Expect the unexpected - Comments, page 9

Ha! I knew its not gonna be that easy and the guys wont buy it at first.. at least Eve seems to made girls believe.. or they are not pretending that hard anymore?

Good one, keep going

@Aggie
Dont lie to me :P
I know where u live! Hahaha !
Dont be mean to me, I'm still sick! I desever to be pampered and loved !

@DaphneG
Thank you dear!
Feeling little better, some more days of rest and I'll be fine :)

@unholy confessions;;
Thank you!!
I'm really glad u liked it!

@Kimmie
What a long comment!
I love that, but u know that right?

I might hit u in about 9 days :P at the concert ! Haha ! Now u gonna be scared all night long :P

Loved ur suggestions... but well, u didnt think i would tell u the answer to any of that, right?!

Pffff one chapter... I'm pretty sure you are feigning sickniss so you have an excuse to not update this more this week... Not nice Mei, not nice :P

Don't hit me please? :D (I'm even more scared now, because you will be actually able to do it in a little over a week, hahahaha)

Okay, Okay, I'll get back to the chapter! I really love the fact that Eve is feeling a little more confident now, I think Brian's attention is doing that to her and I hope she realizes that soon. He was amazing in handling that Tyler bitch... really... are there even people like that?

Don't answer, I know there are. Ugh... stupid ass woman!

So now they are going to get ready together before the party and Brian snatched her bills.
1. Brian... you are not going to keep the 'no funny business'-rule, are you? :P
2. What is he going to do with those bills, is he going to pay them for her, or is he taking them away so she gets evicted and needs to move in with him? I know, mean, but it will give him the reason to comfort her even more...

Okay, okay, getting ahead of myself :P Please give me another chapter before my brain runs any wilder? ;-)

<3

Loving it. Can't wait to see what happens at the party!!

Yeah, I was kinda wondering why you haven't updated this yet. Hope you're feeling good now ;)
And about the chapter, oh god I just love Brian so much! Ugh, Tyler was truly a bitch :p

I didn't miss you :P

But because you are sick, u deserve a littlw sweetness sooo I will lie a little bit and say that the chapter was simply amazing and its already nothing new.

So it was some old friend huh? And I was searching something more behind that haha the way brian solved the problem.. I was laughing so hard! Eve finally seems to open up a little bit, still.. why the fuck she didn't before? What Brian did to her or what she thinks that he did??!!-

Now the party.. something tells me that not all of them will buy the story of happy in love relationship.. especially one person. But let's see, and you better hurry up this time or I won't lie that nicely anymore in those comments :P

@Kimmie

Funny, you smartass :P
Not 3 Chapters ! 1... and mostly because I am sick... and yesterday couldnt log in here...
But today it's working again, so the missing chapter will be uploaded in a few :)

@MeRi
Don't you think it´s a little weird that you concentrate this weeks 3 chapters at the end of the week? ;-p

Not that I'm complaining... I mean as long as I get all 3 of them :-D

@DaphneG
@Aggie
@forREVer-A7X
@Kimmie

Thank you for the great comments!
Really appreciate the feedback!

New Chapter coming tomorrow :)

PS. @Aggie and @Kimmie, I know you had been waiting on Monday already... Sorry :P
But tomorrow it will be !

I know you don't believe me, but I really really really already did a comment here!
But for you..... I will do it again... ;-) :P

Damn, you making me doubt my undying love for Matt, Brian is so damn funny in this story, and yet so sweet... I love him! Maybe I should make him husband number 3 ;-) I love him showing up at her office, wrapping everyone around is talented fingers, haha, so funny.

The interaction between the lovely couple to be is just so amazingly written, damnit Mei, I can't stand you good in writing this... especially when you hold all the power!

The power to keep us wondering why the hell she hates Brian that much
The power to bring some nasty person in, spoiling all the shopping fun
And especially the power to keep the new chapter from us...

I need it! Pleassssseeee I'm begging you!

<3

I am beyond curious about why she hates Brian so much and I bet it's Brian's ex. Ooooooh I'm going g to knock her the hell out!!!!

Oh oh oh whos that now? Brians ex? One of the friends? Well not friends if they say such a thing but whooi?? Mei? You know that I hate that! Hahha

Now back to the chapter- cant help but smile reading them two together. So funny and cute. Also im already twice that curious about why she hates him than I was before. You're having fun there huh? Seeing us all curious, knowing that its all in your hands.. but u know that I have the twin power soo.. be careful what you think of..

Oh no, who's wanting to ruin their shopping time now?!

@DaphneG
@Avengedlover
@Kimmie
@AGirlIKnowNamedLarisa
@Aggie

So many great comments!
Thank you all so much!
I'm really glad u like this !

Bahahha another Brian's chapter? I like that! You're making that so funny and serious at the same time! I love him being so around her and pretending his just playing his role but heyy we all here know that there's something behind this playing :P

And she.. shes so adorable with her being mad at him and all this hate ahaha now I cant wait to see her thoughts about that cause she must be all confused haha

Love it!

I am loving this story. I believe there is more behind Everly's reaction to Brian's flirting and I can't wait to see what it is. Keep it up!

Ohhh wow! I already love this story so damn much!

I love Brian here, great character! And why is Everly hating him? She was so close in telling! Can't wait for the party.... Lets see how convincing they can be :D

I loved Brian! But I wish Everly would stop hating Brian! I know somewhere in her heart she secretly loves him! Can't wait for another update

Well, this seemed like a fun chapter!
I'm loving Brian here, and I'm also loving the way Everly is towards him :)
Need more soon!!

Ohhh I absolutely adored this chapter!
The Brian in this story is the how I love you writing him.... Funny, witty, and more to it than seems at the first look. So much fun!

And well, this chapter was even so much more. I loved the struggle Everly was going true, ending up in her chosing for option 'Brian'. And I mean... who wouldnt?!

But you know... @Aggie actually said it all! That was a perfect comment! :)