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Danger Zone

It’s been a week since I was taken from my home with my father and put into the mansion of Avenged Sevenfold. It’s been nice to be here but I still worry about my father. I wonder what he does and who is watching out for him but I figure he can take care of himself just like I can. Shadows has made sure while he was gone that one of the other guys, besides Vengeance because him and I were still not getting along, that I got my daily doses of Insulin so nothing would happen to me. I sat alone in the living room watching TV while Shadows was gone with Syn to take care of some business. The Rev told me it was about some kind of strip joint they were opening. Speaking of the Rev he appeared in the living room and sat right beside me.

“Jay, I think we should get out of the house.”

“Really?” I said looking over at him.

“Of course! I haven’t been out of the house all week and I’m getting stir crazy.”

“Alright let’s go.” I said getting up and turning off the TV. The Rev grabbed his keys from the hook next to the door and we left the house and got into his Black Camaro. I think every car I’ve seen so far has tinted windows.

Anyways, The Rev pulled out of the driveway and sped down the road. He pulled into the parking lot of a Pizza place and we went in and got us a table. He ordered an extra-large meat lover’s pizza for us to share. We sat at the table eating pizza and asking each other questions about anything that popped into our minds. I found that the Rev is just a cover name and his real one is Jimmy. It was really nice to call him by his given name instead of some other name to hide his identity. We finished the Pizza and then went for Ice Cream. Jimmy got a diabetic’s worst enemy (seriously that’s what it was called too) and I just got a small scoop of chocolate. I know I’ll need to take my blood sugar and probably take another shot of insulin after eating this sweet stuff. We left the ice cream parlor and walked along the boardwalk continuing our conversation and I found some more interesting things about Jimmy.

He can play the drums and he used to have a very bad drug addiction and Shadows helped him get clean. I’m very glad he helped Jimmy. He said that Shadows needed his men clear headed and not overcome by drugs because that could cause someone to get killed. We got over to the car after throwing away our trash and Jimmy was looking over at something.

“Jay we need to get home.” He said and I didn’t question his words. I got in and strapped myself in and he started up the car. He looked in the rearview mirror several times and I looked back to see a black tinted windowed car following right behind us.

“Don’t turn around Jay. We’re being followed.” He said and he picked up his phone and dialed someone’s number. He growled in frustration and threw his phone into my lap.

“Shads isn’t answering his damn phone. Get Syn on the phone while I lose these guys.”

“What’s going on?” I questioned.

“Do as I say please.” He said looking in his mirror again. I looked through his contacts until I found Syn’s name and I pressed call.

“Yes Jimbo?”

“It’s Jay. Jimmy says we’re being followed.” I said into the phone.

“Put me on speaker.”

I did as he instructed.

“Who’s following you guys?”

“One of Jacoby’s men.” Jimmy said as he sped up.

“Take the back entrance and I’ll have the Berry’s ready to block them off.”

“Will do Syn.” Jimmy said and the call ended. Jimmy turned sharply onto another road and the phone rang again and this time is showed up as Shads. I accepted the call and put it to my ear.

“Put it on speaker!”

I did as I was told again.

“Jimmy, the Berry’s are ready to block him. How far away are you?”

“I’ll be coming upon the back entrance in about 2 minutes.” Jimmy said and then gunshots rang out and one came right through the back glass of the car.

“Get down!” Jimmy yelled while pushing me forward in the seat. I put my hands on the back of my head and squeezing my eyes tightly shut.

“Get her back to house quickly Reverend!”

The call ended and I held onto the phone. I felt the car accelerate and the sharply turn onto a bumpy road. I raise my head up a little and more shots rang out. Jimmy pushed my head back down.

“Keep down Jay!” He yelled as he sped down the dirt road. My gaze went to the windshield and I saw a Hummer behind a bush. Once we got past the car, I heard screeching tires. I looked into the side mirror and seen several people get out of the Hummer and begin to shoot at the other car as it backed away quickly. I trembled with fright as I sat up in the seat.

Jimmy slammed on the brakes making the gravels clash against the frame of the car. I unbuckled my seatbelt and before I knew it Jimmy was over to my side and picking me up out of the car and running into the house. I was placed on the couch as everyone came into the same room.

“What happened?” Christ said as he sat down beside me on the left.

“Jacoby’s men are what happened.”

“Why was she out of the house Jimmy?” Shadows said in anger.

“I just wanted to get out of the house and I knew she wanted to as well. So I didn’t think it would hurt anything.”

“Rev, come with me and Vengeance give her something strong so she’ll snap out of it.” I watched Jimmy walk out of the room with his gaze to the floor as he followed right behind Shadows. I was given a shot glass filled with a brown liquid and I drank it down.

The burn of the whiskey was felt all the way to my stomach. I breathed out a ragged breath before I finally calmed down. I don’t think I’ve ever been that scared in my life and I knew I let my guard down the minute I was frightened but that will not happen again. I will be fully alert and ready to handle anything that is presented to me.

Notes

hoped you all loved this chapter...there's some more interesting things that will happen going into the story a little deeper so stick around...But right now I've got this killer migrane and I just need to get something for it and get some rest...see ya'll later!!

Comments

@ReaperDreams

I read the first chapter and i thought the same, this sounds exactly like 23. I'm not reading the rest. Anyone that wants to read the original should look up 23 and the sequel 24. Can't tell me they don't sound similar.
Deeks27 Deeks27
7/25/13
@I'm Your Apocalypse
I'm not going to get out of this "writing game" as u call it just becuz a few people don't like the way I write. I put that on all my stories for the common respect people on here should have for others writing. I know people who get their stories published get bashed and have criticism all the time but this is a creative writing place for people who want others to see their abilities to write, whether they are good or not.
On that last note, I actually love this story.
If you can not take harsh criticism then you need to get out of the writing game. It is a part of life and you need to take it.
Im sure this isa great story, but I made it to chapter 4 and could not read anymore. I love Jacoby and Papa Roach more than I love A7x, so I had to stop. Sorry. And not to be rude, but its spelled Shaddix not Shadixx.