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Expect the unexpected - Comments, page 4

@Hannah
@Rach Hell
@Avengedlover
@Bella5150
@Aggie

Thank you ladies ;)
It's not all done yet, but we are closing in on the end ;)
Be prepared!

I'm really happy you all like the story so far!

MeRi MeRi
5/31/17

Thats how you get comments hahaha tell everyone u are ending an amazing story lol

Soo the wedding is just around the corner and our fake couple isnt really fake anymore.. I just love them together and love how Brian's behave around Eve.. he's so good for her and makes her happy.

I really liked how you wrote that part with small conversation between Val and Eve. So so true..

And of course I dont like this story to end, cause u know how much I loved it since the beginning and it always gives my hopes for better tomorrow, even if its fake

Alright soo once again, I love this one, great as always Mei <3

Aggie Aggie
5/27/17

No this can't be over soon, I just love them together <3

Bella5150 Bella5150
5/27/17

This can't end nooooooooo

Avengedlover Avengedlover
5/27/17

Noooo, it can't be almost over, I just love seeing them together, they are really good for each other.

Rach Hell Rach Hell
5/26/17

I wouldn't mind if the "fake" couple becomes a real one and then handle everything. But let's see where you take this, waiting for more ;)

Hannah Hannah
5/26/17

@Avengedlover
@Bella5150
@Hannah
@Kimmie

Thank you my dear reader :)
For those amazing comments, the reward is up :)
I mean.. the new chapter of course ;)

MeRi MeRi
5/26/17

Where. The. Hell. Did my comment go?
I don't know what is going on here.... Ugh!

Okay, Okay. I loved the gift Brian got her! "Property of Brian". That was fun. It would be even better if it was someone that everyone could see..... Or.... Did you plan on getting her so drunk she will dance on the table in her underwear?

It's not a great idea she didn't tell Brian about the call. How... I mean... How can anyone ever think that is a good idea? And then letting it slip? Hmmm... this is heading for some major drama, I know it.

I really hope our happy couple would be honest with each other before everything starts, so that asshole isn't able to put anything in between them...

Now update soon, I need more! <3

Kimmie Kimmie
5/23/17

Whoa, property of Brian? Can't stop laughing on that one :D
So the real acting's about to begin, but seems like Brian actually likes Eve. Maybe just a little, but he does. Wonder what Eve's reaction will be when she comes to know about it.

Hannah Hannah
5/20/17

What a crazy two chapters! And I couldn't love them more. Can't wait for everyone to see them together and so happy with each other <3

Bella5150 Bella5150
5/20/17

Oh Brian you sly dog!!! This was a crazy chapter and I can't wait till more <3

Avengedlover Avengedlover
5/19/17

@DaphneG
@Aggie
@Kimmie
@Hannah

Thank you for the comments, lovely readers :)
I am currently working on the next chapter in the hopes of getting you another one by Friday... Maybe :P
No promises again :D

MeRi MeRi
5/17/17

The ex fiancé seems like a major dick to me. He absolutely has no right to speak to Everly like that. But I'm so proud that Everly handled the situation! Cannot wait to read what happens at the wedding :)

Hannah Hannah
5/16/17

That fucking asshole has some nerve!

Let me start by why the hell he thinks she owes him an explaination. Fucking hell... That start of the conversation was already infuriating me. He only fucking called her because he wanted to have some opinion on Eve and Brian?? What the hell was he thinking... better start with explaining yourself instead of wanting to have one. Are you crazy?!

Everything he said, but never really giving an answer. You are a fucking asshole. Now he can marry? Why couldn't he marry Eve? What the fuck?! He is just an asshole... did I say that already?? I can totally imagine him making up a story, throwing it at Eve's feet when she finally sees him again. He will cause trouble won't he?!

I am very proud at how Eve stood up to him. That was amazing. But I'm afraid it was all just to hold her ground to Chris. I need her to grab that phone again and tell Brian. Tell him everything. It will cause so much trouble otherwise and I'm not done with Eve and Brian! These two belong to each other...

Shit.. Better hand me another chapter soon!

ps. Can you give me some credit for this very quick comment? I fell asleep tonight when I got home....

Kimmie Kimmie
5/15/17

What the fuck??
If Eves gonna take serious his words, I swear to god im gonna kick her ass! Im also sure she will have doubts again and I really hope that she will tell Brian about all this shitty phone call right after she sees him! But everything, with all the details! So he can be the one to tell her how wrong it is and maybe its finally time to have a serious talk!

Graaah I'm angry!
I see what you're trying to do here Mei! But I can't be mean to you now sooo damn, fix it.

Aggie Aggie
5/15/17

Ahh, Chris is such an ass! How could he talk to Everly like that, that too after calling her for the first time since he left? Oh Eve, she shouldn't trust him! Brian's not like that, right?

DaphneG DaphneG
5/15/17

@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@Bella5150
@Aggie
@Hannah

Thank you all so much for the Lovely comments ;)
i have been a little busy lately, but there will be an Update beginning of the week!
Im planning on it, so stay tuned!

MeRi MeRi
5/13/17

Damn, this is so well written.
And I love this version of Brian so much! Hmm, they should do some serious talking though. Hope to read this soon :)

Hannah Hannah
5/13/17

Awwwwn they are just so cute together, I can't even... ahh
But maybe it's time for some serious talk between them, Eve still doesn't know what they're for real. Brian seems to be soo into this relationship and thats fine for me cause damnn he's just so freaking adorable when it comes to those right feelings

And they way you described the process of creating song by him, made me feel like if I was there. Soo soo great job!

Aggie Aggie
5/9/17

Brian and Eve make my heart melt. They are so adorable together! Can't wait to see them at the wedding but I'm scared their relationship will go down hill... but you can tell they are so in love with each other! <3

Bella5150 Bella5150
5/6/17