Secured Sevenfold - Comments, page 3

Man I know she's crazy and all but I just can't help but feel sorry for her :( And I think her sisters are really starting to also.

Can't wait to see what happens now that Joseph is there. Family is all together now...
For the most part anyway. Curious to see how Jack and Joe react to him. Have a feeling its not going to start out as one big happy reunion.

Oh and the guys, they were not happy about being ditched. Such a strong bond with the group. You can really see how important everyone is to each other.

Awesome Ladies I Love It <3 Now hurry up I need to see what happens next :)

Oh great Joseph came, so he should have a talk with Joanne!
Hopefully everything will end up on a great note :D hopefully :P

And it was funny how the rest of the guys came back and are pissed at Brian and Matt..I don't blame them, but I don't fully blame these two either! They are their girls and right now they want them back safe and sound, more then anyone else!

Can't wait for more ladies <3

@MoMo_92
Hahahaha! Mo! :D I missed this side of you! <3

@Leyla.lp
Awhhh thanks! You are not so bad yourself either <3

@xSilverPearlx
Awh thanks hun! <3
I or we don't really know yet how it will go between the sisters, those are hard chapters to write and we are kinda putting it off... We are cutting it real close with the chapters at the moment...

@Avenged7X_fan
Let's see how it goes, shall we? <3

R u fucking serious.....these motherfuckin hoes I swear all in their feelings r u fucking kidding me

@MeRi
@Kimmie
congrats for both of u for the hard and amazing work on all those action chapters, hats ooofff my girrlss <3

Tried to comment earlier but my phone and my laptop weren't havin it :/ Can't even remember everything I said....

Oh well I'll just praise Kimmie on this beautiful chapter :)
Yes I read the comments :p
A lot of touching moments in this, and not just with the couples. Its starting to look like all the sisters kind of want to get to know each other.

There was a moment there that I'm sure Jack and Joe genuinely felt sorry for Joanne. Hope they can get past this and actually be a family. Joanne can't be completely nuts right?

Awesome chapter :) Loved it <3

Thanks God it was the guys behind them!! And at least they got to see them, touch them, kiss them.....embrace hope for a while! :) ​But... ​​​​​OH MY GOD the girls want to stay?!?! That is not safe, not at all!!! I don't think that the guards and Joanne will let it go slightly, I think they will agree and make them pay!! :( ​No that is not good!! ​​ ​ ​This was beautifully written ladies!! Well done! :D Loved it

@Leyla.lp
@MeRi

Thank you so much sweeties! <3

@LadyRevenge
Yeah... so close and yet.. they need to let them go again... ;)
Cant make it that easy, can we?!
They need to clear the situation first :)

@Leyla.lp
Awwnnn, Leyla... I wish I could take any credit to the things you wrote there...
But I can't...
This was all Kim's doing, I didnt write a single word on this chapter...
So all that goes straight to my amazing co-author ;)

Oh goddddddddneesss, i read this while listening to coming home and sidewinder and holy shit my deathbats cant stop makin a fuss in my belly now hahahaha
the way u described the guys making the decision, turning around and finally meeting the girls, the way their bodies reacted to their whispers, that was insanely beautiful and breath taking. I wouldve done the same the guys did, if they got thay close, why back out now?? But as brian saiD, the others wouldnt understand what is like to want to take a bullet for the girls. And at the end, of course they would get caught, otherwise it wouldnt be my super double writing this :p haha but the best of being caught was joes attitude. Woow she want to make things right even though she could just want to get the hell out of there and act out. Calling their father and staying was brilliant of them, it couldnt be better girls...
one of my favorite chapters u wrote so far of all stories :D
now that i blabbered enough, im fuckin late to class again, gotta go byebyeee haha

Matt and Brian found them at last! But noo the girls are wanting to stay and have them call Joseph so they can all sit down and talk. I hope Joanne will be civil then let them go once it's all done. If she loses it...well I hope one of the girls will knock her out and put her away into a mental asylum lol.

@Kimmie
i dont wanna be disappointed tomorrow =/ *puppy pouty face*

@Leyla.lp
Don't get your hopes up sweetie, you might get disappointed...

@xSilverPearlx
"..knowing these two its not gonna be that easy"
You are one to speak :P You are always the one with hard storylines! :P

@Avenged7X_fan
Will they be fucked? Or will they be happy?
Let's see tomorrow, shall we?

@Nessa.Christ
You are the only one getting close.... I mean I don't think Mei will mind if I tell you already, it's not a sharks head.. it;s a octupus head... That's all I can say about tomorrow's chapter..

@MoMo_92
Yes, yes... they were...

Goddamn it!!!!! They were so close so fucking close!!!!!

Okay. I'm super busy at work... but... really quick... if only they would have listened to Brian and just waited for a bit, they could have gotten the girls. So Iam hoping that it is one of the guys that grabbed them outside.
If not, it could be this mutant guy with a sharks head who wants their special unicorn blood. But for now he is lonely and would like to have a tea party first before he drains them of all of their magic blood.
Idk... I'm just saying.. Very plausible

Could it be true...but I think it's one of the guys, maybe Matt, Brian, Dean...someone from them! Could it be true?!?! :O Oh I sure hope so!!!

If not, they're fucked! :/ Joanne won't believe another lie if they are caught from the guards!!
Oh damn, I'm dying of curiosity right now <3

Fucking shit, God damn motherfucking, cock suckers.....FUCK!!!

WHY? Why can't they just catch a break?? Damn it now Joanne is going to know they lied to her. So much for earning her trust. Torture, this is pure torture :(

@Leyla.lp
I hope your right, and its Matt and Brian. But knowing these two its not gonna be that easy :/

Aaaaahhh man man maaaan its matt, its brian, its them im pretty sureeeee they followed bris instincts, fuuuck this endddd made me breathless, i felt my throat chokin i mean it woow hahaha ITS THEEEM!!!!! I can feel itt!!!
the girls Fighting oh god that was awesooome, well they had the best teachers right? :p
gaah pure adrenaline :33 thank u for that! ;**

@Avenged7X_fan
@xSilverPearlx
@Leyla.lp
@LadyRevenge

Thank you so much for the nice comments!
It´s funny you guys are talking about the planning... we normally plan much further ahead, now we are lucky if me make it one week up front :D

I love their little plans on trying to take out the guard! So interesting. That guard is a total dick. Joanne relax, they won't betray your trust...yet lol. -le gasp- Who finally found them and grabbed Joe?! I hope it's not one of the guards again. That would suck if it is. Soo close...