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Crashed

Still No Change In Her State

I gave Jay her medicine this morning when I woke up and she still hadn’t moved from how I laid her down last night. The lack of her sleeping already brought bags under her eyes and I felt bad for the kid. All she has now is us. I sat in my office dressed and ready to leave for the funeral home but I was making sure everyone was ready for the services. Ry had dressed Jay all in black and she was sitting next to Jay in the living room.

“Has she moved?” I asked Ry as I entered the living room.

“No sir. She never glanced at me when I was washing her and dressing her for this evening.”

“I don’t know what else I should do.” I said honestly.

“She just needs some time.” I pulled Jay into the standing position and hooked my arm with hers.

“If anything happens here, call right away.” I said leading her out of the room.

“Should I prepare dinner?”

“Yes. I’ll see if I can get her to eat something.” I said as we all left the house. I led Jay over the SUV and strapped her in. Jimmy was driving and we had 5 cars full of security that were heavily armed as he drove to the funeral home.

Jimmy parked in a space at the vacant funeral home and I helped Jay out of the car and into the building surrounded by the armed guards. I sat Jay down in a seat next to me and Syn. Several guard stood at entrances and various places around the funeral home and the chapel we were in. The preacher talked about the life of Jack from the information I had given him. Soon the bearers took the closed casket out of the home and we left and got into the car where we followed behind the hearse to the grave site. I had arranged where Jack would be placed right beside Grace.

I continued to watch Jay looking for some kind of sign that she was snapping out of her dazed state of mind but she never did. Jacoby has broken her so badly and I know she’ll be in heartbreak for the rest of her life until the man is dead and put into the ground 6 feet. I took a hold of Jay’s hand and led her back to the SUV and we went home. We all piled into the house to the smell of food and I sat Jay back at the kitchen table.

“I want him dead.” We all just about choked on our food as Jay finally said something.

“I want him to feel what I’m feeling.” She said looking around at us. I was too shocked to comprehend what was going on. She looked down at the food in front of her and started to eat. When she finished she got up from the table leaving us dumbfounded.

“Did she just really talk?”

“Yeah and ate.” Jimmy said smiling. I pushed my plate of food away and went into the living room where she sat being as quiet as a mouse.

“Jay?” I said and she looked up at me.

“Shads…” tears ran down her face and I immediately went over to her and brought her close to me as she wept. I petted the back of her head as she calmed. I looked down at her and she was fast asleep. I picked her up bridal style and took her up to her room and laid her down. She looked in peace.

Notes

comments please?

Comments

@ReaperDreams

I read the first chapter and i thought the same, this sounds exactly like 23. I'm not reading the rest. Anyone that wants to read the original should look up 23 and the sequel 24. Can't tell me they don't sound similar.
Deeks27 Deeks27
7/25/13
@I'm Your Apocalypse
I'm not going to get out of this "writing game" as u call it just becuz a few people don't like the way I write. I put that on all my stories for the common respect people on here should have for others writing. I know people who get their stories published get bashed and have criticism all the time but this is a creative writing place for people who want others to see their abilities to write, whether they are good or not.
On that last note, I actually love this story.
If you can not take harsh criticism then you need to get out of the writing game. It is a part of life and you need to take it.
Im sure this isa great story, but I made it to chapter 4 and could not read anymore. I love Jacoby and Papa Roach more than I love A7x, so I had to stop. Sorry. And not to be rude, but its spelled Shaddix not Shadixx.