Syn's Deep in My Blood - Comments, page 2

You just made my day better with this update! First let me tell u why and then I'll write about the chapter:)
So today, after almost 6 months I saw the guy whom I love with all my heart. It's not Brian(lol), it's this guy I really liked when I was in school. And his name is also Matt! He was playing basketball near my Uni and when I saw him, my jaw was almost touching the ground! And when I came home a few hours ago, I saw you updated. So here I am, trying to write a beautiful comment for this beautiful chapter:)

So, Brian and Emily talked....about everything. All those things Jimmy left for Emily were really touching. I cannot believe he gave away his house and money to Emily. God, the guy really loved her. And that ring....I got so emotional on that part. I mean, I can't believe how deeply Jimmy loved Emily.

But there's Brian as well. Throughout this story, I badly wanted Jimmy to be with Emily forever. And I honestly thought Brian was the bad guy here(damn, how could I?!!!)

Anyways, and I never wanted Jimmy to leave as you know. But now when I look back at the previous chapters and see the chemistry and love between Bremily, I can say that I was wrong. Brian was never the bad guy. He was the one who always supported Emily, he was the one who took care of her.

I really hope Emily goes back with Brian. And yeah, everybody deserves to know about the baby. It's really nice how Brian said he's gonna be there for Emily and the baby.

And the tattoos! I absolutely loved Mei's tattoo. The words are really beautiful:)
And then there's Kim's tattoo! Seriously a horse?! I can't stop laughing!!:D

It was a great chapter and I hope part 3 will come out soon!

You really have to keep us waiting for another and another part :P
You shouldn't have called it Epilogue if it just keeps on moving on, don't get me wrong, I love that it does move on :D

So call it however you want to :D

So my guess with Brian and Em was right, they meet up, they talk... they kiss... they....
And so on :P
And wow, Jimmy gave everything to her... which is kinda sad, even more so then before :O
Since he didn't know he was becoming a Daddy :(

And now its time for Em to make up her mind in going "home" with Brian and giving in what was brewing the entire time... or wanting to be alone and blaming everyone as well as herself...
Hard decision under the emotional weight of being a parent, you didn't meant to be, being alone, being confronted with the past...

And I really adored the tattoo parlour scene and the ideas :) That was really good, loved the way they were there for each other and wanted to be all part of it :)
And yeah the back tattoo does hurt :P But u can make it with your friends around ;)
And I really understood the sadness that overwhelmed them then again, seeing the love between some, while being alone on the other hand, having lost someone they all lost, and still being kind of in the dark... trying to find a normal way to deal with it, with the memories, with the stories, with the love you lost, with the friend you lost...

Emotional and raw... What a mix !

Really good one :)
Waiting for the nexttttt :D

Very bad insomnia! That leaves me with only 4 or 5 hours of sleep. So when I'm can't sleep I just read. And Im loving all their tattoo choices:D

@alittlepieceoffiction
Oh god you're crazy!! How can you read that fast??!! hahahahah I'm so sorry I had to break your hearts by killing Jim, I just had to... And Im glad someone likes bremily besides me :P hahahaha

Thank you so so much again for reading <3

@leyla.lp
i have been so addicted that i just got done reading chapter 90. Holy hell that was so emotional and raw. I love everything about that story even if i did cry like a baby when Jimmy died. And honestly as he began his downward spiral i have been leaning more towards liking Bremily! <3

@alittlepieceoffiction
Woooowww I'm sooo so freaking flattered to the bone after reading your comment!!! Oh god you're so nicee!! Thank you soo so much for giving this a chance and for all the compliments, I swear I couldn't stop silly smiling this whole day bcz of your comment hahaha

Keep reading and feel free to comment whatever you want to comment here, dont worry if I'm posting ahead, I would love to know your opinion!!
Thank you again <3

@Kimmie
I dont even need to write Kimatt scenes... you already write them on your comments =p

Emily had a big weight on her shoulders. So she had to run. Not a very noble way of reacting but... expected according to her previous actions =p

