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Restraint is Useless Here - Comments, page 3

Was so happy when Brian come to her rescue, been waiting for ages for Brian to punch Jack!

SynnerAtHeart SynnerAtHeart
8/26/18

Love this chapter, can't wait for the next update!

SynnerAtHeart SynnerAtHeart
8/26/18

Oh my gosh what a chapter! I loved it! I can’t wait for more!

@violetshade
Killing me with your kindness in the very best way! <3 thank you so so so much for reading, you freaking doll.

AvengedRomance AvengedRomance
8/25/18

Your chapters just get better and better! I am in quiet worship of your words and phrases as a writer! Worth the wait!!! We NEED MORE!!! Thanks for posting though, this definitely did NOT disappoint!

violetvictoria violetvictoria
8/25/18

@AvengedRomance
You're welcome! It's hard some days and easy other days, that's for sure! (haha, yeah "paper")

violetvictoria violetvictoria
7/29/18

@violetshade
Thank you so much! That is the ULTIMATE compliment. Isn’t it so hard when you can see the scenes in your head playing out like a movie, but the whole transcribing them to paper (“paper”) is where the struggle comes in. So like I said: ultimate compliment <3

@overneaththepathofmisery

I will try my best to deliver! Thank you both so much for continuing to read and comment. It’s such an inspiration!

AvengedRomance AvengedRomance
7/29/18

Yeah, Anna and Brian... That’s going to be insanely hot! Holy...

SMOKE BREAK! NOW! OUTSIDE, BOYS! PRONTO!

Oh damn that was so good! Please Bri please come save her!!! That scene bw them was SCORCHING!!! Soooo well written, I could see every second!

violetvictoria violetvictoria
7/29/18

@AvengedRomance
Oh I cried too. While this wouldn’t have been the first time I’ve seen them, it was going to be the first time I’ve seen their headliner tour. I’ve only seen them at festivals or opening for Metallica

A good one! Hahaha.

@AGirlIKnowNamedLarisa
Ugh, I know. It’s heartbreaking. It would’ve been my first time seeing them and I was SO excited. I’m not ashamed to admit that I literally cried when I found out.

And what fun is it if the villain disappears? :P

AvengedRomance AvengedRomance
7/28/18

Jack needs to just disappear. Brian also needs to save the day! Lol. I’m loving it and can’t wait for more!

I’m still heartbroken over the cancelled tour. My show was this coming Wednesday :( :( :(

I love this so much and I can’t wait for more

Jenny117 Jenny117
7/1/18

@overneaththepathofmisery
@SynnerAtHeart

you guys make me so happy!! Thank you so much for taking the time to comment—I’ll try so hard not to disappoint with the whole buildup. I am definitely diving into the next chapter tonight, as I’ve got a tiny bit of free time. But I’ve been thinking about it all day <3

@rockstarsNredpants

is it weird to say I look forward to your comments? Because I DO. It’s funny you say that about Maria, because she’s actually based on a woman I worked with about 10 years ago. She was a handful of years older than me, but VERY protective and motherly. And vocal. And taught me all the bad Spanish words. I was in a shitty relationship at the time and she not-so-subtly hinted that I needed to kick the dude to the curb and move up to something (anything) better. She was named Maria, if you can believe it. At any rate, THANK YOU for every kind and encouraging word you’ve said! <3

AvengedRomance AvengedRomance
6/18/18

Love it. Glad she finally got away from Jack, hope he doesn't start causing trouble though he probably will. Really hope Brian kicks his stupid ass. Poor Jimmy, but I am glad that he isn't friends with Jack. Can't wait for you to upload the next chapter.

SynnerAtHeart SynnerAtHeart
6/17/18

Oh man, I love Maria too! I think her and Val will make sure Anna is ok <3 So frickin excited to hear another update is on the way! I can’t wait for Brian to get his vengeance on Jack Frost...

I absolutely agree that we need 5 more chapters, pronto! But I write this as I'm neglecting to finish my next update to my satisfaction so I understand that life always gets in the way.

I'm loving your insights on Brian, especially now that he's becoming more transfixed with Anna, whether he's ready to accept that or not. I'm also so stoked that Anna mustered up the courage to leave Jack, especially now that she has a solid support group building up with Val, the guys, and Maria. I know Jack's retaliation is coming and I CANNOT wait for the Brian/Jack confrontation (I know I've mentioned that already but I am SO excited) and the one-liner insults that Jimmy's probably going to thwart Jack with.

Also, I love Maria. She reminds me heavily of a woman I work with. It seems that all food industry jobs attract this personality. I always chuckle when she makes an appearance!

Loved the updates, as always.

@overneaththepathofmisery
I wish I had five more chapters to give you right now :) Thank you so much for your enthusiasm and for taking the time to read and comment! I have the next chapter outlined; it’s just a matter of putting fingers to keyboard (and finding time to do so—families and jobs, man!)

AvengedRomance AvengedRomance
6/16/18

Poor Jimmy, I’m sad he’s sad that he didn’t make a real friend with Jack. So glad Jackass got the boot! Go Anna! *fist pump* Now, Imma need like at least five chapters tonight, yeah? :D

Finished Chapter 8... Bri knows. Jack is a fucking Coke head >_< Oh I so fucking hope Brian beats his ass... LEAVE Anna! Please, please leave...