Lost Without You (Jimmy Sullivan)

@RubySullivan0

No no no, not deleting please. It's not that bad, that it has to be deleted. Really not! Yeah you're right. F.ex. the marriage thing.. this just came out of the blue. One chapter before Jimmy was like mad at her and really disappointed and then bam everything's fine again and he proposes but the two weren't really together before. Just a bit strange. But I loved the beginning, it was amazing with Jimmy and Ruby how they just connected without knowing each other. Very cool :D

@Miss_Vengeance_6661

it was :) its like I had the beginning and somewhat of the middle and im like screw it! im done with you! I didn't want to give up on it so easily I don't want to delete anymore stories but to be honest, I think this one is worth giving up XD

@RubySullivan0

I think you can feel it when an author just kinda hates his/her own story :/ but I can understand if it's like that and you just wanna end it. Sometimes that's just really sad.. but hey that's all up to the one who writes it, so in this case, you :D No problem! I thought it's better to just be honest :)

@Miss_Vengeance_6661

ha that's ok I didn't like this story ether. I started with something then it just...it didn't go so good. but thank yo ufor your opinion It means a lot :) haha I just ended it I hated it so much xD

Hey sorry for not commenting here for a while.:/ So my review kinda thing: the beginning and beginning part of the middle were great and the rest really started to get worse :/ Some things are just seeming so off and out of the blue. I'm sorry but I just want to help you by telling you my opinion :)