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Darkness Surrounding - Comments, page 4

Ohhh, the girls are safe and back!!!

DaphneG DaphneG
4/4/17

@DaphneG
@AGirlIKnowNamedLarisa
@Hollie
@Avengedlover6661
@Burnedpasta

Thank you ladies for all the comments !!
The next chapter is up!

MeRi MeRi
4/4/17

Nooo Jo :O and emery holy shit. I'm glad the guys found them

Burnedpasta Burnedpasta
4/3/17

Omg, this was the darkest chapter so far and I have no idea how I managed to read it :o
I can't say how bad I feel for the girls, but I'm glad the guys found them.

DaphneG DaphneG
3/25/17

Oh god Jo.....and Emery. I'm glad the guy finally got to them I just hope it was in enough time. Please please please update again soon!!

NO GOD NO WHAT DID JO EVER DO TO YOU? Please tell me she lives because if she don't ill cry. And I can't wait to see Brian's POV!

Oh no, poor Emery!
And I know it's weird, but an angry Matt is so freaking hot!! Yay, he found Jolie!
But she doesn't seem good at all :/
Can't wait for more!

Holly Holly
3/25/17

Soooooo took me like a day in a half to catch up on the story and what can I say. I hope the guys find the girls, I hope daddy Pagano gets shot and I need more <3

Okay, so I just read Matt's pov only and I have to say he seems really hot with that boss persona! I didn't read Em's pov, don't wanna go there...but I hope Jolie and her are safe!


Holly Holly
3/18/17

I know Matt means well with the bid, but that's going to bite him in the ass...big time. Jolie is going to flip the fuck out when she finds out he did that. That being said, I'm surprised he was able to keep his cool as well as he did. Can't say it will start that way when he interacts with the Vipers.

Those poor girls :(

keep it it up ladies! I, as usual, can't wait for more!

I really liked Matt's pov for some reason, he seemed so professional in what he was doing :D
Annnnd, the Vipers are here :/
God, I hope the guys catch them!

DaphneG DaphneG
3/17/17

@Hollie
@AGirlIKnowNamedLarisa
@DaphneG

Thank you so much for your comments! We love reading them! Please keep them coming! <3

The next few chapters are a bit... darker and may be even a little disturbing so we will make sure to put a content warning up. The Vipers are ruthless, especially with their enemies. Hopefully the guys can find the Pagano sisters before it is too late!

KWally2 KWally2
3/14/17

Oh man, I had a hard time reading this chapter. I usually never read stuff where people, especially women are treated badly. Call me a chicken, but it's true :p

I want the good times to come back again soon, hope the guys will find the sisters very soon :)

Holly Holly
3/14/17

Well shit. I was wondering if the GVs were going to figure out who the girls really were. The guys better have a plan forming. Keep it up! Can't wait for more

Oh no!!!!
This is getting worse and I am so not liking it!!

DaphneG DaphneG
3/13/17

They need to find those girls before Gates and Shadows kill each other or someone gets more hurt than they already are.

As always ladies, loving this story. Keep it up!

Ugh, that was so frustrating! I seriously thought they'd find the girls!

Holly Holly
3/6/17

Me! Me! Me! ;)

Oh boy those vipers aren't playing! I'm scared for the girls.... And for the guys if they can't get their sit together!

Kimmie Kimmie
2/12/17

Those poor girls :( I am going to need the guys to rescue them soon, Kay? Thanks hahaha.

As always ladies loving it! Keep it up!

Have fun at the show!! I hope To be hearing about a US tour Monday and then I'll know when I'll be seeing them again.

Oh the girls...
Ugh, this is not what I expected at all! I didn't expect the girls to get kidnapped and Matt drinking away and Brian getting a black eye by him!

And the kidnappers are so sick, they're literally sending chills down my spine



DaphneG DaphneG
2/12/17