Bête Noire - Comments, page 5

Wow...Brian is totally head over heels for Marley isn't he? They should really talk, and when I say talk I mean actual talking and not spewing venom at each other :D

Brian!!! You sweet sweet man. Grow some balls and tell her how you feel dick. Greg doesn't deserve Marls. Fucking Jimmy and Kay got engaged! Jesus this was a awesome chapter! Need more soon Hollie <3

Aww! So sweet of Brian to do that! Good thing Greg didn't walk in when they kissed, he would've beat up Brian. Reading the previous chapter, Greg probably would beat him up good and Marley would try to stop him. Keep up the good work!

Awww! Kay and Jimmy are engaged <3 I want Marley's bracelet too hah Seriously though, this is such a nice chapter! Can't wait for the next one aaaand I think you should update soon :P

Oh boy, Oh boy... There was Brian, totally vulnerable, giving Marley an amazing gift.... And what did she do? Walk away again. You two stubborn... ugh!

And hold up... How? What? That engagement came totally out of the blue for me... or should I have read the last chapter again? :D

Wow, what turn of events. Was the Brian there who was actually a little vulnerable? And what's eating Marley? These two, I tell ya!! But OMG yay for Jimmy getting engaged. He makes me smile so wide, can't help it. More today please. You asked, so I answered :p

@Metalchick36
Oh they are being civil, but honestly it's kinda weird for me to write them behaving nicely towards each other because I always wrote them spewing insults at each other lol :p
And we'll just have to see what happens with Greg and Marley!

Thanks for the comment :)

Looks like Brian and Marley are acting a little more civil to each other. And I hope marley takes the guys advice about Greg, if not...then I wanna see the guys come rescue her and beat up Greg, especially Brian!

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I can't even say how much I appreciate your support, girls! I'm so glad that u all understood and respected my decision. Next chapter will be up tomorrow morning!!
Stay tuned :D

Excited to see where this goes with the changes! Loving it so far :)

Wow this isn't what I expected but I understand the need to rework chapters. Can't see what happens next.

@Hollie

I'm glad you're back! And thank you so much, i just uploaded the first chapter of my new story, i hope it will help me with Almost Easy.

@Avengedlover
Oh writer's block is never a good experience, even I was going through it for the past couple of days. But now I'm back! Ugh stupid boys, always the cause of our troubles :p
But Im glad you're hanging in there :)

@Hollie

I'm taking it day by day, and i'm having writers block with my other story, this story i'm working on came to me in a dream. and the whole depression is because of stress and stupid guys, myself.

@Avengedlover
There u are! I got a little worried about u, u didn't even update your story for so long. I know work can be a pain in the ass at times, and why depressed? Hope everything's okay. I can't wait for your new story <3

Well fuck me. Marley better leave Greg soon. I know too much about Gregs attitude that it wouldn't be the best for Marley.

Sorry I haven't been active lately been depressed and also work. But I'm always reading. I'm thinking of a new story and should be writing it soon. Mad love to you babes <3

Ohhh! I loved this chapter! Can't wait to see what your new approach is, so you better update quickly! :P ;-)

I loved the new chapter and I can't wait to see what you do next! I have a feeling that Greg is scheming somethings... I dont like that. I dont like it at all!

Now watch Michelle and asshole.....I mean Greg are going to start plotting to get them away from each other permanently........

I like thissss! Can't wait for more :D