Syn's Deep in My Blood - Comments

Damn it! Where the fuck was I when you were writing this?? Just remembered I was rotting in hell(university!)
Anyways, I really wish I could have read it earlier because I'm sure nobody wants to miss out on a story like this one :)
It takes a lot of patience to continue doing something which is really beautiful and worth somebody's time. You have a lot of patience, girl! I wish I had some too:p

You should become a professional writer, this story has everything and every detail that any writer and I mean professional writer would put in her story. There's love, a lot of passion, music, pain and a tad lot of emotions (I'm running outta words, damn it!)

I honestly had no idea that Jimmy would leave in the end. I just kept on hoping that Emily might change him and my hopes were multiplied when Emily found out that she was pregnant. I really wish Jimmy could have met his little one :)

And Brian's unconditional love for Emily really, really touched my heart. It was really amazing how both of them held on to each other throughout the story. Some chapters brought tears to my eyes, some made me grin like a chesire cat and some particular chapters made me wanna smack Brian so badly!

The story of Jess and Zacky was really sweet. I loved the way Zacky helped her out. And then there's Matt and Kim. At one point, I thought they won't be together forever. But you surprised me! But I felt so, so bad for Mei. It just broke my heart to see her shatter when Jimmy left. But glad that she slowly moved on :)

This is beautifully written and every action done and every words said by the characters felt so real. Thank u sooooooo much for giving us something as special as this to read!!

I seriously read this entire thing in two days. That's how hooked I got on your story, haha. Anyways, I absolutely loved it. Your characters are so vivid and easy to relate to, and there was never a boring moment of the plot. It was so painful to see how the three of them were hurting each other so much through their actions, they truly are very connected to each other. I also really enjoyed the way you chose to end. Outstanding job! You should be very proud of yourself for writing suck a great story and sticking to it for the long haul. :)

Welp... it's taken me about a month, and I'm only on chapter 27...

I'm going to try to tackle this in one night because DAMN! 92 CHAPTERS! I congratulate you on being able to write a story that long, because mine are usually like one shots that look like they're supposed to continue but I lose ideas and end up with 20 different unfinished fics

@Kimmie
oh yeah Kiiim!!! It ended huh?? hahaha Took long, but it finally did!

Oh aaaand finally someone remembered Jess and Zaaaaack heeereee hahaha you girls always say that the other said it all but there's always something missing haha :P
I had to give that happiness to them, cliche or not, they deserve it ;)

And I got your point when you say its a little happy ending hahaha It's bittersweet, and I think their lives will always be. In my head, that's Emily's and Brian's punishment for what they did and it will be forever hunting them, that guilt. I kinda like that idea cause then... Jimmy was sort of 'avenged onefold' (seven is too much =p) hahaha yeah I know, I have devious and perverse thoughts! hahaha

And you said again ppl had commented on it all but... no one talked about my last killing :(
I thought that would be the most commented subject but I guess I was wrong hahaha I killed a7x, you wont hurt me??????? hahahaha xD

Yeah, there were a few ppl that called me Ley before and its not a nickname I like much buuuuuuuuut when the person makes it special, then its different. You earned that right Kim =p hahaha (Leandro once called me that and I instantly remembered of you hahaha)

And that last paragraph of yours couldn't close it better!! Now I truly believe on those things you said, I do. Thank you very much for helping me understand myself and being part of the slow process of my growing up, you have no idea how this was important to me and your presence here too! <3

Thanks for letting me use you here and you're welcome for letting you take The Horse with you ;) hahahahah

Love you! <3

@MeRi
hahaha meeei yes you did, I first posted for you and Rye privately and then you two practically threatened me to publish hahaha Rye made me the header and I couldn't say no to both of you, right??? There was no way... haha (wow, it feels like yesterday it happened, doesnt it?)
I had never published or written anything in english in my life and that was a huge step in my life. A game changer, cause you know I work with that now and I could only gain confidence through practicing on the story ;)
And yeah, I told you before I had never finished a long story like this. I always tend to abandon and move on to the next project, but this time... this time I made it hahaha and I can't thank you enough for the biggest support I had! You never failed to be here, and most of the time my number one commenter hahaha Love you for that <3

Thank you so much for letting me use your name here and do whatever I want with your character, including that cruel ending that embraced you. But as I already explained to you, that's how important you are, you would never disappoint Jimmy, but he wasn't ready to see that, unfortunately.

