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Lost Without You (Jimmy Sullivan)

Chapter 23 |Marriage|

Jimmy’s P.O.V.
Everything felt like a mess but when Ruby came to my bunk, Abby gone with Matt and the guys on a mall shopping trip, she sat down and just hugged me.
“I’m sorry Jimmy,” She whispered. I came and I hugged her back not really sure what to say. I didn’t feel bad for freaking out on her for some reason but I did know one thing. I loved her. I know that we had our ups and downs but in reality, I loved her so much. I loved her being on the band but just seeing her fill in for my best friend hurt a lot. Made me realize that he was never going to come back.
“I am too Ruby,” And I explained why this was happening and she laid beside me and laid her head on my chest making my heart quicken. I ran my fingers through her hair and smiled, kissing the top of her head as I held her.
“Ruby?” I asked.
“Yes?” She asked looking at me with her brown eyes. I came and I kissed her lovingly, passionately and with all my heart.
“Your so beautiful,” I whispered causing her to blush.
“You are too baby,” she smiled at me.
“Will….Ruby…I…” My voice trailed off but she came and kissed me, letting me wrap my arms around her and pulling her close to me. I was so much in love with her. I wanted her to feel the same about me so bad. I wanted to be with her the rest of my life. She was my everything.
“What do you want my love?” She whispered against my lips.
“Marry me,” I whispered. She looked at me and all she could do was smile at me and kiss me with all her love.
“I will,” She whispered and from then on, We were never apart and I was happy that my best friend and my sister died because if they didn’t, I wouldn’t have met this beautiful girl that I have fallen madly in love with.

Notes

hey guys, this is the end of this story. its been making me mad and a thorn on my side! I hope it was alright but really, I think I could of done better. but hey, I didn't give up, good right? Thanks for reading!

Comments

@RubySullivan0

No no no, not deleting please. It's not that bad, that it has to be deleted. Really not! Yeah you're right. F.ex. the marriage thing.. this just came out of the blue. One chapter before Jimmy was like mad at her and really disappointed and then bam everything's fine again and he proposes but the two weren't really together before. Just a bit strange. But I loved the beginning, it was amazing with Jimmy and Ruby how they just connected without knowing each other. Very cool :D

@Miss_Vengeance_6661

it was :) its like I had the beginning and somewhat of the middle and im like screw it! im done with you! I didn't want to give up on it so easily I don't want to delete anymore stories but to be honest, I think this one is worth giving up XD

RubySullivan0 RubySullivan0
12/28/13

@RubySullivan0

I think you can feel it when an author just kinda hates his/her own story :/ but I can understand if it's like that and you just wanna end it. Sometimes that's just really sad.. but hey that's all up to the one who writes it, so in this case, you :D No problem! I thought it's better to just be honest :)

@Miss_Vengeance_6661

ha that's ok I didn't like this story ether. I started with something then it just...it didn't go so good. but thank yo ufor your opinion It means a lot :) haha I just ended it I hated it so much xD

RubySullivan0 RubySullivan0
12/28/13

Hey sorry for not commenting here for a while.:/ So my review kinda thing: the beginning and beginning part of the middle were great and the rest really started to get worse :/ Some things are just seeming so off and out of the blue. I'm sorry but I just want to help you by telling you my opinion :)