When I Was Your Man - Comments, page 4

I am sooo sorry I'm couple of days late to reading the new chapter. I've been heckin' busy!!
But I can't wait to see how this barbeque pans out

Ohhh Matt, don't you go make any promises to your friends that you aren't willing to keep anyway. I foresee some trouble when Karma and Matt get together again... And I do believe they will get together again.... Even though that probably won't go easy at all....

More please!

I can't wait to see what happens! I'm glad they were so civilized at dinner.

All caught up and wow the new chapter...oh so beautiful. So glad they met up (with a little help from Val of course lol). Gah this friendship thing they have isn't enough, they should get back together.

I seriously can't get enough! I hope Matt fights for her, they're perfect for one another.

I'm happy they at least got along for this dinner, and not even avoided all the hard stuff. But I don't want this to end. I'm with Matt. It needs to last longer.

Come on guys, you belong together...

I was really happy to see Karma eat something other than rabbit food for once, I hope she starts trying to heal and eat right again. And omg, I didn't even know about Melissa but I looked her up and gosh, she's cute!!

Good. Karma and Matt need to sort their shit out.

So good! I wonder what's going to happen between those two... I need more! Haha.

She's touring with GNR?! That's huge!! I can't wait to see if matt really has the courage to drive over there and talk to her. I can only imagine she won't react well. Can't wait for more!

@Red-Lips-Like-Razors
Thanks so much for your compliment my love! It's funny you say that my writing has improved - large parts of this chapter were written even before On Tour started because they were originally written for a totally different story :D But thanks anyway, I'm trying hard to keep that up :3

Your writing has seriously improved over time, just saying
You're writing Matt's internal battle exceptionally well

Okay I just had time to read both chapters and I love it already!!!! I like that Matt is the one who's more emotionally broken over it :) can't wait for more

Aww, Matty, ya fuckin softcock, sooky puppy
Use ya words, big guy, tell her you miss her

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I'm so glad you checked out my story! :) there's a lot to come!

I got a bit teary-eyed and felt like I got punched in the chest over the mention of Jimmy's death but, I'm liking this so far. Also, I'm a sucker for Nicholas Sparks movies, so that little fictional one was pretty rad.

Great start. Excited to see where you take it from here.

Yay, u started the sequel! I'm so excited to see where u take it from here ;)

Great start, excited for more!