He's Forbidden, as am I - Comments, page 2

welcome back !! (:

Oh my god!!! I'm sooo pleased you got back this!
I'll post a longer review when I'm feeling a little better!

<3

Omg its been a year since an update? Pleaseeee for the love of Gates please update asap I need this lol

Love this story. Hope you update soon

@Final_paradigm
Thanks!!! Glad you decided to come out of hiding lol. I've started the next chapter but it's slow going. Hope you like the rest to come. I have so much planned for this. You can check out my other completed stories while you wait if you want. I would love to see what you think of them.

Yeah I read this story before I opened my account but I'd like to just support you and inspire you in writing so catch your 10/10 rating girl!

@xSilverPearlx
Well... I have like 4 stories you need to comment on first... Until then I'm keeping my comments hostage! :p

@ShadowSkye
@BeastlyHarlots
@HereticBlood6661
Thanks ladies. Glad I can pull the heart strings still XD. Still some sad chapters coming.

Oh and...
@Kimmie
Don't think you're off the hook with comments just cause you're posting for me, woman ;) <3

This chapter was sooooo heartbreaking :'( I'm legit crying. I feel like I was there.

@xSilverPearlx
OH EM GEE! Poor Matt! That one hit me right in the feels :'-(
He is completely shattered and it's got me all torn up. The kind of love he had for Val was something that most people never experience. I hope he can find love again some day.

Tammy probably is jealous of Michelle but I think there might be too much past damage that even this tragedy can't repair.

Can we talk about how amazing Jimmy is?!? He always knows just what to do to make the situation slightly less terrible. He really is St. James <3

Okay, so this was the first story I read on here, and I almost forgot about it! HOLY SHIT MY HEART! Also, I need more because I'm going to go back and re-read so I remember everything. Seriously, my heart canNOT handle things like this.

@xSilverPearlx
That would be amazing. I already binge read all the chapters lol

@california_gurl
@BeastlyHarlots
@ShadowSkye
Thanks for the support. You guys are awesome. Good news is I'm done with the next chapter just have to send it to Kimmie to type and upload so hopefully you all will have an update by this weekend :)

I'm sorry your laptop is broken!!!! Mine recently got fixed so I understand your pain!!! Can't wait to read more.

i love this story! i cant wait for the next update

Thank you for the 'not an update' update :)

Love love love love love love love this story. like no joke, one of my favorites to keep up on. Brian is the biggest sweetheart to care about Tammy and the way that he protects her and everything; just hope no one walks in on that situation, because it could be so misunderstood. Hopefully Matt will be okay

This story has been amazing still! Sucks on what happened to Val and I feel bad for Tammy and Brian being angry with her for saying stuff to Michelle. Well she was right, Michelle should've kept her legs closed lol.

Poor Matt! It's a very horrible situation that he's in but I'm sure the gift that Kimmie has planned for him is sweet. Tammy and Brian that is sure one way for them to get closer. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Short, schmort! It's not too short! Do I really have to keep telling you?
If you weren't so hard on yourself, maybe you would be able to write more :P
Don't hit me, I know it's not that :P But still... Don't worry so much, this story is amazing <3

Good, now we have that out of the way, let me get to the chapter.

I'm so sad for Matt still and I really love the idea Kimmy is (totally sounds like something I would do by the way ;-)), can't wait to see his world in the next chapter. Better hurry then :P

Okay, okay, now really going to the chapter.
I loved the little mother-daughter moment.... it was a little awkward, but that's good. It would have been weird if everything would have been normal between them. Victoria is trying and it seems like Kimmie is accepting her attempts. And momma is going on a date huh? Everything seems well in that household for now!

Poor, poor Tammy. I understand the whole situation bringing it on. She doesn't trust people yet. It will be hard for her to believe that one fight, or a moment of being angry with each other will not change things. Or at least will not make Brian give up on her.

Talking about that. It must have taken a lot for Tammy to ask him to stay. But boy will it be hard for both of them. You can feel something cooking there and I never thought I would say it, but I love, love, love the slow build up!
Now, get to writing... Let's make things lighter again! <3