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Playing With Fire - Comments, page 2

I'm so glad you updated!

rebelteaparty rebelteaparty
1/8/17

Great chapter - Brian and Jimmy make an appearance! But why is Zack been avoiding her for long just to say he doesn't like her? Maybe he does?

Awesome tattoo!

Can't wait for more!

BuiltForSyn BuiltForSyn
12/21/16

I have very mixed feelings about this. Why doesn't he like her? D= meeeh! None the less, I very much enjoyed the chapter. I was just checking yesterday to see if it was updated, so I am super stoked that you updated today. Thank you!

Liera Liera
12/16/16

Oh Zack, just give her a goddamn chance! And your tattoo looks great!!

Holly Holly
12/16/16

Oh man! Poor CJ. That really sucks, but I'm glad he didn't lead her on. Now I'm just curious as to if he's telling her the truth or not. I hope they end up together and not him and Autumn. I don't really like her. Your tattoo looks awesome! Update soon!

alodia7x alodia7x
12/16/16

I feel bad for both CJ and Autumn, I mean I'm kinda glad Zack just straight out said it, but it really hurts when the guy you really like doesn't like you back.......

forREVer-A7X forREVer-A7X
12/16/16

Ha, so I JUST saw that this was on Mibba and was sooo torn on where I wanted to read it and comment on it. But, I thought that if I just stuck with Mibba, I'd again have no reason for even being on here. So, I'll stick with commenting on here, maybe switch it up sometimes xP I feel for Autumn. It's not easy crushing on a guy for years like that. But, if everyone knew she really liked him, then that probably means that so does Zack, which means he's not into her. There's nothing that can be done about that really. I was in a similar situation. My best friend crushed on a guy for awhile and out of the blue, I started to fall for him too. I had no idea that she was even still into him when I had invited him to my 19th bday party. We flirted a lot that night and hooked up not even a month later. Nearly 6 years later, we're still together with a little one :) I think she's actually glad it was me rather than her, because he's such a terd and she easily gets annoyed with him now lolol. Buuut anywaaay, I hope Cailey gets her feelings sorted out soon. I mean, how could she not like Zack? xD I wonder if Zack is okay? :/ I need answers! lol. Thank you for updating. I can't wait for the next one :)

Liera Liera
11/28/16

Great chapter! I feel super bad for Autumn and it kind of makes me not want anything to happen with CJ and Zack... I mean maybe the right guy is out there and CJ needs to use her friendship with Zack to show him he should be with Autumn? Maybe Matt is her guy? Maybe not though... maybe Autumns soul mate is out there? And there's CJ's ex who I bet will show up sometime!! There's so much that could happen, I love this!!

BuiltForSyn BuiltForSyn
11/27/16

These Zacky less chapters are kinda killing me :p

Holly Holly
11/26/16

Awww, I'm a little sad that this chapter didn't actually have Zack in it, but if every chapter had him in it, it wouldn't be too realistic, right? xD I loooove new Zacky stories! Especially since this one is soooo good so far. I just love how you made Zack in this. He is so damn adorable! Ha, anyways, I'm glad she didn't accidentally overdose. Matty needs to stop flirting >.> haha, but he's a great guy. I was so freaking excited to see that this was updated (I know that I said that last time too lol). But surriously (yes, I wanted to spell it that way), I need more D= I'm addicted woman. I've never been addicted to anything in my life! Lol. I'm just getting over being sick, so I'm a little giddy right now. Today was a pretty nerve wrecking day for me, so this definitely cheered me up. I look forward to your next update (seriously, I check almost every day ;) )

Liera Liera
11/23/16

Aw Matt is super nice, almost nicer than Zack! Haha!
Great chapter, would love to read more - I wanna know what Zack and Cailey Jo will say to each other when they next see each other!
I'll look out for your new story, hopefully I'll get round to posting one sometime soon too!

BuiltForSyn BuiltForSyn
11/23/16

Awwh, Matt is so cute! But I was kinda hoping Zack would be in the chapter too. But anyways, great chapter!!
Ohh, you're writing another Zacky story? Can't wait to read it :)

I also started my very first Zacky V story yesterday and I see u already commented on it!

Can't wait for moree!

Holly Holly
11/22/16

I'm glad Zack made the decision he made! I wonder if he was just being a gentleman since she was so drunk of if there's a deeper reason there somewhere! Super excited to read more! Don't work too hard and update soon!

alodia7x alodia7x
11/15/16

Ahhh man, this chapter had me gliding on the clouds---and then I crashed into the ground. Lol. But, it was a fantastic chapter and I am happy none the less. Zack made the right decision I believe. I'm sure if anything were to happen, he'd want it done the right way--the sober way. Lol. I'm awaiting to see how it is between them next. Hopefully he won't shy away and avoid her, cause nothing gets anywhere that way xO I am so freaking excited that you updated! Seriously, I've been checking this every day since I found this story. I hate that you're working 60 hours, cause that takes your time away from us D: Haha, but I totally get it. Hope you can squeeze in another soon :)

Liera Liera
11/14/16

Zack, what is wrong with you?!

Holly Holly
11/14/16

Oh what made Zack stop? Why did he leave? Just what we've all been waiting for and he didn't want it. Something is going on with him because I'm sure he likes CJ!

BuiltForSyn BuiltForSyn
11/14/16

Oh what made Zack stop? Why did he leave? Just what we've all been waiting for and he didn't want it. Something is going on with him because I'm sure he likes CJ!

BuiltForSyn BuiltForSyn
11/14/16

Ugh omg Zacky im going to kick ur ass

forREVer-A7X forREVer-A7X
11/14/16

Ohhh, I am so freaking excited for more updates! I just poked around and decided to give this a try and let me tell you. Instantly hooked. In fact, I stayed up when I have work early in the morning lol. This is so great! I just LOVE her and Zack's relationship. So cute how well they get along <3 Are either her or her brother adopted? You said she's 7 months younger and I noticed there was just no possible way, so I wondered since they have different last names if one of them was adopted. Unless I missed it. But yay! I can't wait for her to be in her little slutty costume, haha! Especially cause I'm more than sure it's the same party Zack is going to show up to xD He's so nice now and I love that about him :) I can't wait to read more. I really love how you're writing this story so far. Please please please update real soon!!! <3

Liera Liera
11/9/16

Oh so much anticipation for the party! Can't wait! And there was a glimpse into a rough past...that may return to haunt CJ? Hmm, love it and can't wait for more!!

BuiltForSyn BuiltForSyn
11/8/16