And... dont unsubscribe this just yet! I still have something in my sleeve! Soon enough you will see hahahaha :3

Well... thank you so much again for everything!! And I mean it, I will never forget this! <3
Love you! <3

@DaphneG
Wooowww, you're crazy, I cant believe you read 55 chaps in 4 daaaaays!!! Amazing!! hhahaha

And woooooow again!!! Your words!!! Always make my day! And this time made this entire story and the huge effort I've put on in to work out more than worth it!! I'm speechless and so flattered now! I can't thank you enough for your kindness and your compliments. It makes me think I really am a good writer :P hahahaha
You got the whole point of the story, as I realized on your words, and i'm so thankful someone did!! hahaha Emily was too damn tied to Jimmy cause they actually thought they were soul mates, they actually felt like soul mates but sometimes thats not enough... and there comes Brian to show them they r both wrong, but they take too long to understand it. Too long...
And yeah, sometimes you just learn at the hard way, thats how life is =/

When you said it made you believe at some point that this was what actually happened in 2009 I was blasting with butterflies popping from inside of me hahahaahaha it made me the happiest writer in the world, im not kidding haha you have no idea hahaha

I'm so glad to know I have a place in your heart, cause you definitely have a special one in mine!!! I'm just so sad that you weren't here before, so I could have more of your opinion, but its so nice to have you now and to know you're willing to read this all again :P Its the best feeling in the world! Thank you so much for giving me that <3

And you know what?? It's time for me to spit it. I'm planning a surprise here!! Soon enough you'll be hearing from this story again... but thats all im telling for now :P hahaha stay tuned!!

Daphyyy, Im flattered to know how your friends and family call you and to be able to call you like that too, I can't thank you enough! Your presence here was short but really really unforgettable to me <3 <3

Thank you so much again for being here and supporting me! <3

@Prscz
@alittlepieceoffiction
Woow, thank you very very much for your words! I'm really glad to know you enjoyed like I did, I appreciate the support <3

Oh wow, you really ended it! I certain had some moments during this story in which I wondered if it was ever going to happen ;-)

I have to say, for someone who doesn’t really believe in happy endings, you spread around a lot of them. And I’m happy for that. I was sad that you had to let Jimmy go, but I guess that was necessary, and I totally get it. I think I always have, but it was more fun to bug you about it :P

Jess and Zack are finally having their baby, it will be awesome… I mean, the man has no appeal to me, but have you seen how he looks with a baby? So much trouble to keep up appearance ;-)

Emily and Brian, destined from the beginning. I didn’t like her throughout the story, and Brian has been a very bad friend…. But I’m not getting into this again, we discussed enough. It was the only logical ending, and I’m satisfied it was at least a little happy (yes, still a big sappy person)

What more is there to say? Daphne cut all the grass from under my feet… But damn…. Well done on that comment, hun! It was amazing! And Mei added everything left… That will punish me for always commenting a few days late ;-)

It has been an amazing journey, all those years, all those waiting hourse… because damn, we waited lonnnngggg sometimes ;-) I’m happy you wrote the story, I’m happy you finished it and I’m happy you shared your thoughts. No half measures. Well done, Ley (is this comparable to the Em/Ems thing? Only me calling you Ley? :P)

I really hope you have relased yourself with this story, from every bit of hurt, pain, uncertainty or whatever that has been holding you from coming out of your shell. You deserve to live your life as you please and not as determined by others, or the others within you.

Thank you for letting me be part of it.

@DaphneG
Awwnn wow thanks daphne :)
I really appreciate that!

@MeRi
Thanks, Mei!
And u know what, I actually love to read your writings a lot. You're truly one of the most amazing writers I've seen so far:D

After Daphnes comment... I'm a little speechless on what to add... I mean she summed everything up perfectly..

And you know how much I loved JImmy in this story... he didnt always make the right decision, but who does in life, huh!?

YOu poured your life, your love, your sadness... your everything into this story and that is noticeable... not not that.. it screams at you, to read, to stay to listen... I did.. and I'm glad!
From chapter one, I told you to publish, told u to keep doing what u did... and look at it now.. a story finished on point!

U managed this amazingly.. and all those struggles and fights, and all those emotions felt real, you have an incredible talent in writing and I am always amazed by it.

I loved this story from the start.. still remembering how I had to nearly force u to publish.. how I got on ur nerves for more chapter, for faster writing.. but look at you now.. all done and saying goodbye..

Its sad to let go.. tears were shed, but this is a piece brought to its end.. and its good this way!
U need to let go.. of the past, of the struggles... its a part of you, but u can move on!

Great job le!
Awesome story, fantastic character.. even though I had wished for a different end :P
but u know that already, long talks about it ! Hahahah :D

Thanks for letting me be part of it!
<3

@DaphneG
What a comment... not more to add to that one... I mean... damn!
And yes, I know ;) And I love u to comment ;)

I really don't have words to describe how I'm feeling right now. This last chapter was just perfect!

Okay, now I start my big comment!

