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@LiveLoveLaugh
A moment I know very well from a former friendship... needless to say my eventual love confession didn't exactly yield the result I'd expected... But it's okay, it was awhile ago :)
@Red-Lips-Like-Razors
Haha that flashback is that classic moment where you want to say something & chicken out :P
@DHKroeger18
No need to apologize for not commenting! I hope everything is good with you <33 Hahaha weeeeeell, Jo might know now, but that doesn't mean they'll get together...or will it? :P Thank you! Glad you liked the flashback as well!
OMG realization!!!! Thank the heavens, I'm ready for Jo and Brian to become a couple! Sorry I didn't comment on the last chapter. Long story short, ended up in the hospital but it's A-Okay!!! Love the flashback idea!
@Red-Lips-Like-Razors
I'm sorry if you thought I was trying to steal your idea! I honestly didn't even think of the similarities at first. You're very talented yourself! I'm glad you saw I strayed though. Don't worry, I have a lot prewritten and it's in a different place than yours is, so no more similarities really! Thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you're still enjoying it! <3
Okay, at first, this was sounding really similar to my story, Broken Arrow. As it progressed, it strayed away, which is good. But I really like this, it's cleverly written and I look forward to more. xx
@foREVer_Mandy
Yay! So happy you love their friendship so much <3 As much as I like romance in my stories, a good, solid friendship means the world to me! Hhaha Jimmy's antics are being shown to the world :P Aaaand speaking of Matt, that's another relationship I've been working hard on. Even though Jolie has been friends with all the guys since forever practically, Matt was her first friend. So, he's got a special place. Read into it as you like :P We'll have to see what comes! HAhahahah Oh no! I can see you're having some serious turmoil because of Brian :P Weeeell, I won't say much, but you'll have to wait and see if asshole Brian will reappear or not! Thank you for taking the time to comment <3
@Avengedlover
Hahaha that totally makes sense :P I'm guessing I'll update again in maybe two/three days! :)
@overneaththepathofmisery
Lol it's classic. They're a bunch of fucking assholes :P Anything to embarrass each other!
@LiveLoveLaugh
Wellllll I was on here reading when I got the update that's why it was quick (: And I will be patiently waiting lol
Aww it was so cute. I love the bond she has with Jimmy, it's beyond precious to me. And the cover of a tabloid!! Way to go Jimmy!!!
I still think there's some underlying feelings with Matt, my gut is gnawing at me that there was more there between them, even if you are playing the whole Val and Matt thing up. They way he got so angry when he heard about what Alex had done....I'm probably wrong but I think it's more than a sister.brother bond there.
Brian was kinda cute in this. You're making it hard for me to dislike him in this story, and that's not fair because I enjoy disliking Brian. I feel like someone has replaced all the scorn on my heart suddenly with rainbows and kittens and I want my darkness and evil unicrons back!!!
More when you're able to please. <3
@Avengedlover
Damn! That was a quick comment :P You'll have to waaaait and seeee! Promise the wait won't be tooooo long! Haha.
@Avengedlover
Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter so much!! I was so happy to write it :) Jolie's friendship with Jimmy means a lot to me. I thought that little moment with Brian at the end was cute :P Glad it went over well! Don't worry about the commenting! I totally get that! Thank you for reading still! I appreciate your continued support! <3
@foREVer_Mandy
haha you got a point! There definitely is something about them ;P Don't worry! He was close to the bottom already! Thought there needed to be a little craziness :P OMG Jaws! That's hilarious! I totally didn't think of that! I had a Degrassi image in my head personally :P But your point about Jimmy is totally right! The friendship between Jolie & Jimmy is super important because it's unique, different from the other guys. Jimmy is just a bright light & Jolie is definitely lucky to have him! Awwwh, glad the last seen went over well! Trying to keep you on your toes with Brian! :P You'll see soon what's going on there! Of course you haven't forgotten Val :P Thank YOU for the comment <33
@overneaththepathofmisery
That's exactly the reaction I feel is most appropriate! :P Hahaha of course! Nothing else would make sense :P Love that wild guy! Honestly, all five were probably stallion ducks :P
@DHKroeger18
Hahah just imagine they always use to go off on adventures together :P They're just two little dorks when they get wild! :P Haha don't worry! There will be some more stuff with Brian...VERY soon :P Thank you!!
Oh good lord....Jo and Jimmy drunk is an interesting pair. Brian is such a good friend!!! Now admit his feelings to Jo lol!!! Great chapter!
Jimmy you crazy-ass fucker :,D Was one one of the 5 stuffed toys a duck? Of stallion size and not scared at all?
Jimmy sure does love those Ferris Wheels doesn't he? Although he didn't jump off the one in mine. Are you insane???? Don't scare me like that!!! haha
And I had flashbacks of Jaws with them drinking and going into the water wasted. I'm so glad there wasn't a rouge shark out there to take a bite out of his cute little bum. But this chapter was so much fun and I'm so glad that Jolie got to have this with Jimmy because no one else could give her what he did tonight. He's so adorable and lovable and amazing and well I could go on but you get the point.
That last scene with them all in bed and Brian calming her so sweetly tugged at my heart a little. I don't know where this is going between them because you keep throwing different scenarios out there, but I hope he doesn't hurt her. Oh, and I still don't trust Val even if she's been laying low. Bet you thought I forgot about that, but I didn't!! Thank you for the update. <3
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Chapter 16 was anything but Blah...so stop saying that!! I love the 'fillers' because you pull me into it with your descriptions and interactions with the group. You know how to tell a story, so stop thinking it's not good enough....BECAUSE IT IS PERFECT!!!
17 was pretty amazing too. And have I mentioned how much I love Jimmy in this story? I adore him so much, so seeing him the way you are portraying him makes my heart smile in a good way, especially on the days I'm really missing him. And wow, it appears as though Haner actually does have a heart, after all. Who knew? More please when you're able of course. <3
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