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@Devil Price
I was honestly surprised someone still read this haha glad you liked it. I always planned for my ending to be so abrupt since I wanted to, in some way, express how quickly their life changed after finding out she's pregnant. My focus was on the difficult way they got together, and then just some sort of epilogue on how it all ended. But I get what you mean. I'd grown so fond of my characters I actually never wanted to end the story, but I didn't want it to be one of those endless ones with 1000 different problems arising one after another if that makes sense to you :) really hope you'll like the other chaps of On Tour, too.
I finally had time to read the last chapter. Well... I would've stretched it out a bit, since I was so in love with the story, but anyhow I knew this would end like this and I'm really glad they had a happy ending and that you're not a sadustic freak like me who loves to torture your characters.
I guess I can finally get myself to catch up with all the new chapters of your other story. Yay.
I wasn't at all ready for this story to end yet! Even though that ending was amazing....
Shit.. .I'm still in denial, can you allow me? :P
This is... I'm speechless. This was such a cute story and I absolutely loved this epilogue. You're such an amazing writer!! Thank you so much for this adorable story <3
OMFG THIS WAS SO FUCKING BEAUTIFUL I:M FUCKING CRY!!! I loved the fact that they named their daughter Val! I'm glad the guys came for the wedding! Great job! <3
Ohh, this was the sweetest love story I've ever read! You're such an amazing writer, and I loved your previous stories too. Your story plots are way different than most of the writers, and it's a good different :)
I loved it how they named their daughter after Val, and Brian sang at the wedding?! ;)
Great job!<3
And I was sitting here, reading and feeling like a complete idiot not understanding a single word of the german even tho I had learned it for 6 years back in school. When I got to the end, I started laughing, realizing - bavarian or not- after these years I wouldn't understand it either way.
That was a great chapter. I have a strong gut feeling that in the end her parents will accept them both. :)
Well, so far, so good :D
Now the decision depends on Amelie...her parents may not like Matt, but it's not like they don't hate him with their guts either. And anyways, if Amelie wants to go to Cali, then they should let her go. I want a happy ending!!
Ohh, and i hope u get well soon <3
Come on! What's with the cliffhangers???
Matt! You're seriously not proposing this! How will either of then survive bring that far apart??
Btw its so funny reading the German! As I'm living close to the border German has always been important for us at Highschool :)
JUST GONNA LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT?! Damn I hope you get better! This was s cute update!! I can't wait for more <3
Oh no! I hope that Matt can win over Amelie's parents, but maybe his kids will help with that. I can imagine Amelie's mom taking a liking to the boys and then teaching them basic German.
She's fucking pregnant! Now nobody can argue what's best for Amelie. She's gonna have Matt's kid *grins like an idiot* Oh man, this is amazing. Loved the chapter!
Is she pregnant? The symptoms say so...
Anyways, I kinda forgot if Amelie's parents know that Matt has kids...if they do know, then shit. If they don't, still it's shit. Update soon <3
Ohhh she is soooo pregnant! I really hope her parents will like him anyway! Oh boy... Cant wait to see how it goes
Her parents will like him, right? Right?? Also, I don't know if I'm the only one, but I really want Lucile to find out about Matt and Amelie just so I can laugh haha
I was not prepared for that ending. I full out laughed, cried, and cheerleadered through this story.
10/19/18