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Crashed

How Bad Is She?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~SHADOWS’ POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~

My office door swung open to a breathless guard.

“What’s going on here?” I said standing to my feet.

“It’s Jay.” When her name was said I immediately ran to the small medical ward in the house and Jimmy was already at work on her. The unmistakable smell of burnt flesh filled the room as Jimmy was putting an IV into her arm.

“What happened to her?” I asked frantically as Jimmy was taking her chard shirt off.

“Shads you have to get out of here and let me work on her. This whole area has to be clean and not contaminated. I’ll let you know what’s going on as soon as I get her stable.” I nodded and left the room and my footsteps thundered through the house. I spotted Syn, Christ, and Vengeance standing at the door talking to several guards.

“What in the hell happened?” I asked in fury.

“We don’t know sir. I was watching the security cameras and seen her look up at one and I called the others to come to where she was. When they got there, she had lost consciousness.”

“Syn, when Jimmy is finished with her come and get me. I have some calls to make.” I said and left without their answers. I went up to my office slamming the door shut behind me. I went over to my desk and picked up my phone calling my alias and telling them what had happened with Jay and they told me that they would be over at our house tomorrow. Anger pulsated through my body and I picked my coffee cup and threw it hard at the wall letting it shatter to pieces. That son of a bitch will pay for what he’s done to her. Now he is getting a war and he will die by my hand.

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Hours past and I was wondering what the hell was taking Jimmy so long in treating her. I left my office and went into the kitchen where Ry was fixing dinner. I went over to the fridge and grabbed a beer and sat down at the bar. I popped the top and downed half of the beer before setting it down on the surface of the bar.

“Is Jimmy still working on her?” I asked spinning the bottle in my hand.

“Yes sir. He had me go out and get a doctor and bring him here to help with cleaning her wounds.”

“Did you see any of what he did to her?” I asked again.

“I only saw the third degree burns that covered her back, partially on her sides, and her backside and legs.” I sighed and ran my hands down my face. How could Jacoby do something like that to a young girl?

“Shads?” I turned around slowly and seen Jimmy standing in the doorway.

“You can come in and see her now.” I got up leaving my beer on the counter and following Jimmy to the room where she laid on her stomach.

“What did he do to her Jimbo?” I said looking down at her.

“His men mostly beat her up pretty bad, she has a broken arm, third degree burns on her back, sides, butt, and legs, deep lacerations to her chest and stomach, and…” I looked up at Jimmy as he hung his head.

“What else Jimmy?” I asked and he looked up at me.

“She was raped multiple times.” My eyes widened and anger again pulsated through my system.

“What are her chances of recovery?” I asked sitting down in a chair beside her bed.

“I’ll know more in the next few hours. People with severe burns like hers don’t last very long.”

“She’ll pull through this Jimmy. I know she will.” I said looking at her wounded body. Jimmy had put huge bandages over her entire back and chest area from what I could see.

“I know. She’s a strong willed girl but for the big question. What are we going to do about what he did?”

“Jacoby intentionally brought her back because he wants me dead. I called Corey, David, and Tuck and they’ll be over with every ounce of security and fire power they have. I want everyone dead in Papa Roach and I want Jacoby taken alive.” I explained looking up at Jimmy.

“You want him alive? What the hell for?”

“I want him to experience the pain she feels ever since he took her parent’s lives and I want him to feel the pain I feel seeing her like this.” I said getting up from my seat.

“I’ll be getting Syn to station guards everywhere around the premises with heavy fire power. Guards will be stationed outside the door and in this room just in case he tries something else.” I said going over to the door and opening it.

“I’ll watch over her tonight and see if anything changes.”

“Come get me the minute something happens. I don’t care if I’m asleep or not.” I said leaving the room and shutting the door behind me before Jimmy could answer. I went into the kitchen and found Syn eating at the table and I informed him on my plans for tonight and left the room without another word. I went into my room and made sure everything was locked and secured before lying down in bed. How could I even try and sleep when she’s in so much pain?

Notes

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Comments

@ReaperDreams

I read the first chapter and i thought the same, this sounds exactly like 23. I'm not reading the rest. Anyone that wants to read the original should look up 23 and the sequel 24. Can't tell me they don't sound similar.
Deeks27 Deeks27
7/25/13
@I'm Your Apocalypse
I'm not going to get out of this "writing game" as u call it just becuz a few people don't like the way I write. I put that on all my stories for the common respect people on here should have for others writing. I know people who get their stories published get bashed and have criticism all the time but this is a creative writing place for people who want others to see their abilities to write, whether they are good or not.
On that last note, I actually love this story.
If you can not take harsh criticism then you need to get out of the writing game. It is a part of life and you need to take it.
Im sure this isa great story, but I made it to chapter 4 and could not read anymore. I love Jacoby and Papa Roach more than I love A7x, so I had to stop. Sorry. And not to be rude, but its spelled Shaddix not Shadixx.