this part of her life right now. Thanks for reading and helping though. Carson is cute.
Omg I would be happy with either songs, Buried Alive I don't think would cause much concern though? At least not as much as IWSYT. So my vote goes to IWSYT :)
And baby names...Carson? I like the suggestion of Ryder too :)
@xSilverPearlx
As for the song choice, my vote is for Buried Alive. IWSYT pt 1 is an amazing song, but it's a song about losing all hope and wanting to end your life..Tammy is a fighter, so I don't think the song fits as well as Buried Alive does.
My baby name suggestions are Ryder, Jackson or Jensen :)
OMG Yay!!! I love when you update :)
oh boy is Brian in over his head. I absolutely love the dynamic between him and Tammy though. I'm curious to see if their attraction is as obvious to Tammy's classmate as it is to Brian's friends.
speaking of them, I love the appearance by the Berry twins and of course, St. James <3
I am with @Kimmie , Matt and Val are so sickeningly cute that I'm not sure how you're going to pair Matt and Kimmie (unless you don't plan to lol). The whole "someone else's baby" thing would definitely do it
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I love the present Kimmie's planning for Matt. I'm sure he'll love it! One weird thing which is, right now I'm so jealous of Victoria because she's going out with Zacky -_-
Brian and Tammy are inching closer, though that's not how I thought they would. But they are making progress, so I'm damn happy about that! And I'm sure, no matter what, Brian would never hand over Tammy back to Nathan.
And yay u updated :D
Hope to read from u soon <3
4/25/17