You know, I really can't believe it's over! I've been reading stories from this site for over a year now. And I feel so damn angry at myself for not reading this story earlier. Every situation, every single feeling, every word spoken by each and every character felt so real........

Throughout this story, I actually imagined this is what must have happened in 2009.

You've got that magic in your writings to attract people. Just take my example! I got sooooooooo addicted to this that I read the first 55 in like, 4 days! (not to mention they were so damn long!)

I cried badly at some points, at other times I felt angry towards some of the characters. And you know what, for some strange reason I never wanted this story to end.

In the last few chapters when I realized Jimmy was gonna leave for sure, I tried not to read this. But my efforts went in vain:)

I honestly felt so angry at you when you killed Jimmy. But then I realized if you hadn't done this, Brian and Emily wouldn't have gotten together. This girl, Emily, is so strong. She went through a lot right from the beginning. But dear Brian never left her side. This is what still amazes me!

Brian did piss me off at some points. Especially when he used to make moves on Emily when she was with Jimmy. I used to think why doesn't she leave Jimmy if she has feelings for Brian? But I guess now I get it why shee never left Jimmy.......Both the guys played a huge part in her life.

I loved Jimmy's character the most, right from chapter one! I loved reading his point of views the most because they were full of those sort of emotions and pain which a person feels in real life. His parts were very realistic and I loved them a lot. I just wish he hadn't left, in real life as well......

I have never fallen in love with a story before. But your one is the first, so congrats!! I just want you to know that even though I don't know you that well but you still have a big space in my heart. I don't think I'll ever forget you and some other amazing people I've become known to on this site.

I cannot end my comment by writing 'Loved this story from beginning to end' because that would just be unfair compared to what you have produced. So before leaving my final comment, I wanna tell you something else.

This June in my summer holidays, I'm planning to read this story once again (yes, I've grown a lot of patience since last July) I love to read stuff repeatedly, Mei knows that:p
So I hope you'll be here to receive another gigantic comment from me.

And I'm quite eager to read your other works as well!
Love ya!
-Daphy (this is what only some selected people call me, my friends and family mostly. I think u deserve to call me this as well:D)

God. My heart!! I love this story sooooo much! You are wonderful

This has been nothing short of amazing!! Wonderful story, making me shed tears every now and then :'-)

@MeRi
hahaa yeeaah im still here always thinking about finishing this finally! haha thanks for giving me more time chief! hahaha
i like busy days though ;) but fanfictions will have to be at second or even third place in my life for now on =p

update coming soon ;)

A signnnnn!
She is still here, thinking about us! :P

So update tomorrow? ;)
Fine... I give u one additional day.. But then ;)

Busy days.. Awwnn poor u!
I know what u mean!
Hope it gets better soon :)

@MeRi
@DaphneG
@Kimmie
hehe yeah its been a while I know =p *running from the punches coming from all sides*
I've been so freaking busy with work and... hmm some stuff lately that I barely have time to write now... and my criativity is going down the drain every time I try to write the very final chapter to this (cause maybe I dont wanna it to end =p) but i promise I'm getting there as soon as possible. I just wanna to have it perfect the way I wanted. But i know i will never get that hahaha
And about the length of the epilogue hahaha yeah shouldve called it normal chapter right? but hey its my story i do whatever I want hahaha u know I write too much, so my epilogue would obviously be exaggerated hahahah =p
But thank you so much for commenting and enjoying the biggest epilogue of all time :D (should get into Guiness Book for this or what??? xD hahaha)

Miss you! Last chap coming soon!

Suuuurrreeeee, everyone gets something meaningful…. And I get a … horse?! Come the fuck on, that’s not funny! :o And even worse! I’m sure my man is no crybaby! *shakes head*

Now we got the important part out of the way :P Let’s talk about everything else.

All the tattoos going around, damn, everyone had such great ideas. It’s a shame Jess wasn’t able to do it together with Jimmy, he would have loved it, but hey… he might look down on her, right? And then Mei… damn… I feel so sorry for her. Everything she has been through, now hearing Jimmy will have a kid with Emily, it’s so sad… And then Kim is abandoning her too (sooo uncharacteristic :P). I hope she will be okay… Oh! And I can’t believe she kept the fact that Jimmy kissed her! :o

Then Brian and Emily. Damn, Jimmy left her every little bit of his possessions. I’m wondering if she will go back if she will keep any of it.. I can’t hardly imagine it… That would be so weird. And Brian… her sober conscience, again. Just like he always was, and hopefully will always be. There is no denying the love between them and if they would have admitted to it sooner, Jimmy could have gotten over her…

Mann… I love this huggggge epilogue! :D


Ps Compliments to my fellow commenters @MeRi and @DaphneG, they already said everything that needed to be said!