Dance as the Sun Slips Away - Comments

@PrplPeg
Like the ending, waiting for the sequel. I have a hunch, wanna see if I'm right.

I feel so bad for Brian. I hope Penny snaps out of it! Ready for the sequel.

I know that the last chapters went to a pretty dark place. There is a sequel in the works that promises happier times and new adventures. Thank you for reading.

I wish Jimmy wouldn't have stopped Brian!

Gwyn is psychotic! Where the hell is Penny?

Damnit Adam needs to tell everyone the fucking truth. That Gwyn is a fucking backstabbing whore bitch that needs to be put into her place!!!!

Holy shit, I hope Penny kills that bitch!

God i hope one of the guys catch into her soon! Please show us some more good news!

Fucking hell!!!! They new to beat caught before I beat both of their added and throw them in a fucking volcano!!!

Hahaha finally the bitch is busted!!!!

Oh im praying her plan blows up in her fake ass ugly face!

Oh someone better hold me back before i slaughter that bitch, and then Adam......Brian needs to go home early, not telling anyone except for the band.....just as a little surprise to Penny

What the hell is wrong with Brian? How could he let Gwynn talk him out of going to see Penny!
Then he's going to send Jay? This may not be happening if he had been honest with her when they started dating! She might have at least know that Gwynn had a reason to hold a grudge.

Gah, im about to kill Gwyn and a doctor.....hopefully Jay can talk some sense into her before its too late

@A7XLady
I don't think Brian is wrong to be upset, but I see Penny's side too.

The only person not in the wrong is Brian! Gwynn is just a psychotic bitch. Adam tries to act like he's forced into this, but really he wants Penny. As for PENNY, your super hot husband is right no man would put up with that shit. I think Brian is being pretty calm about it. Penny needs to stop using her illness as an excuse.

THESE FUCKING ASSHOLES!!!! IM ABOUT TO KILL HIM AND HER!!!!!!

I was behind and just caught up. My thoughts are that Gwyn is dangerinsane and I think Adam knows it. I don't think Adam wants to tell Penny or Brian, because he wants Penny. I bet Penny falls for it and goes to bed with him.

@SynPrincess
I think Adam will lose his mind about Penny being so depressed and stuff, and finally end up telling her the truth and she ends up telling Brian everything that Gwyn is doing

@prplpeg I like how you keep throwing in the unexpected.