My Bloody Idiot - Comments, page 3

Oh holy shit, no way. This was a twist I didn't expect, how will this play out I wonder

Nooo way!!!! You're killing me here. Wait, so IS IT BRIAN'S? it has to be right? This was a twist i totally didn't expect, i can't wait to see what's happening next. Loved the update!!!

She's pregnant!! How will Brian take it? I mean, it's his considering that Riley's not been with anyone except him. I'm loving the twist!

Wow! What a bombshell! Ahh... wonder what riley will do...

Ohhhhhh Normally I hate it our the blue pregnancies in stories. But this one!!! Love it!! This chapter was too fucking good!!!

what will we do now??? :D

OHHHH SHIYTTTTTT
YOU DONE FUCKED UP NOWWW

Interested to see how this all plays out haha

Oh shit, I so didn't expect this!
But more importantly, I didn't expect Riley to be so kind to Jen after what she did. But I guess not everyone is so heartless :)
Waiting for more!

That's character development right there holy shit. I guess you made us all turn around on Jen, am still a bit iffy about her but this explains her behavior for sure. We'll see in time. But shit, I can't help but to wonder about what will happen between Riley and Brian

Oh Riley, what did you do now?

I guess you made us turn around on Jen, huh? I feel sorry for her, seems like she is acting all tough because there is no other way for her. Let's hope she gets a little more agreeable from now on....

No problem of a Brian-less chapter, but I do want to know if he is really moving out!

I think it's cool that we've gotten a sudden turn around on Jennifer. It definitely explains her behaviour. And it shows character growth in Riley that she's willing to put aside her pride and help Jen out. An excellent update, keen for the next one. :)

I guess Jen isn't that bad after all...
I mean she's got issues, and I don't really blame her for being how she is. I like Riley so much, even after what happened she decided to give Jen another chance :)

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Oh my god you guys! Thank you for all these comments. I'm surprised to see so long feedbacks and honestly - you guys really keep me going. I'm sorry if I can't answer to all of you individually, but trust me on this one - I really keep each and everyone of you guys close to my heart. I mean, even if I had a single reader I would carry on writing, but, man... I didn't think my style of writing (which is sometimes slightly over the top) could reel in so many wonderful people and hold them captive while I continue writing. Maybe for once I've done something right in my life.
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!

Okay, so I fell off the wagon with this for ages, but I've spent the past two days (finally had a quiet weekend of nothing) catching up. This is incredible, so full of emotion and I love that you used Kelly Eden for Riley's likeness, I adore her. Honestly one of the best A7X fanfics I've ever read, and I can't wait for more!!

And can I just say... Chapter 14 (and 18) destroyed me. Sweet fuckin Jesus, Gates is Daddy AF in this and just... I need a moment, or several...

Also, perfectly understandable and acceptable to write your own feelings down. My Syn Gates story, Broken Arrow, is literally based on a hard breakup I had back in 2012. And people love it, so, keep writing your own feelings down, it's great therapy.

Gah Brian get rid of that skank and get with Vex for f's sake, it's about time! Loved the update :)

There is nothing wrong with writing your own feelings. Maybe it feels good to put them to paper and not keep them all in.... I really hope you see the nice things in life too... I really hope you can still see that you have some damn talent... Holy cow... You are a great writer!

Enough for the sentiments ;-)

I love this chapter, it's really cool to look inside Riley's head like that. But can we take a moment to talk about what the hell Brian is doing? Yes, he is scared too... I gettttt ittttt, but he is annoying the crap out of me with that wannabe singer. What the hell is he thinking, huh?

I don't want him to leave, I want him to realize what Riley is doing and how she needs him, and then I want him to stay with her without being a bitch about it. Deal?

Oh no, I don't want Brian to leave Riley's house. Really hope he doesn't! And she still loves him, but Jen's constantly wrapped around Brian and I don't get why he isn't getting rid of her. It's been...way too long!

I fucking love this story

Oh god, the second half of the chapter was kinda scary :o
I really hope Riley doesn't get sick!

As for your question, I'm a business student. So yeah, I have to attend lectures, a lot of them. But I'll be graduating in two years, hopefully haha. Then maybe I can start writing again, it's an absolute pleasure for me ^.^

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Oh god, I really don't, haha. Between writing, work, and chasing a 13 month old boy, I have no time for life. You should see my mess of a house, haha.

I too suffer from anxiety and depression, so i really appreciate you taking this route. Its nice to know im not alone in this. Anywho, i love this story and cant wait to see what your master plan is. It makes it so realistic how in depth you go, which was why i loved writing with you. Cant wait to see what happens next!