My Bloody Idiot - Comments, page 2

I loved this chapter! But those last few lines I absolutely adored! That was so breathtaking, heartstoppingly amazing!!

It was perfect, exactly right for those 2! More please?

I just had a fucking heart attack. YEEEEEESSSS finally he sees what he's had all along!

AHH! He just proposed without really proposing! Love it! Great as always! I am kind of obsessed with this, as I always am with your writing! I can't wait for more!

Whaaaat?! Oh god, I love Brian!!

OMFG.I NEED MORE LIKE NOW I LOVED THIS CHAPTER

Riley's reaction to Brian onstage is so me though hahaha fuck. XD
I hope Riley gives birth before Jude dies, it'll break my heart if Jude doesn't at least meet her Granddaughter just once before she passes on
Also, super happy you updated, this is my favourite Gates fic at the moment :3

Uh oh, what if Riley gets to know about Jude? Hope she won't freak out much. Ohh, Riley so admires the Gates ;p
Now they both just need to come clean to each other.

Someone's paternal instincts are showing through ;)

I love how Brian is with Ralph and I really hope Riley is aware of that. Maybe she will finally believe that he will be a great dad.
But why is Ralph that scared? Better not be what it looks like now.... Damn...

Oh, and can I have a little recognition here for how sweet Matt was ;-)

Does Jen beat up her brother? That's sick...but I may be wrong, and I'm hoping that I'm wrong. I can't believe Brian's still with Jen, but I'm glad he's there for Ralph. The kid is so cute!

Brian is so good with kids though, the stuff with Ralph is definitely believable. I hope the little guy will be okay. Brian's gonna be an amazing father.

God you're putting me on the edge. Like, I expect for one thing to happen and then a totally different thing happens!!! Update now please? :D

Loved this chapter so much!! You're such an amazing writer, can't wait for more!! <3

Ohhh so she really is pregnant huh? Or... what was that weird thing with the test disappearing again? Or did I read that wrong?

I wish Brian wouldn't be such an ass about this... I was rooting for him so hard and now... not so much anymore

Seriously, Brian? Riley tells him she's pregnant with his baby, and all he cares is about the media?! Oh god, that man has the power to make me angry but still love him so damn much. And loved the flashback! Synyster Gates picking me up from school, damn of course I want that :p

Not gonna lie, loved the flashback. Young, long-haired Brian is my favourite, hence why he always seems to have longer hair in my own fics haha. If only he'd picked me up from school when I was fifteen... THAT VISUAL WAS HOT, OKAY??

Yes! Can't wait for more

WHATTTT NO FUCKING WAYYYYYYYYY! I need more like now! <3 Fucking pregnant this is will fuck Brian up and I can't wait!

HOOOOOLY SHITSTICKS! *laughs* I must insist on an update at your earliest convenience! I think Brian is going to be stoked. He seemed really keen on having babies with her... Those two need to get their shit together!

Oh god, she's pregnant?! That's one hell of a twist!