Crashed - Comments

@ReaperDreams

I read the first chapter and i thought the same, this sounds exactly like 23. I'm not reading the rest. Anyone that wants to read the original should look up 23 and the sequel 24. Can't tell me they don't sound similar.

@I'm Your Apocalypse
I'm not going to get out of this "writing game" as u call it just becuz a few people don't like the way I write. I put that on all my stories for the common respect people on here should have for others writing. I know people who get their stories published get bashed and have criticism all the time but this is a creative writing place for people who want others to see their abilities to write, whether they are good or not.

On that last note, I actually love this story.

If you can not take harsh criticism then you need to get out of the writing game. It is a part of life and you need to take it.

Im sure this isa great story, but I made it to chapter 4 and could not read anymore. I love Jacoby and Papa Roach more than I love A7x, so I had to stop. Sorry. And not to be rude, but its spelled Shaddix not Shadixx.

that was an awesome ending to this story!!!

I think this one deserves a sequel 2 *puppy pouts*

haha i love this, this is officially my new fave story and I can't wait to find out what she does to him *grins evily*

haha I loved this! I love bloody gory things!

@Randa Rue
I wish I did have secret rooms in my house...it would come in handy at times when I want to be away from everyone in the house :)

I want secret rooms in my house!! Jealous!

ha thank you for the explaniation. For the life of me I couldn't rememeber who it was haha! Can't wait for more!

ha thank you for the explaniation. For the life of me I couldn't rememeber who it was haha! Can't wait for more!

@Randa Rue
Your wish is my command :)

Yay she's awake! I can't wait to read what happens next

I freakin love this story!!!!!!!!!!

:O I need more!

whoa! I was not expecting that!

I can't wait for more! I really like this story and enjoy its orignality that it has that others are to stupid to see... =)

I'm not even sorry if I seem to offend anyone by what I'm about to say. But, this story is VERY similar to someone esles story on here called 23. Most of the lines that I've read and compared with this story are EXACTLY alike.