Run Away Before You Drown - Comments, page 3

@Hannah
Well, they kinda did, briefly, in the first chapter
He'll be back soon, though ;)

Oh don't worry, the Brianless chapters are really good. I like reading Rikki's pov, and I need more soon :)
Though I can't wait to read how they're going to meet!

@Devil Price
Refresh the page, I just updated again ;)

First of all, thanks for the song. I've been trying to find something new to listen to for months and even tho the guitar riffs seem too light for my taste, there is something in fact that knows how to please my ears.
Secondly, I've never ever before seen anyone burn down Johnny's! Like holy shit, girl, either people will hate you for this or love you, and if you ask me, it's the latter, since this is something fresh and new, and I like to sail in untouched waters if that makes sense.
Third of all, I was surprised to see that little apology about the similarities between our characters. Hell, I'd love to see a character of mine in a different story or at least a character that's something similar to my crazies. And, it may be that brilliant minds think alike and do in fact create similar characters, so no need to worry about that.
And lastly... Oh my god, girl. I'm already in love with the story. Finally I find something to read that has a strong protagonist with a fuck-you attitude that's not written by me. You can read your own stuff only for so long... So I'm already hooked. And I demand a second chapter! I want to know what happens next, like... now.

@Hannah
I'm a sucker for that too, the broody, intriguing introductions to stories. Which is why I've tried to incorporate it into my own writing. I'm so happy you're enjoying this so far! I'll try to have another chapter up sometime in the next 12 hours or so. :)

I'm surely sticking around for this one! I was instantly intrigued by the just the first para, I'm a sucker for descriptions and it just pulled me in ^.^