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Expect the unexpected - Comments, page 5

Yes! Yes! No one panic! I'm already here!

I absolutely love this chapter! I mean, you tell me that I'm a great romantic writer, but look at you! A chapter that doesn't even include a big event, or other big actions, but is just as exciting as it was simple.

This chapter definitely gave me butterflies, I mean... the texting between them was just too cute. And I love how they need each other so much already. I totally love it!

Can't wait to see what you have in store for us, but damn, it has me scared too. I have a feeling you are going to screw things up... Please tell me I'm wrong :P

Love this! And I definitely need more! <3

Kimmie Kimmie
5/4/17

I'm so happy that you updated!
Brian likes Eve, and vice versa. And they're getting used to having each other, a lot :D

DaphneG DaphneG
5/3/17

@Avengedlover
@DaphneG
@Kimmie
@LiveLoveLaugh

Thank you ladies for your comments :)
The next chapter is up, let me know what u think !!

MeRi MeRi
5/3/17

Just caught up with the last couple chapters (College is busy!) and loving where this is going! I love how Val and Matt knew all along! Sold friendship, but booo Matt had to interrupt!

I love the ease that Brian and Eve found. You're writing is so amazing! The chemistry and develpment between them has been great! Can't wait for the next update!

LiveLoveLaugh LiveLoveLaugh
4/24/17

Mattttttttt what are you doing?! WHYYYYYYY?!
Damn man, you know I love you, but you make it hard for me if you interrupt something like that... Fuck... Better have a good reason to do the interrupting.

So. Matt and Val know huh?
Eve should have know better than to think she fooled everyone. I just hope dat Val and Matt help them when things go to shit, because I'm pretty sure it will be. Knowing you. Everything is going just too well between them.

Speaking of going good. Brian coming over was so so sweet. Both of them needing each other after not seeing each other a few days. Both of them fully committing to this relationship now. I love how familiar they are together. I know they were friends before, but it's the whole acting like they have been together, togerther for years. LOVE IT!

You need to stop having cliffhangers like that! It's definitely frustrating.... And not only for the characters in your story :P

Kimmie Kimmie
4/23/17

What a perfect timing, Matt!
I'm so glad that Val and Matt now know about Eve and Brian. Maybe Matt will talk to Brian once he meets him.

DaphneG DaphneG
4/21/17

OMFG. Brian is probably gonna go off on Matt for ruining his night! I need more soon please <3

Avengedlover Avengedlover
4/21/17

@DaphneG
@Avengedlover
@unholy confessions;;
@Aggie
@Kimmie

Thank you ladies for all the lovely comments :)
The next chapter will be up soon, the wait is over :D
Have fun and leave me some comments !!

MeRi MeRi
4/21/17

Holy hell! Yes... It's been three days, but I still haven't fully recovered from this chapter. You had some nerve to chose this chapter to be the one to not prepare me on... Damn...

It's actually pretty funny that Brian thought he was going to resist Eve. I mean, as it seems he's been having a crush on her forever. How did he think he was going to not do whatever he wanted all along?

And again.. what's with the hint dropping, huh? "and even one thing concerning Eve, that I am not proud of but I wouldn’t hurt her again" I demand answers! I need to know what that is about! Because hell I'm pretty sure that one thing is going to put everything they are building up now on the line later on.

Okay, so you will be updating again, right? Now that I gave you a comment? :P

Kimmie Kimmie
4/16/17

Oh Holly shit Mei!
That's what I call the greatest Easter bunny gift! ahahah
I've already told u like thousands times before that I love your smut but this one.. damnit, waited so long for that!

So good to see her open up for him and see his good intentions. Just hope she really won't regret that afterwards, but c'mon.. how can u with brian :P

Aggie Aggie
4/14/17

Loved it! Happy Easter to you as well :)

GIRL THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER!! omfg. I need more! I need to know that they become a couple and don't have to fake it. Fuck Chris he gave up a very special person but I think Brian should thank him for that. Update soon please <3

Avengedlover Avengedlover
4/13/17

I'm here!
That was some really hot stuff, Eve finally gave in!!
Happy Easter :)

DaphneG DaphneG
4/13/17

I adore this story. I need it like air to breathe, like food, like water... I just need it to live... Dramatic? Of course not! :P

This chapter was so very cute, at least... the part of Brian and Eve being on a date. There is this kind a familiarity between them, as if they have been together for a very long time. Not just knowing each other, but really together as a couple. He makes her happy and she finally allows it, like it seems.

I love this story, did I already say that? It's true.

Butttttttt.... You are planning something nasty, aren't you? Something we will all be hurt by. What part of that story does Brian know? Of that asshole ex cheating on Eve with that bitchy whorey shrew? Or will it be something that Brian had a part in? I mean, I think that would hurt Eve even more at this point... Damn.. I hate it when you play it like this and I can't shake the feeling of dark clouds packing together.

This story is life... yes! I'm saying it!

Oh to close this comment off... With them being a couple now, or at least completely acting like one.. Isn't it time to show how Brian can blow her mind even more? :P ;-)

Now get to writing, I need this story. Like yesterday!

Kimmie Kimmie
4/9/17

@Aggie
So fast with the reading of the new chapter, huh?!
Ill try m best i Promise :) <3

@Hollie
@Kimmie
@Rach Hell
@DaphneG

Ladiessssss the new chapter is uppppp!
Where are the comments:P

MeRi MeRi
4/8/17

Awwwwwee so cutte!! <3
But you know that now I wonder what other half of the story Brain knows she doesn't.. and I wanna read about that very soon this time!

I just simply love them together, Eve finally seems so happy and in love and this kind of Brian is my favorite

Kinda felt like her, missing him all the time without realizing how much till see him again (yes im talking about concert again ahahah)

I cant get enough of this story and u damn well know that! Sooo I kno its Easter time but hurry up, pretty please :D


Aggie Aggie
4/7/17

So I finally caught up with this one, and yes even I was hoping some more action in the last chapter! I need more soon :p

Holly Holly
3/29/17

Well, well, what did we have here?!
That smut was fucking hot as hell! That was just... a totally new level for you!
I loved how Brian was just totally over her, showing what the hell she missed the with that asshole, and damn did he show her!

But what I loved even more about this chapter was the way they changed. I mean, I could have used so very steamy real first time for them, but this was even more beautiful. Brian was just acting like she has been forever there and Eve was saying him goodbye like a real couple should be...

Can't wait to see what you have in store next. Please let them be a real happy couple first before you screw things up again :P ;-)

Love it babe! <3


@Rach Hell
Ohhh I love your comment! So cute! :)

Kimmie Kimmie
3/28/17

Loved it, still blushing over this chapter, please keep it up !

Rach Hell Rach Hell
3/28/17

Well, I kinda expected something more...but that was great! Now that they crossed the line, wonder what's going to happen between them :D

DaphneG DaphneG
3/28/17