About the death. I never said its a who... =p

thanks for the big-matty comment as aaalwaayss <3

@MeRi
Ohh I remember the Making of thing hahaha, you and Rye started to write it and we let the idea go. I loved that one, sometimes I get myself wondering about that theme and maybe thats why it ended up on my story anyway. But dont think I would steal the idea to me hehe

Yeah, you're right to analyze Emily and the others relationship as broken. I agree with that. But she actually gave all she had to save him in the end. And thats something we can't deny ;)
And Brian's love. Well, I think he's my most passionate character. Nothing seem to shake his feelings away. And thats where the idealization of a perfect man comes from inside of me to the story. He's my perfect character, as always =p
The future of bremily?? You gotta wai for part 2 missy! hahaha ;)

thank you for comenting mei! Hope you liked the tattoo mystery, the plot of you and jimmy, cause it was pretty fun to come up with and pretty intense to write it down <3

@DaphneG
Ohh I'm so glad to hear you missed thiiss <3 I miss writing this too!! But I stopped writing for a month for a good reason, I was visiting Kim and Mei on their countries in Europe =p

About mei's tattoo, you say you are surprised haha Yeah, but what you dont know is that Mei has that song lyric really tattooed on her back, on real life, that's why I got that detail about her and made something out of it to fit in the story ;)

And yeah you're right, anyone should melt in front of Brian hahaha I know I would!
Read you story and loooveedd it!! Just hoped it could be bigger =p hahaha

Thanks for commeeentiiingg and still reading this <3

I'm on 39 and honestly this is all I have read since yesterday. I swear to god you are a fucking genius. I have laughed, cried, smiled, gotten horny (tmi but its true lol) and idk if I ever want this to end. I haven't found any stories about Jimmy besides this one. I am in love with him, even before this. All you're doing is fueling my addiction for him. Thank you sooo much!

Awhhhhhhh Matt and Kim are so damn cute! I’m assuming he made a huge romantic gesture to make things right between them… I mean, I know Kim wouldn’t just run back to him after seeing him with Val :p They were very cute, so I’m warning you to not break them up :P I mean, you not letting Kim come to the studio, she feels neglected now (yes, yes, I know the reason you did it, but let me be :P). Oh Matty, you better make it up to Kim ;-)

Jess and Zack made me a little sad. Zack with all the feelings he doesn’t even know how to handle. Missing not only Jimmy, but also his partner in crime. It’s really sad to see all of this happening to him, to all of him, but I’m really happy that Jess has enough strength to support him in this. And I’m not much for checking other persons phones, but I’m glad Zack did. I’m just not sure yet if I’m happy with Brian knowing. But I will get to that later.

I have to address the Mei issue first. I feel for her, but I’m proud she seems to have found a way to survive. Maybe it’s not ideal yet, maybe it’s still only one day at the time, but she is getting there and that is the most important thing. I really hope she finds herself and someone completely right for her to brighten her life the way that Jimmy has done so shortly.

And then we have to go to Brian. And Emily. Again. I hate, truly hate what Emily is doing to Brian. He seems to have lost his brain when she is concerned. There are so many things I could comment because of them, but I don’t want to. It bugs me that he is this far gone. Booze, drugs, women. Brian, come on. You just lost your friend partly due to all that shit and now… you are planning to follow him? I don’t see it past you to let Brian follow Jimmy. Please don’t do it….

Ugh… that brings me to the death you announced… who is it?! Come on Ley… get on with it and give us the second part!

@MeRi
Yeah, I commented on every single thing that took place in this chapter before you Mei:p
But as usual, your comment is great:)

About damn time young lady!

Lounging around at Long Beach (Brazil) and enjoying the sun and beach and not giving us the Update as it was written down below on SUNDAY!!

U better hurry with part two now, to make it up to us, you got one chance ;)

Anyway, so DaphneG beat me to giving u the first comment and she already commented on everything :P
SO what am I supposed to say?! Huh?!

Will give u a little piece of my mind anyway, and you know I would, right?!

