Expect the unexpected - Comments, page 3

Ohhh I never know when to expect a chapter from you! (see what I did there... I can't expect the unexpected :P) but damn, when you come through with the chapter! Holy shit... You are on a roll with the story.

That was some pretty professional bitching at that table! I always hated that Taylor chick and now I'm hating her with the force of a thousand suns... And well.. the bride showed her best side too... Noticed the sarcasm? And what the fuck was up with Chris? Why was he allowed to reminisce on the good times... on the fun times... on the times when he wasn't a complete dick yet? Or wait... he already was...Why was he allowed to have fun? He should only feel bad, think about the big mistake he made! Ugh! Stupid fuck ass people...

The only good thing about that brunch was how Eve seems to be mostly unfazed by all of it... That Brian and her can't stay away from each other... How they are about to find out how they will be as a real couple...

But yeah... I guess... You are going to fuck up things, aren't you? I know you will



There was only one good thing on that brunch...

@seventhtrumpet
@wildwiththewind
Thank you ladies for reading this all through and jumping on board :D
Glad u like it so far !

@Bella5150
Happy to have you back!
Update is there!

@Kimmie
@DaphneG
Thank you for the comments!
Loving every single one of them :D
New reading stuff is up ;)

I just came back from holidays and read all the new chapters and I absolutely love the new chapters! I love how close Brian and Eve are and I hope they can get out of there before Chris makes it any worse. Cant wait for more!!! <3

I just found this today and read the whole thing. Love it! Can't wait for your next update!

That chapter... wow! I don't know what's gotten into you, but shit, you are getting better and better!

Brian and Eve are sure close to becoming the real couple they secretly have been already for a while... Will they say those big words, or will you fuck things up before that? :P
I really don't think it's a good idea them staying there... That text or better said large story Chris send her... I don't know... It feels like something is going to happen....

Can't wait to see where this will go! Please update soon, babe! <3

Whoa, that chapter was something :o
Did I say before how much Chris annoys me?! And his stupid texts, god! I hope Everly doesn't meet him, who knows what card he might play on her.

I just caught up with the story as I didn't have much time to read in the past couple of weeks and I'm simply blown away. I can't wait for another update and I really hope it's coming soon!

Loved that fight scene in particular. Very well written! And I hate Chris. Like, really really hate him.

@MrsChristX
@Kimmie
I'm working on the update :)
So either at the weekend or at the latest beginning of next week it's gonna be up!
Stay tuneddd ;)

Damn this chapter. I already told you the last time that I didn't think you could do any better, but apparently I was wrong. Oh so so wrong. This chapter was so well written that I was feeling like I was right there, and boy was that fight realistic. Okay.. Enough about the form, let's talk about the content.

I really really dislike Chris, I can't believe he thinks he has the right to behave like this. Saying the things he was saying. Damn what an ass!
I'm really wondering what will happen now, because once the anger dies down, Brian and Eve need to think about the things that were said. Even between them. Are they ready to admit that it is so much more than just playing around?

Oh please I hope so. But I can't shake this feeling that you are going to let it all blow up first...

More please... Like tomorrow? To celebrate my week off work? Please? Pretty Please?

Ooh loved this, can't wait to read more and find out how Chris is gonna be. Brian and Everly are cute together. Loved this chapter.

@Rach Hell
@Aggie
@LiveLoveLaugh
@DaphneG
@Kimmie

Happy about every single comment from you guys!
Thank you so much!
Another chapter is coming your way now! :)
Hope u will like it !!

Every time I think you can't do any better, you prove me wrong. Holy shit, this must the sexiest chapter you ever wrote. Fucking hell, I mean.. I was happy that Brian broke, because I was sure on the verge of breaking myself :D :P I totally loved how they were making each other crazy, it was amazing!

And that smut... fucking hell... Could it get any hotter?

What the fuck is going on with Chris? Why is he on his high horse? Why does he think he has to have an opinion on this?

You better not let us wait to long on the next chapter (yes, yes, I'm one to say, but I'm saying anyway) :p

Hold on, Chris does not have the right now to give off the kind of reaction he gave! He broke up with Eve, and now she's with Brian, and that too happy.

And what a hot chapter it was ;p

I missed you!!! Sorry I didn't get to comment on the last chapter (life was a little wild for a bit) but I'm so happy you're back! This is still one of my favs!! Hahah omg that chapter was hot :P I''m so pumped to see what happens with Chris!

BAHHAHAHA Meeeei! You're absolutely the best hahahha Just when I thought I'm going that fuck yeaah the Queen of smut is back you come with no one else than Chris interrupting poor Brian hahaha so now I can't say nothing else that the Queen of 'trolls' is back hahha

But of course it was super frustrating at the beginning and hot at the end. I feel so sorrrrry for Brian lol but just can't stop laughing now hahha

Thank you, thank you for the update, good to have something nice to read during my small break, you are the best but u know it soooo im just gonna ask for new one sooner than later :P

I have been waiting desperatly for an update, so glad u decided to continue and what a chapter it was, still hot and bothered ! So pretty please do update soon, can't wait to see what Chris does after catching Brian and Eve in a blissfull moment !

@Kimmie

Well... since you were the only comment on the last chapter, I guess not many missed me?!
Or even recognized my absence?
Except for @Aggie :P I know you do too ! Haha !

Thank you for the lovely comment, Kimmie :)
Always good to hear some feedback of course!

Oh wow, Brian is sure putting everything out in the open. I LOVE IT!!! He is so open about his feelings for her, so completely flirty, but yet so vulnerable. Great job, Brian! Now I just hope that Eve will believe everything he says and won't be too afraid to show her own feelings.

And what is up with that game of theirs. They are going to drive each other crazy if they keep this up.... Someone will have to crack sooner or later.. Can't wait to see where you will take this next, so I'm absolutely bummed you will update after your holiday :(

@Kimmie
Maybe because u didnt comment on the last chapter...?!
Ever asked u that?
ill try to update before ill go on vacation ;)
when will u?

How did you not update for this long? :( I'm missing this story!
Really hope you can update before you leave on your holidays.... Pleasssseeeee???