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Crashed

You've Felt My Pain

I waited patiently in the cage as Jimmy, Christ, Vengeance, Syn, Carl and a few other security guards surround the cage. A match to the death is something Jacoby will not be living through and I will make sure that he doesn't. The door opened and Shads along with 4 other guards were leading the bruised Jacoby into the room. The guards pushed Jacoby into the cage and chained the door shut. There will be only one way in and no way out once this gets started.

"This is a Death Match! The first one to kill their opponent will be victorious!" Shads yelled out as everyone went quiet. I pulled one of the knives from the back of my pants and through it down in the middle of us. Jacoby immediately went for it but I kicked it straight out of the cage and Shads picked it up.

"Keep it out there until I say to bring it in." I said and he held onto the knife. I made my head rotate in a complete circle and hearing the bones pop before popping my knuckles. I stood there with my arms to my side and my hands balled into fists.

"You going to fight or are you just going to stand there like a fucking idiot." I said in anger and he lunged at me throwing punch after punch that connected with my face and head. I brought my legs up and got him into an arm bar and throwing myself back so his elbow popped in a horrific matter. I let him go as he screamed in agony and I hurried to my feet as it took him a little longer to get up.

"You think you can hurt me and make me quit by just breaking my elbow? You're mother was more of a fighter when I was fucking her than you are." His words cut into my soul and I went after him throwing solid punches which he returned as well.

We equally hit each other making both of our forehead bust open and blood trickling from our mouths. He broke apart after I hit him with a strong right hand and he fell to his knees. I went over to him but he grabbed a handful of the dirt and threw it into my eyes. I backed away shaking my head but fists were being collided with my face. I heard my name being shouted telling me to get up and fight back. It's kind of hard to fight back when you're blinded by goddamn dirt. I blinked the dirt from my eyes as Jacoby came at me again with full force and I seen the knife in his hands. I put my hand in the back of my jeans pulling out my concealed one and raise up fast as he came closer.

He slumped down on top of me and I kicked him off of me and I got to my feet seeing the knife sticking out of his gut. He looked down at his stomach and held the knife tenderly in his hand. I grabbed it and went behind him and pulled back on his head making him look up at me.

"Remember this as you die...All the pain you made me feel by killing my parents and then fucking doing the shit you did to me...is paid in full." I said with vemon dripping from my words before I took my knife and slit his throat from ear to ear.

I threw him down on the ground watching him as he bled out and took his last breath. I kicked him over and pulled out the knife from his gut before using it to slice the open the shirt I wore. I threw it against the cage and got onto the man's dead body and rubbed my hand in the blood making sure my hand was dripping before turning to the group of people and wiping the blood on my chest. I used his blood as war paint and I knew my battle was over. My parents have been avenged and so have I. No one in the territory that Avenged Sevenfold now occupies will be fucking with them because of me. As long as I am breathing air and life is still in my body, I will fight with them. I went over to the cage door where it was unchained and I walked out without another word to anyone. My job is over...Jacoby is over...His men are gone.

Notes

A nice ending to this story if I do say so myself :)

I hope all of my readers have enjoyed this story as much as I did. A big thanks goes to all who commented on this! You guys are fucking awesome!

Be on the lookout for other stories that will be posted soon. Until then make sure you check out Indestructable and the Sequal to The Undead called Waste

Comments

@ReaperDreams

I read the first chapter and i thought the same, this sounds exactly like 23. I'm not reading the rest. Anyone that wants to read the original should look up 23 and the sequel 24. Can't tell me they don't sound similar.
Deeks27 Deeks27
7/25/13
@I'm Your Apocalypse
I'm not going to get out of this "writing game" as u call it just becuz a few people don't like the way I write. I put that on all my stories for the common respect people on here should have for others writing. I know people who get their stories published get bashed and have criticism all the time but this is a creative writing place for people who want others to see their abilities to write, whether they are good or not.
On that last note, I actually love this story.
If you can not take harsh criticism then you need to get out of the writing game. It is a part of life and you need to take it.
Im sure this isa great story, but I made it to chapter 4 and could not read anymore. I love Jacoby and Papa Roach more than I love A7x, so I had to stop. Sorry. And not to be rude, but its spelled Shaddix not Shadixx.