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holy effing christ.....I'm like...flushed and stuttering and swooning and falling outta my chair...just...wow....panting....*fans herself* YES IT'S FUCKING HOT IN HERE THANKS TO YOU! uhhhhh. I love this whole idea of him teasing her all day, it's so freakin' steamy.
Aaaand, you're more than welcome for the help and thanks for recommending my stuff! ; ) Dominating Matt is the freaking best, but I think in my main story I probably write more Zack that way?? I dunno, they're both great.
@HereticBlood6661
I’m hoping that’s a good reaction lol
just WAIT til the next chapter. @violetshade is ready to kill me I think hahaha
Yes, Matt is SO SUPER SWOONWORTHY in this chapter!! So many things to looooove! Matt being protective, Care with the super awesome burn and her being a total badass while having the mom thing going on, the poor kids and Matt holding them.....love the stuff you added after I read it, the description of Matt is spot on!!! Love love love it and as always can't wait for more!!!
@Kimmie
Thank you!! I’m so glad you love it! This was a chapter I had prewritten for a while but didn’t know if it fit in the story or WHERE. So I’m so glad it’s getting the feedback it is!
Right?!? I just...love it. Lol.
@HereticBlood6661
I am actual almost done with the next chapter! It should be up either today or tomorrow!
@Kimmie
Oh don’t worry! The bitch will be taken care of.
@violetshade
yessss, I will have lots of her falling asleep on Matt.
No matter how many times I've read this it's still awesome!! Although...THE NEXT CHAPTER. Uhhhh, guys, just....just you wait! It's uhhhhhmazzzeeballls.
Matt falling asleep with her on his chest....might have to draw this out : ) so cute!!!
That bitch! How dare she leave the kids! That's just.... argh!!!
I love Matt in this, all protective.
But man that bitch is pissing me off!
@violetshade
I do need two days straight of sleep! Not months, just weeks lol. If I keep working these smaller shifts I’ll be good. Nice thing is, i already have majority of the next chapter written :)
Can't wait for the next part IT IS SOOOOO GOOOOOD!!!!
Yes I will continue to stay on your ass, but only when I think it might be appropriate! Which unfortunately I'm guessing won't be a lot for the next few months (boo). Yes, you need to sleep for like two solid days straight!!
@HereticBlood6661
I am so glad you liked it! I’m trying to get better at writing my chapters quicker but things have been crazy (plus I didn’t have my laptop for a week >.<) so I was hoping the longer chapters made up for that.
DAMN GIRL! I don't even have any other words. You may not update all that quickly, but you give us long ones and I really, really appreciate it!
@violetshade
I’m glad you liked the ending! And I am SO glad everything came across the way it was intended! ZV isn’t easy for us ;)
@Kimmie
yay! I am so glad you liked it!
Wooooow. I got to read this a bunch of times, but all without the bomb drop at the end!!!
Yes, this totally did our fav couple justice, and the smut was soooo hot! So many great one liners: "...missy?" and "it's gonna be buried deep inside you" (GUH!) etc etc...
Man... that fight too! His explosion was so hot and intense and then he's all sweet and stuff *hearty eyes*
And YES!! ROTR!!! Zacky better get ready ; )
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@violetshade
Of course! I’ll go back and actually link the stories today. I was just too tired to do it last night hahaha. I’m so glad you like the changes/added scenes!
8/14/18