So I still can't believe this story is coming to an end... BUT

I really liked the starting part of it, I knewwww you would give Matty and Kimmie a happy end, they belong together, don't they? Look how cute they were, and how Kim helped Matt through the dark days and the seemingly impossible time after the death of your best friend... but he managed through and he is happy with her, that is what matters... and he keeps going, or at least is trying to.. He want to make a step out of the dark and get back to life, that is good!

And I don't know the beginning of him wanting to go to the studio and the Welcome to the family reminds me about something that we wanted to write, and started :O U remember Le?! The Making of?!

Okay, back on track...
I guess no one was really having an easy time after what happened and how are they suppose to, everyone is dealing with grieve differently, like Zack not stepping out of the house, or even bed... Brian trying to forget what he can, with booze (DRUGS!! HELLOOOOO! After what happened, what an idiot, sorry) and girls...

He cant forget about Em, and even though he should, sorry.. still feeling that way :P
I don't know after everything that happens, I know they love each other and they should have been together, but still this relationship from Em and the guys seems so broken and weird... I don't know... Hahaha.. maybe coming back to that later on ;)

So and Mei... seeking help... blaming herself... yeah... not much to say to that, and that tattoo and dream reference.. that's where one clicks to the other with Jimmy and the past, huh!?
So sad still...

I guess Em won't be running from Brian, even though... she might be running... but Brian will catch up with her anyway... they talk... and probably end up together, it was meant to be, right? Somehow, someway? Maybe not, but hey... u know what u do :P Or will it be the ultimate end?!

So yeah, I guess I forgot some parts to comment, but I bet Kim will give u another nice review as well, and she will include my missed parts... ;)
So hurry with part two!

WE ARE WAITING!!!!
Great job! And nice song choice!!
<3

Yay, the epilogue part 1 is here. I really missed reading this story.

So, Matt and Kim are together now?? I'm really happy for them. The last chapter that I read, I thought they two would never be together. And I was soooooo sad for them! But now I'm really happy to see them together:)

Jess and Zacky seem happy as well. I'm glad Zacky checked Jess' phone and found out about Emily and the baby. And after seeing that text, he went to Brian's to tell him. But it seems like Brian's in a big mess, a really big mess. It's really heartbreaking to see him like this after he lost the two people he loved the most.

And what do I say about Mei? I guess she's trying to move on....and I'm surprised a little that she agreed to get a tattoo! That too, for Jimmy:)

And finally, Brian found her...Emily. She seems shocked now, but I'm sure she'll melt like ice after she talks with Brian. I mean she has to melt down! And I hope she talks to him instead of running away.

I came home a few minutes ago and logged in here. When I checked my notifications and saw you updated a chapter, I got excited instantly! I LOVE reading this story, it's honestly one of my favorites.

Can't wait for part 2!
Oh, and I wrote a short, one chapter story last night as it was Jimmy's birthday. You can try that out:)
It's called A Little Piece of Heaven. Hope you'll like it!

@MeRi
@Kimmie
haahuahhahahaha YOU TWOOO!!!
What are you doing here Mei??? hahahahah do you have cameras in my room so you can know when I reply here??? xD

HAHAHA I laughed sooo so hard at the suitcase remark Kim! Im never coming back to Holland after that threat, and if I do, only bringing one change of clothes in a tiny suitcase hahuauhah =p
And by the way (red and gray... xD) THE END OF THE WEEK IS ON SUNDAY OKAY GIRLS!!!???

<3

ANOTHER DEATH!?!?! Don't make me drag you over here and make you carry your own suitcase!!! :(

Tomorrow is end of the week... I assume I have to set my alarm early to read? :p

Thursday is end of the week in my opinion! ;)
Where is thr epilogue?
I neeeeeed to read it, u made us wait so long, and now hinting things?! Not fucking fair!

Epilogue, epilogue, epilogue!
Now now nowwwwwww!

