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Strawberry Fields Forever - Comments, page 3
Oh no! Poor Amelie! Shame on Brian for putting the doubt in her head! He wanted matt to move on, but when he does, Brian sabotages them? I hope that Amelie stays
Holy cow! You stubborn people! But let me start at the beginning.
I loved how Amelie just picked up the phone and how Matt handled the talk with his mom. So carefree, so ready to introduce her as if it was the most normal thing in the world! And then tem going over to his parents, it was so sweet. The way his parents were was amazing, it was funny.
And they had so much fun. They were having a good day. With the two of them, with the boys! I love it!
But then... then they were fighting again. Damn those two. Shit. They should talk about it, about their feelings, about everything. Instead of making it a fight. I sure hope Matt isn't doing anything stupid while he is out. I'm fearing from Brian... Please don't find Brian, Matt. Brian will fuck everything up.
More please... Like soon?
Aww, they were having such a good time. And somehow, I found myself laughing at the very end. Matt is just as stubborn as her! I really hope she will stay, but knowing women - everything is questionable. At one moment we do one thing and at the next one - something completely different.
I'm hooked on this story and I can't wait to read more. ^^
COME ON THEY WERE HAVING A GOOD DAY!! Man she needs to stay! I know she wants more with Matt. I bet she will wait up on him anyways I know it! But should we worry about Brian? I mean I don't Brian can fuck off he just needs to be happy for his best friend. I need more like now please <3
@Hollie
yeah me neither i kind of merged two chapters together because there were too many irrelevant things in the next one :D
Holy hell that was some hot smut!!! Damn girl!:o
Can't wait for more!
Oh. And what the hell was Brian doing. I don't know what is going on in his mind, but that was pretty assholey.
FUCK BRIAN! Ughhhhhhhh I'm so glad they kissed right after he left and they did the nasty nasty. I hope to god she stays, I hope they get together and Brian can see Matt has feelings for her and that she is great with the kids. That would be the biggest fuck you in Brians face. I need more <3
I seriously laughed when Matt kissed her right after Brian talked to them :D
So she's staying, right? That would be fun, and I need to know how Brian will react to it. I bet his face will be priceless!
Brian is such a dick! Just leave them be, she's not a kid anymore, godammit.
Another awesome chapter, I really she stays otherwise I.. I don't even know... I'll probably reincarnate as a character in your story and will kick Brians' ass for ruining everything.
@Kimmie
@Devil Price
Thank you so much for your comments! I'm super happy to have a new reader, glad you like it :)
I just read these all chapters in one sitting and I'm completely blown away by the story. I don't usually read M.Shadows stories, but this is something else. It's so addictive, I couldn't stop reading until I realized I had to stop reading, because there is nothing for me to read at this point of time anymore. I mean... god... this is so fucking good (excuse my language).
And you left us on such a cliffhanger... I can't wait for the next update!
Yay!!! SO happy you are back! And damnit, if you have 20 chapters, you better start publishing :P
Back to the story. What the fuck did Brian do!? Why?! I don't understand him one bit. Doesn't he want Matt to be happy again? Ass!
I loved how you put The Stage in here! And I can't wait for the next chapter... I hope Matt is able to prevent this from escalating.
@Hollie
haha yeah I am, I really missed this site. I have so many stories to catch up on haha :D
And about that update: I'm probably gonna update like thursday or something so you won't have to wait for too long :) <3
BRIAN u ass, what the hell have u done?!?!?!!!!!!
Yay, you're back!! So happy u updated this :D
So about the next update? ;p
That was so amazing! From Matt analyzing the phases of love to the sex to him regretting....
Even though I didn't like that outcome it was exactly right in this story and I love it! Matt wants to deny the inevitable and I'm afraid that will cause some problems before the happily ever after.
As I said...Amazing!
Someone told you holiday id's overrated? ;) :p
Ohhhh that was amazing! That ending was so so sweet!
Will he reallly give in? Will he really jump in?
I want moreeee
4/18/17