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Dance as the Sun Slips Away - Comments, page 2
@SynPrincess
I agree completely.......I like Adam a lot, and I believe he should have Penny listen to all that evidence he collected against Gwyn and have Penny listen to it......
What sucks is I like Adam, but if he really wanted to he would find a way to get past Gwyn and tell Penny the truth. Gwyn is right, he's working Penny. Brian should listen to Val.
Gosh I hope alAdam does the right thing. I mean I think he would rather be friends then not she able to see her at all. And I'm kinda hoping one of the other guys woman catch Gwyn and beat her ass.
Can't wait for the next chapter, kinda hoping that Adam will give her up before Gwyn does take it waaaaaay too far, cause then he wouldn't even be with her anyways......like hello Adam wake up she said "griving" husband as in a DEAD wife!!!!
Hi everyone! I love that people read my story!
Wanted to let everyone know that on Sunday I will be correcting some errors that have been driving me crazy and adding the pictures to the first chapters. Since I can't edit a Chapter once it is posted, I pretty much have to post it all again. So if you are a subscriber, you may get multiple notices of new chapters.
I will be posting the next chapter "Can't You Feel the Poison Rising?" on Saturday when all else is done. Thanks!
@mrsmshadz
He's 34 and she's 44, I didn't want to go more than a 10 year age difference. Going farther than that would just be too much. :( Thank you for reading, I hope you continue to and leave your thoughts.
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@forREVer-A7X
Looks like Adam has some skeletons in his past. I'm starting to think he's just as bad as Gwyn. The bad thing they are both getting closer to P and B. Who's going to cheat?
10/5/16