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@DaphneG
@vb95
@Avengedlover
@Kimmie
Awwn thank you guys so much for the comments :)
Really appreciate them!
Hopefully more coming this week... but cannot promise anything yet!
WHICH WORDS?!!?! Fucking hell! I didn't want to start this comment on a complaint, but you asked for it, bringing it up in the 5the sentence of this chapter! :P I cant take the stories in my head anymore, I need to know what happened between them!!
Okay... Back to other things.
Brian knows just what he needs from Eve, and luckily for him... (and her)... she listens to him. Come on Everly, you know you want to. EVerything is much better when you go with it... go with what you are really feeling inside but pushing it back, or scared to give into.
Brother and sister huh? That was his excuse this time... Good one Bri. I really didn't like that paragraph though... and you can totally imagine why :P I mean, the man smiled at me during the two concerts last week, you know that right? It's inevitable.... ;-) :P
Good, Good, I digress again....
That little "play" at the table was damn hot... Seriously, if they finally "play" they are so damn good together. I think they need a very drunk night, let go of their inhabitions! Ready for a Avenged style party, definitely :P
So, time to wrap this up. What the fuck was the wondertwins talking about?! Seriously, that's just plain rude. Those assholes deserve a punch or two or three. And I have a feeling Brian is going to take care of it...
You are mean for leaving us with a cliffhanger, but damn how I love this story!! I need moreeeeeeee.
<3 <3 <3
Brian is gonna beat that ass!!! I need to know if they actually fall for each other! It's killing me they are so cute together!! I can't wait for more <3
@DaphneG
Thank you Daphne!
I'll update soon!
@Aggie
All ur fault !
I waited and waited for ur comments, but they never came...
So I couldn't write any further due to sadness :P
Kidding!
I was just so busy going to the Avenged Shows last week that I didn't have any time to write :P
Which is a very reasonable and solid excuse if u ask me ;)
And u know @Aggie what I am talking about ;) Don't you!?
I came here again today in hope for finding new chapter and realized that I didn't leave a comment before! Bad Aggie!!
So lets make a deal, I say some nice words and you update haha
But seriously now. It won't be surprise if I say that I loved the Eve/Bri situation. That was so touchy and cute. Still the memories back in their heads and I so wish that she would finally open up and tell why she stoped to "like" him. I mean.. he seems to have no clue, so I bet he was too drunk or.. that was something what Chris guy told her and it wasnt true at all..
Damn you Mei... don't let us wait too long :(
Uhh, I guess Brian does have hots for Eve! And did I mention they make a great couple, even though it's all acting?
Can't wait for more!
@forREVer-A7X
Thats the big question, right?
Thank you for the comment dear!
@Bella5150
yeay new commenter ;)
Ohh thank you so much!
You gotta wait a little longer for that info :P
Omg that was spool cute, I am severely curious as to what went wrong between them, they were so close so what happened?
Ohhh I love those filler chapter! Hell, I love every chapter of this story...
But damn, the suspense is killing me! I need hem to fall more quickly, even if it is just for one night. And damn! I need to know what happened!
Are you going to tell me one monday? Pretty please? ;-)
Little shorter comment, but know I love this again, Brian is supercute and Eve... well, it's just waiting for more to happen.
Awhhh Brian! You are the cutest!
Okay, okay, I'll start at the beginning...
Why does my Mattieboy allow such nasty people at his party... must be friends of Val (sorry, sorry, it was too easy :P)?
That Katy is just as mean as Tyler and why are they so determined to hurt Everyly, was Chris keeping them on the side or something?
I was very happy Brian came and save her.
And how! Damn that man, playing the happy couple seems way too easy for hem... I mean, good job at convincing, but are you guys sure you're still playing? :D
OH! Move on.... "That fateful night one year ago"? Don't think I haven't noticed that one! What happened?! Did her and Brian already had some drunken sex or something? :D I mean, that would totally explain why she "hates" him. If Biran seduced her and she (ofcourse) went with it...But yeah... I think Chris cheating on her with one of those skanks is a more probable story... Tell me... I'm going crazy! :P
Damn, I love Brian in this story... How he just left with her, never hestitating, oh my dear Brian, what are you doing?
The second part of the chapter got me curious for a lot of things, so don't waste your time reading this comment anymore, and go write, I need it!
<3
Soooooo Thanks for the shout out babe! That was very sweet of you!
Back to more important things, this chapter.... It seemed like such an innocent one, but it wasn't really, was it? Such important things happened, even if you tried to be sneaky about it :P
Let's talk about the fact how Brian was completely flabbergasted by Eve, and didn't he seem a little to eager to play the part well?
And how about that slip of the tongue... so Brian always had a thing for Eve, didn't he?! Oh boy oh boy... that man is going down :D
Eve convinced the women, or at least, so it seems... But maybe they just really want to believe her because Brian is such a better guy than that Chris? I kinda have the idea that everyone didn't like Chris and Eve together anyway. They at least seem very protective of Eve too, that is sweet.
So now that I gave you this huge comment, would you fucking please tell us why the hell Eve hates Brian? :P
@Avengedlover Thank you so much!! :)
@DaphneG Thanks! I did! :)
Happy birthday! <3 @Kimmie
Ok I really need both of them to actually fall in love with each other.... I hope they do
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Awwh, Brian makes her weak in the knees :p
Next chapter, asap!!
2/24/17