Trashed and Scattered - Comments, page 60

@RamonaFoREVer
IT SURE IS

@kiss my sas
You are not too dumb. I’m just professionally cryptic ;)

@RamonaFoREVer
Thank you! I don’t know that I can bottle my creativity but I could sure try. No promises that it doesn’t come out in a heinous and wildly unsettling way.

Its so nice when we can all come together ;)

@kiss my sas
Good morning! Or would that be evening? I'm pretty sure it's the middle of the night for @fyction...

@RamonaFoREVer
Right?! It's a miracle!!!
Hello, friend!

@fyction
He better be!! I'm too dumb to find out by myself!!

Holy crap!! We're all here together!! How often does this happen?!

The 'seventh circle of hell' line? Amazing. The skeletons and ghosts metaphor? Perfect. The orchestra of collected abandonment? Ugh, -shivers- I LOVE your writing!

This chapter was so amazing. I felt like I was right there with Peyton, feeling her fear and emotions as she did. Can you're please bottle your creativity and sell it so the rest of us can benefit?

@kiss my sas
Well I’m glad you think so! The mystery boy is sloooooowly coming. He’s a comin

@fyction
Your fault. That was just imagery and beautifully written and wonderful!

@kiss my sas
Oh, you. I’m all blushy and shit.

Fuck. Me.
This chapter was hauntingly beautiful!! The imagery, holy shit. It's like I was a fly on the wall watching Peyton explore her old home. God damn it woman, this is fucking beautiful!!

@kiss my sas
I definitely have learnt. I nearly went to to the comments first and then stopped myself and powered through the whole thing before I ruined anything for myself!

@RamonaFoREVer
Hahha, I'm sorry!!! But you've learnt your lesson... Sas is terrible at comment etiquette ;)

Uhh, my arteries are just fine. It's mysteries that I'm not so good with! That's what I get for commenting from my phone.

Yes! I've finally caught up! I didn't want to miss this one in real time - especially given that there are likely to be spoilers in the comments cough cough (which I have also caught up with). Thank god for Sas' observational skills because my money was on Matt until she pointed out the hazel eyes line!

I'm useless with my arteries and I'll just be throwing out random guesses throughout the story with zero backing for my choice haha. As always though, I absolutely adore your writing and the whole monster metaphor for the mother? Fucking bellissimo!!!! Can't wait for more.

@fyction
I can't wait! I'm addicted already. ;)

@Buggaloo
Blair will always be my heart. But damn do I ever love Peyton. You’ll only fall more and more in love with her like I have. She’s the gift that keeps on giving ;)

I'm in love all over again. I thought Blair was the end all be all of women crushes. Nope. Peyton. I feel the need to hug her too tightly as if a hug could help mend those broken childhood memories.

@kiss my sas
LOL let me know what you come up with ;)

@fyction
Haha, such is life! And is totally understandable as well!! Dont stress about those little sip ups :)
Ok, I have to do some actual errands and shit, but then I am totally rereading from the beginning and pulling this shit apart!!!