@Kimmie
hahaha u described so well when u mentioned the missile hahahah
and yeaaa yeah I know I made a mess here but thats how cool ends work =p hahaha but i promise i will try to fix some things in the epilogue, u are tired of hearing that from me =p

The drugs thing... It has a simbolism, its not just about the effect of it but about the meaning it had to Emily. She only shared that habit with Jimmy, she never did it with Brian. With Jimmy she carried on the crazy life until she couldn't take it anymore, Brian saved her and brought her back to lucidity, and that meant, staying away from Jimmy. She even tried to set her new lifestyle to Jimmy, to change him, and bring him to lucidity also but she didn't succeed. So she lost the war and Brian too. They both surrendered to one last dose of heroine cause thats what tied Emily and Jimmy in the first place and now it should tie Emily and Brian, to surpass all the pain they were having. So thats the symbol. It's the bond the drug brings. And they had to remember Jimmy on that last night together, like they were both projecting Jimmy on each other. Go ask Freud, he'll explain you better... =p hahaha

And yeah I realize I was veeeery very mean to Brian in this story. But then it comes me, the writer who envy him and his life and wanted to be him or to have him. So.. yeah... I take a little joy by putting him through misery here, sorry =p hahahahaha

Well, for Mei and Kim, I promise there's still hope hahahah

But another death will happen next. Won't say anything else about it. You'll just have to wait and see =p *evil glare*
Will try my best to make a good epilogue! Have half of it already, or even more. Maybe by the end of the week its on ;)

Thanks for trying to coment again and suceeding this time hahahah <3

Goddamnit! In all this time on commenting on your story, this site has annoyed the shit out of me by taking my comments away, but things were good lately… Why the hell di dit pull that shit on me again with the last chapter?! Damn… I’m sorry, I already told you, I did write a comment, but it isn’t here :( So here I go again…

It feels wrong to go into details now we have come to the last chapter. Wrapping this story up had to be a hell of a job and I know there will be even more with the (10 chapter? :P) epilogue…

But mannnnn you made a mess in this last chapter, not like… go and clean your room kinda mess, but I dropped a bomb on a town and destroyed all of it kinda mess. Holy fuck… When I thought you couldn’t make it any worse you let another missile fall..

Emily being pregnant? With all her stupid decisions this was the one she is going to regret the most and I want to feel sorry for her, but she should have told Jimmy. It could have saved him, it could have stopped him, at least for now to get out that darker than dark spot he was in. But no… She had to pretend to know everything again… Good job Emily, look what you’ve done.

Don’t even get me started on the other man you ruined. Doing drugs with Brian and then leaving him, already devastated that his best friend died, topping it off with the love of his life leaving him? Because yes, she was.. even though we all didn’t like it. Ah mannn… this mess is too big to even comprehend.

I feel so sorry for Mei, blaming herself for Jimmy dying, all the what if’s in her head. That has done no one any good, in like ever… Poor her.
Poor Kim for doubting the whole Matt thing when they finally were headed somewhere. And then Zack… And Jess… Losing their friends too…. Pfff…. It’s all sadness in this last chapter….

Yeah… I’m not happy…. Maybe even more because it is all so well written… That irritates the hell out of me :P But I know you will do an epilogue and will make me feel good about this story in the end… I trust you to do that :P

For now… I applaud you! This story has been amazing and you have done an amazing job with it… 2 years… Holy shit… that is something else. Don’t stop writing, Ley, don’t stop sharing it with us, I don’t think I can do without!

<3

@MeRi
woow mei, thank you so much for your words <3
Really dont have words for how you've been suportive here through all this time. Since when you had no idea what this was about, you encouraged me to post and kept encouraging me until the very last word of this. It was such an honor and a pleasure to write you girls here. I can never picture exactly who you are here, of course, but I tried my best and incorporated my thoughts of you here, with a little bit of me on each of you. And make you all mine makes me so damn proud!! hahahahaha I really loved it!! Thanks for giving me permission to fool you and to not give you a happy ending haha... but I promise something good will come out of it. Pain brings growth ;)

love u <3