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Crashed

Taken

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SHADOW’S POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It’s been a little over 2 weeks and there hasn’t been any attempt of Jacoby taking Jay. Jimmy has begged me to let him take Jay out of the house and I finally gave in. The left only 30 minutes ago and I was sitting in my office doing some work on when our next shipment of guns, ammunition, and how the clubs were running. Everything was going good. My phone rang and seen it was Jimmy calling and I pressed the receive button.

“How’s the day out with Jay going?” I said smiling.

“Jacoby…he took her.”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~JAY’S POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Being out of the house felt so damn good for once. I’ve been cooped in that fucking place for 2 weeks and it’s about time Shadows let Jimmy take me out and have some fun. We were walking down the street with several body guards when shots rang out. Jimmy pulled me to the ground behind the car and pulled out a weapon of his own. He fired several shots at the ones who were firing. All of guards had been killed by the gunshots and it only left me and Jimmy. I looked over and seen a man hit Jimmy over the head with a gun knocking him out and another man grabbed me. I tried fighting out of the grip of the large man but something hit me and I blacked out. I felt the pounding pain in my head and moved my hands but I felt them binded together. I opened my eyes and seen I was strapped to a chair. A door opened and a man with tattoos all over his arms and a sick smirk on his face came into the room I was in along with 4 other people.

“Welcome to the Roach Nest.”

“Who the fuck are you?” I asked with venom.

“I’m Jacoby.

” “You son of a bitch!” I said glaring at him with hatred.

“Now Jay, what would your mother and father think if they heard you talk like that?”

“Don’t you fucking bring them up! You killed them!!” I yelled and one man slapped me in the face.

“You will not raise your voice to me!” he grabbed me by the face. He let me go and I spit right in his face. He wiped off the spit and snapped his fingers. The man who slapped me punched me over and over again until Jacoby stopped him.

“I don’t want her dead…yet.” He said with a sick smirk on his face.

“Now I want information about Avenged…If you don’t give me what I want, I’ll let my boys at you and trust me sweetheart…you won’t like it.”

“Fuck off.” I said letting the blood drip from my mouth.

“Have it your way. Give her a good time boys.” He said leaving the room. Another man pulled me up snapping the handcuffs I had on and I began to defend myself violently. All four men came at me and I started throwing punches and kicks. One man with jet black hair and just as much tattoos as Jacoby had grabbed my closed fist and twisted my arm behind my back and I heard my arm snap.

“That wasn’t very nice.” He said pulling my head back by the hair as he dragged me over to a table where he cuffed my arms and legs to. I struggled against the restraints but I just couldn’t get free. I felt the man rip off the shorts I was wearing and touch my private area.

I tried to close my legs but 2 other men held them open and the man with his hands on me unzipped his pants and roughly shoved himself into me. I screamed out in agony and he put a knife to my neck. When he was finished, the others took their turn on me. They slapped me, punched me, cut my flesh deeply but I wasn’t going to break down. One kept asking me what I knew and when I would cuss at him he would beat me even harder. Soon the men left the room but I was still strapped to the table exposed to anyone who would come into the room.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~JACOBY’S POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I heard the torture room door open and the guys came out slamming the door.

“She won’t tell us anything Jacoby.”

“Let her lay there for a few days without anything to eat or drink. She’ll talk then.” I said smirking. Everyone I’ve ever tortured for information has given me what I wanted and she’ll be no different.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~SHADOWS’ POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It’s been 6 days since Jay was taken and every waking moment makes me angry. That son of a bitch took her away from us and I will not rest until I get her back. I’ve sent out everyone to find her and no one has even located her. If this mother fucker wants a war, I’ll give him a fucking war. I’ll kill his guards like he did mine and then make him and his gang pay for anything they’ve done to her. He’ll wish for death to come.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~JACOBY’S POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I went into the Nest with the guys and she was still strapped to the table. I scooted a chair next to her and she was so pale and I knew she was going to break one way or another. I tapped her face gently and she opened her eyes weakly.

“Are you ready to give me what I want?” I asked and she looked at me with a look that would kill. She would be tough to break.

“Go…to hell.” She breathed out.

“Oh I’m already there sweetheart and soon you will. Rip her all to shreds and set her back on fire. When she’s passed out…put her back in Avenged Territory.” I instructed as I stood to my feet.

“You’re just going to let her go like that?”

“She’ll die slowly.” I said smiling and standing off to the side and watched as they cut her all over. She screamed out in agony and it gave me pure pleasure. Blood gushed from every point where they cut her. They rolled her onto her back and cut her deeply again and I could see her beginning to fade.

I snapped my fingers and they looked at me. I pointed to the gas and my right hand man took the jug and poured it all over her back making her scream louder. I lit a match and threw it down on the back and she erupted in flames. She screamed for only a second or 2 before she closed her eyes. She was doused with water and they unstrapped her and drug her out of the room. The smell of burning flesh and a trail of blood was smeared on the floor. The guys took her out of the house and threw her into the back of our van and I got into the passenger side. It didn’t take long before we were at the back entrance of the Avenged Mansion. I got out of the van pulling her out of the back with the help of Jason, our guard, and he held her up. I slapped her face hard and she opened her eyes. I laughed as Jason let her fall to the dirt. We got back into the Van and high-tailed it out of there.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~JAY’S POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I laid there looking up at the sky as they sped away from the dirt road they left me at. I rolled over onto my stomach and used my good arm to push myself up. I cringed in pain as I got to my feet and I slowly walked the dirt pathway. I remember Jimmy driving at a high speed up this little road to get away from those men who shot at us. My head was spinning and blood dripped from my mouth as I looked up into one of the security camera’s Syn had shown me. I dropped to my knees as I heard people shouting and I landed face first into to dirt unconscious.

Notes

comments? Any thoughts of what will happen after this incident with Jacoby?

Comments

@ReaperDreams

I read the first chapter and i thought the same, this sounds exactly like 23. I'm not reading the rest. Anyone that wants to read the original should look up 23 and the sequel 24. Can't tell me they don't sound similar.
Deeks27 Deeks27
7/25/13
@I'm Your Apocalypse
I'm not going to get out of this "writing game" as u call it just becuz a few people don't like the way I write. I put that on all my stories for the common respect people on here should have for others writing. I know people who get their stories published get bashed and have criticism all the time but this is a creative writing place for people who want others to see their abilities to write, whether they are good or not.
On that last note, I actually love this story.
If you can not take harsh criticism then you need to get out of the writing game. It is a part of life and you need to take it.
Im sure this isa great story, but I made it to chapter 4 and could not read anymore. I love Jacoby and Papa Roach more than I love A7x, so I had to stop. Sorry. And not to be rude, but its spelled Shaddix not Shadixx.